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Originally posted by komlika

Rakhi.... Me too I'm still trying to figure out whts wrong with this man

he himself dosen't knw,den how come we.poor readers knw.

if anyone knws its muki di.......so we want to wait for update!!

plz di one more update...............we are not asking more just one more for today!!!!

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Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 
Brilliant part. Loved it.

 Maan realized geet is not sleeping properly..

Geet is concern about their daughter .

But loved the way maan try to comfort geet .

Geet was restless at 5.30 a.m. previous 7yrs

Both r restless and both r in each other arms after long time.

After long more than 7yrs geet sleep in peace at 5.30 cause she is in arms of her love, her  soul, her maan. With maan she feels contents, relax. Even in the sleep maan also close to her.both r craving, longing for each other  and after more than7yrs , both together , yes  still lots of things to be cleared but still they r together .

Aww sweet mk want to sleep with her parents , such a cute scene.

 

Loved this whole part. Best part

 

 

7.00am both of them woke up to an angry little two eyes staring at them both, dressed in her school unform. mk had frown & big face. Geet smiled seeing her annoyed, she exactly knew why she was creating such a fuss. Maan got conscious & straighten himself. Mk made her way between both of them... mujhe bhi so..so....so....so....so......na hain.. dona ke saat
Geet moved a little & tucked her between them & cuddled back into maan's arms.
They felt so complete. Maan was finding it all so perfect.. but did he deserve it !!!
mk.. kissed his cheek..ha...ha...ha...ha...ha...ppy...ha...ppy...ba..ba..ba..ba..ba..
Geet kissed her...happy birthday sweet heart..
Maan smiled... & repeated happy birthday!!! thanxs sweeto
mk - ba..ba.....th...pa...rty??
Maan looked at Geet
Geet - birthday party
Maan - sure darling.. we shall have a blast after ur school..
mk was thrilled
Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this. She had a quick shower & dressed up, while mk & Maan played few games sitting in the hall.

 

Maan & mk had their breakfast.. nanny had made everything according to maan's which was eventually mk's fav too. Everyone knew it was a special day today. Geet had already given mk all the gifts last evening before going for the engagement party saying it was given by Maan. Mk's fav out of all was the video game. She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

Before going into the class she kissed Maan again
Maan - I will pick u for the party sweetheart
she smiled & ran to her class.

 

But I guess maan misunderstood geet's birthday wish and thinks it's for him only. Don't think it's for their daughter mk also.

 

 

Loved this part . this part is so emotional. How a mothers helpless , how  amother see her child wants her dad , craving for him, longing for him ''..

Geet should scold maan.

 

Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this.

 

Aww father 'daughter like same food.

 

 

Loved this part. Mk is super happy to play with her father.

 

 

She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

But then everything ruined. A beautiful day which is start beautifully but ruined from now

Ok let me think and know dadi wants maan's happiness but can't she see or noticed how maan become angry, sad and hurt after hearing his marriage with any one except geet.

Can't she see or noticed how maan hurt, sad and angry after hearing geet moved on in her life but still knowingly or unknowingly dadi reopened  those wounds of maan regularly.

 Y she can't close her mouth for some time. At least let him stay in peace just for one day but what we can expect from a khurana.

 Maan needs time, yes she give him time but that time geet is not with him now after geet return ,now maan need understand the situation , maan also want to understand the situation.

 When maan seen last few days geet closely  and may be he will rethink  , sply after that kiss from geet, but  dadi spoiled it by seeding wrong thing in his head.

Even, I remembered before also dadi , first seeded the thing geet moved on.

Yes maan at fault also. But maan is vulnerable condition after this separation and always confused souls. But dadi make him more confused.

 Can she understand if she will do something forcefully then everything will fails and spl maan will do something or happen something worse.

Even dev can see maan is happy and want to see his bro happy and want to give him time but dadi being dadi , after dev told her she stop either way she want to continue .

Sameera , sameera, jaise sameera ka bhoot sar pe sawar ho gayi hain dadi ka.

