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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp

Muskan waiting for the updates...
where is mini ..tm team..

thanks dear
 IF we continue here then this thread finish quickly and we r chatted here so
but we will post the mini tm here.
we will come later tonight ,

 we opened a page maaneet express
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1633944
every one welcome there.
love u lots.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 10 March 2011 at 10:20am

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
we will posting mini tm here but continue our chat maaneet express
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1633944
cause here if we continue our random chat then mod will give warning us.
I'm posting next part within 5mins

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muski update soon........ waiting waiting.........Day DreamingDay Dreaming impatiently.......
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Next Part:-


Geet goes towards cupboard and then turns towards maan.

Maan is waiting for geet to come near but instead he recve something on his face.

Maan noticed it's his shirt and geet tunrs and said mein bahar wait kar rehi hoon.

Maan:- ummm then said geet, tum iye pehen ke jaoge.

Geet:-ummm.

Maan:-but ,if u wear saree iya suit

Geet closed her eyes and said I don't have any suits.

Maan:-but ,,, tab tak geet left the room

Maan thinks but she wore saree iya suits 'iye bhi chor dia geet ne.

Maan closed his eyes and said oh God meine kya kya''.

After some three of them left the km and  dadi seen them.

Dadi looks at maan who is very happy with geet and mk,

Mk daughter of her maan. She looks at mk and feel affection towards the little angel

Three of them reached  at  handa haveli , whole way maan and mk keep talking and geet thinks dono baap , beti ka baat kabhi khatam hi nehi hota hain.

They knocked the door and rano opened it.

next part:-

 

Next:-

They knocked the door and rano opened it.

Rano looked happy to see three of together.

Mk :--na..nni'

Rano take her in her arms and kissed her and ha meri pari.

Then to maaneet , come here beta.

Maan at, first feel un easy but when geet look at him and rano said forget all things beta, start from the beginning .

 

Maan nodded but geet looks lost.

Both enter the haveli when mk asked:-wh'er..e'is'na'na'.

Rano :-oh rajjy ka result aaraha hain so.

Geet looks delighted then again lost but maan notice it.

Mk:- nan'ni'mas'shi'went to sc'hool'.

Rano:- took her in her lap and said no beta, she went to university , another biiiiiigggg school .

Mk claps and said wa'h'.I'll 'al..so.go  then looks at her papa.

Maan nodded in yes.

Rano noticed geet looks lost and said ok mere pari, aap thori der aapne dadda ke sath baitho mein thori der mein aati hoon.

Mk nodded and gladly went to her dadda's lap.

Rano take geet with her.

Maan know if rano can do but then thinks it's all his fault and he should make up for it.

Here mk looks at maan and then pull his shirt and said da..dda..

Maan :-ummm

Mk:-da'dd..a.

Maan:-nolo sweet heart.

Mk just giggles and stand on maan's lap and kissed his face and then said ph..ir'se'bo..lo'

Maan smiles and said my sweet heart'

Mk again giggles''.

Next:-

Here in side the kitchen rano said :- kya hua geet?maan iya koi kuch kaha , kyat um khush nehi ho, tum toh iye kab se chathi thi.

Geet just stand silent there then said we r happy.

Rano:- beta,I asked u about ur  happiness.

 Geet just said we r happy.

Rano seen geet is there but  looks lost but some happiness visible when maan-mk playing together and stay together.

Both of them come out from the kitchen and rano served them snack cause mk want to eat outside today and papa je and rajjy also not here. So they will come again.

Maan feed mk and geet see it and happy and weakly smiles at them.

Rano noticed maan also looks sad but when he with geet and mk , he looks happy but something is still missing there.

Rano looks at maan and called him.

Maan give  mk to geet and go from there.

Rano told maan about  the incident in kitchen and what she noticed today about geet.

Maan :-I know mama and Ill defo do something .I .. it's my fault mama, but trust me this time also I'll bring her back.

Rano hold his hands and said I trust u beta.

Maan's eyes fill with tears and think how could they still trust him.

Geet, mk hugged rano and maan promised her they will come again and have their dinner here.

At the way , maan thinks hwo to bring back his old geet,bubbly geet?

After they return, geet asked kya baat kar rehe the app mama se.

Maan smiles and said ma –bete ke personal baat tumhe kyuon  batau.

 


spoilers for coming parts

maan will meet a deadly accident
will he survive
if yes then what will happen and how will it effect on geet and mk.







Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 10 March 2011 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
congratz for new thread.... :) fab update...
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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
updated mini tm's today's part 1 and more will come and I'll post only on this page.........
cause we r chatting here random and I feared mod will warn us.



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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Mk again giggles''.



spoilers for coming parts

maan will meet a deadly accident
will he survive
if yes then what will happen and how will effect on geet and mk.


I'll post rest parts also here.

Wonderful update...oh no...Maan and deadly accident...nothing will happen for sure...but will help geet to come out of her shell...Smile

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