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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Waiting For You...






I wish it didn't
scare you so,
when I reach out
to let you know
that my heart is
dedicated and true
to spending my
whole life with you.
I wish I could show you
with a tender touch
that I've never wanted
anything so much.
I wish there was a way
to make you see
just how much
you mean to me.
From the start,
you held a special place
in my heart,
and now I'm waiting
for my life to begin,
hoping you'll
let my love in
.


Trapped Within

Trapped within,
Trapped inside,
Trapped in this heart,
This heart of yours,
Trapped inside your soul,
Never wanting to break free,
Trapped my darling,
Into what is you and me,
This dream,
This hope,
This belief,
This love,
Trapped my darling,
Trapped by your love,
Trapped by the depth,
Of our beauty,
Of our forever,
Of our hopes,
Of our love for each other,
I am trapped here,
Not wanting to break free,
Only wanting,
Only needing,
Only seeing,
What is here by me,
Standing with you,
Holding you to me,
Holding you close,
Never letting go,
Never giving up,
Never letting anything defeat us,
Never letting anyone to come between us,
Trapped within,
Trapped by your arms,
As you hold me tight,
Hold me close,
Hold me as you stroke,
My hair,
My face,
Looking deep into my eyes,
Looking to the depth of my soul,
Looking deep,
Showing me the love,
Within the very depth,
The depth of you,
I am trapped,
Trapped by this love,
Never,
Never wanting a release,
Only wanting to be here,
Here with you,
Forever.


 
fascinating update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn


Broken Promises

Am I your only lover?

I ask you over and over.

I always get the same answer;

You Pirouette around it like a dancer.

With your voice as rough as can be,

You lean in, whispering, "Kiss me."

You say you're mine to keep,

That you would never let me weep.

Each word you ever spoke,

Seemed sweet until I woke.

All were drenched with hideous deception,

I thought you were the only exception.

You said we'd be forever,

I guess you figured I wasn't all that clever.

You believed you could play me like a fool,

Don't you know I'm not a tool?

You fed me promises of love,

Calling me your, "beautiful dove".

Sweetening your lies with smiles and laughter,

I once thought you were my "happily ever after".

Now as you turn away,

My feelings left astray,

I can't help but sit and cry

Over the promises you let die
.


Edited by simi91 - 12 March 2011 at 11:05pm

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
awesome.wonderful one!
as u have said tat the confusion will be cleared soon,will be waiting for it!!
gr8 update!!!

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
loved it.....there is so much pain in maan and geets love story....if this would have happened to me i would have died untill now....but geet is such a strong woman and mother...she has handled her life so well.....update soon

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
When this paine will end I heat this Paine for both maan and geet it's hurt badly

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
awesome n nice update

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
O God! the pain, MAANs n GEETs pain.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Plz update soon.

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
great part.
sometimes i hate dadi.LOL
cant she leave maan alone.

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
For d first tym i love to see Maan in pain.... I hate sameera.. I hate his daadi.... He deserve dis pain... Poem was really good although i hate to read peoms but really it was good....

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