Some time something have to released  on time . Don't force everything. Yes dadi wants to see him happy but still don't know what is his really happiness.

She doesn't know her own grandson and his happiness.

 

Maan picked all kids and arranged a party but mk will more happy if she is alone with her parents only. Then later come all kids.

Mk need only her parents together and happy with her.

Maan misunderstood her and do a BIG MISTAKE again.

Now geet will scold him

Yes geet should scold him and knock some senses in his head.

Like I told earlier in of my post here, a wife can forgive her hubby  but a mother can't.

now maan have to face a mother.

He needs it. Some one shook him hard and only geet can do it.

Man need to understand others feeling, he need to attend ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASS.

Itna gussa accha nehi hain kisi ke liye aur khud ke liye bhi.

Hope maan will make it up .

Mk needs to spend this birthday with her parents and be happy.

Update soon.

 




Rightly said rakhi he has just seen geet as wife, friend, luver.  But now he is going to see new avtar of geet thats as mother as a wife she can forgive him every thing done but as a mother she will never forgive him especially when he has yet not been a responsible father till now.
yaar Geet doesn't even realized that he is not aware of mk as his daughter as Geet had not even informed him about her pregnancy. Yes, he was wrong but what was his mistake if he is not aware of pregnancy? How on the earth he can assume a girl who was scared & cried to even see small child would have given birth to a baby all alone. All of us are more sympathetic to geet and are thinking because of him, she had to undergo so much of hardship. Did we ever thought he was deprived of the joy of his fatherhood, how he wanted his own kid, how he would have thrilled to hold his pari in his hands when she was born. he would have brought the heaven to earth to satisfy his baby.
 
Both have their share of mistakes and misfortunes. lets us hope that they will bury their stubborness & anger deep down and bridge the relation with new hopes and promises. Geet has to take initiative in letting him know about his daughter and her mindset. until then jr. mk will ahve to have the heartache that her dada doesn't concentrate on her.
 
Just think how bad she felt as no one wished her on her birthday? She was so hopeful that she has her father with her to celebrate her BD but unfortunate is that neither he knew her Bd not her mother made any progress to inform him in adavnce that it is her BD as well. Just by keeping tightlipped will not help mk gain her fathers love and shelter.
 
Please Muskan, let Geet shout on him in her frustration that he never was their for them as he promissed earlier. neither when mk born nor on her BD. She shout that he was neither a best husband not a best father. Atleast then he will realize he has not lost his life and his love his alone.
 
pleaseeeeeeee Muskan, will give you a bear Hug, if you put some sense in Geets head to reveal the truth about mk.
 
love you
Jaya

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why does maan always end up shouting
he seriously needs to control his temper
n why did mk leave the party??

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Originally posted by deejagi

Originally posted by heermeher

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 
Brilliant part. Loved it.

 Maan realized geet is not sleeping properly..

Geet is concern about their daughter .

But loved the way maan try to comfort geet .

Geet was restless at 5.30 a.m. previous 7yrs

Both r restless and both r in each other arms after long time.

After long more than 7yrs geet sleep in peace at 5.30 cause she is in arms of her love, her  soul, her maan. With maan she feels contents, relax. Even in the sleep maan also close to her.both r craving, longing for each other  and after more than7yrs , both together , yes  still lots of things to be cleared but still they r together .

Aww sweet mk want to sleep with her parents , such a cute scene.

 

Loved this whole part. Best part

 

 

7.00am both of them woke up to an angry little two eyes staring at them both, dressed in her school unform. mk had frown & big face. Geet smiled seeing her annoyed, she exactly knew why she was creating such a fuss. Maan got conscious & straighten himself. Mk made her way between both of them... mujhe bhi so..so....so....so....so......na hain.. dona ke saat
Geet moved a little & tucked her between them & cuddled back into maan's arms.
They felt so complete. Maan was finding it all so perfect.. but did he deserve it !!!
mk.. kissed his cheek..ha...ha...ha...ha...ha...ppy...ha...ppy...ba..ba..ba..ba..ba..
Geet kissed her...happy birthday sweet heart..
Maan smiled... & repeated happy birthday!!! thanxs sweeto
mk - ba..ba.....th...pa...rty??
Maan looked at Geet
Geet - birthday party
Maan - sure darling.. we shall have a blast after ur school..
mk was thrilled
Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this. She had a quick shower & dressed up, while mk & Maan played few games sitting in the hall.

 

Maan & mk had their breakfast.. nanny had made everything according to maan's which was eventually mk's fav too. Everyone knew it was a special day today. Geet had already given mk all the gifts last evening before going for the engagement party saying it was given by Maan. Mk's fav out of all was the video game. She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

Before going into the class she kissed Maan again
Maan - I will pick u for the party sweetheart
she smiled & ran to her class.

 

But I guess maan misunderstood geet's birthday wish and thinks it's for him only. Don't think it's for their daughter mk also.

 

 

Loved this part . this part is so emotional. How a mothers helpless , how  amother see her child wants her dad , craving for him, longing for him ''..

Geet should scold maan.

 

Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this.

 

Aww father 'daughter like same food.

 

 

Loved this part. Mk is super happy to play with her father.

 

 

She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

But then everything ruined. A beautiful day which is start beautifully but ruined from now

Ok let me think and know dadi wants maan's happiness but can't she see or noticed how maan become angry, sad and hurt after hearing his marriage with any one except geet.

Can't she see or noticed how maan hurt, sad and angry after hearing geet moved on in her life but still knowingly or unknowingly dadi reopened  those wounds of maan regularly.

 Y she can't close her mouth for some time. At least let him stay in peace just for one day but what we can expect from a khurana.

 Maan needs time, yes she give him time but that time geet is not with him now after geet return ,now maan need understand the situation , maan also want to understand the situation.

 When maan seen last few days geet closely  and may be he will rethink  , sply after that kiss from geet, but  dadi spoiled it by seeding wrong thing in his head.

Even, I remembered before also dadi , first seeded the thing geet moved on.

Yes maan at fault also. But maan is vulnerable condition after this separation and always confused souls. But dadi make him more confused.

 Can she understand if she will do something forcefully then everything will fails and spl maan will do something or happen something worse.

Even dev can see maan is happy and want to see his bro happy and want to give him time but dadi being dadi , after dev told her she stop either way she want to continue .

Sameera , sameera, jaise sameera ka bhoot sar pe sawar ho gayi hain dadi ka.

Some time something have to released  on time . Don't force everything. Yes dadi wants to see him happy but still don't know what is his really happiness.

She doesn't know her own grandson and his happiness.

 

Maan picked all kids and arranged a party but mk will more happy if she is alone with her parents only. Then later come all kids.

Mk need only her parents together and happy with her.

Maan misunderstood her and do a BIG MISTAKE again.

Now geet will scold him

Yes geet should scold him and knock some senses in his head.

Like I told earlier in of my post here, a wife can forgive her hubby  but a mother can't.

now maan have to face a mother.

He needs it. Some one shook him hard and only geet can do it.

Man need to understand others feeling, he need to attend ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASS.

Itna gussa accha nehi hain kisi ke liye aur khud ke liye bhi.

Hope maan will make it up .

Mk needs to spend this birthday with her parents and be happy.

Update soon.

 




Rightly said rakhi he has just seen geet as wife, friend, luver.  But now he is going to see new avtar of geet thats as mother as a wife she can forgive him every thing done but as a mother she will never forgive him especially when he has yet not been a responsible father till now.
yaar Geet doesn't even realized that he is not aware of mk as his daughter as Geet had not even informed him about her pregnancy. Yes, he was wrong but what was his mistake if he is not aware of pregnancy? How on the earth he can assume a girl who was scared & cried to even see small child would have given birth to a baby all alone. All of us are more sympathetic to geet and are thinking because of him, she had to undergo so much of hardship. Did we ever thought he was deprived of the joy of his fatherhood, how he wanted his own kid, how he would have thrilled to hold his pari in his hands when she was born. he would have brought the heaven to earth to satisfy his baby.
 
Both have their share of mistakes and misfortunes. lets us hope that they will bury their stubborness & anger deep down and bridge the relation with new hopes and promises. Geet has to take initiative in letting him know about his daughter and her mindset. until then jr. mk will ahve to have the heartache that her dada doesn't concentrate on her.
 
Just think how bad she felt as no one wished her on her birthday? She was so hopeful that she has her father with her to celebrate her BD but unfortunate is that neither he knew her Bd not her mother made any progress to inform him in adavnce that it is her BD as well. Just by keeping tightlipped will not help mk gain her fathers love and shelter.
 
Please Muskan, let Geet shout on him in her frustration that he never was their for them as he promissed earlier. neither when mk born nor on her BD. She shout that he was neither a best husband not a best father. Atleast then he will realize he has not lost his life and his love his alone.
 
pleaseeeeeeee Muskan, will give you a bear Hug, if you put some sense in Geets head to reveal the truth about mk.
 
love you
Jaya


dear  agree with ur all point .
I'm trying to read tm as a neutral reader who can understand maaneet both.
 as here most of readers r think only geet's side.
actualy. my point is who is mk think later but maan shouldn't scare little girl.
he is missed all those precious moments and now he is frustrated to think that geet is moved on but in reality geet is still waiting for him.
anyway, u r correct , we can't assume maan will know mk's birthday .
i would say there separation is happen due to bad luck and less communication, anger, ego, stubbornness.
but now jr  mk is suffering.
jr mk needed her parents love , she will happy if her parents stay together with her like her birthday morning.
but now it's high time maan should know about his daughter.
waiting to maaneet reunion  and maan know about his daughter


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@muski I differ again Dadi is at fault, ok let assume dadi want to see her gandson happy but is real she know what is his really happiness
A BIG NO. dadi don't know what is maan happiness

Ok let me think and know dadi wants maan's happiness but can't she see or noticed how maan become angry, sad and hurt after hearing his marriage with any one except geet.

Can't she see or noticed how maan hurt, sad and angry after hearing geet moved on in her life but still knowingly or unknowingly dadi reopened  those wounds of maan regularly.

 Y she can't close her mouth for some time. At least let him stay in peace just for one day but what we can expect from a khurana.

 Maan needs time, yes she give him time but that time geet is not with him now after geet return ,now maan need understand the situation , maan also want to understand the situation.

 When maan seen last few days geet closely  and may be he will rethink  , sply after that kiss from geet, but  dadi spoiled it by seeding wrong thing in his head.

Even, I remembered before also dadi , first seeded the thing geet moved on.

Yes maan at fault also. But maan is vulnerable condition after this separation and always confused souls. But dadi make him more confused.

 Can she understand if she will do something forcefully then everything will fails and spl maan will do something or happen something worse.

Even dev can see maan is happy and want to see his bro happy and want to give him time but dadi being dadi , after dev told her she stop either way she want to continue .

Sameera , sameera, jaise sameera ka bhoot sar pe sawar ho gayi hain dadi ka.

Some time something have to released  on time . Don't force everything. Yes dadi wants to see him happy but still don't know what is his really happiness.

She doesn't know her own grandson and his happiness.

 

For me may be indirectly but dadi don't know maan's happiness.
 u r happy with dev but don't think dev understand maan well than dadi.

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dimpzz

why does maan always end up shouting
he seriously needs to control his temper
n why did mk leave the party??
 
mk left the party because no one wished her on her birthday and she didn't even cut her cake. Her mother wa snot with her during the party. What else a small kid do than cry when she doesn't  even get attention on her own birthday. here we need to blame Geet and Geet only. Only if she were present at the venue (true, he didn't call her but it is her daughter's & husband's birthday & she was supposed to be there with them as an integral part of the family. maan lost temper because he did all those arrangements just to keep her happy but she didn't even enjoyed it rather left abruptly. She was the one who asked for the party and she left it without giving reasons.
 
Jaya

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