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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged

 
Brilliant part. Loved it.

 Maan realized geet is not sleeping properly..

Geet is concern about their daughter .

But loved the way maan try to comfort geet .

Geet was restless at 5.30 a.m. previous 7yrs

Both r restless and both r in each other arms after long time.

After long more than 7yrs geet sleep in peace at 5.30 cause she is in arms of her love, her  soul, her maan. With maan she feels contents, relax. Even in the sleep maan also close to her.both r craving, longing for each other  and after more than7yrs , both together , yes  still lots of things to be cleared but still they r together .

Aww sweet mk want to sleep with her parents , such a cute scene.

 

Loved this whole part. Best part

 

 

7.00am both of them woke up to an angry little two eyes staring at them both, dressed in her school unform. mk had frown & big face. Geet smiled seeing her annoyed, she exactly knew why she was creating such a fuss. Maan got conscious & straighten himself. Mk made her way between both of them... mujhe bhi so..so....so....so....so......na hain.. dona ke saat
Geet moved a little & tucked her between them & cuddled back into maan's arms.
They felt so complete. Maan was finding it all so perfect.. but did he deserve it !!!
mk.. kissed his cheek..ha...ha...ha...ha...ha...ppy...ha...ppy...ba..ba..ba..ba..ba..
Geet kissed her...happy birthday sweet heart..
Maan smiled... & repeated happy birthday!!! thanxs sweeto
mk - ba..ba.....th...pa...rty??
Maan looked at Geet
Geet - birthday party
Maan - sure darling.. we shall have a blast after ur school..
mk was thrilled
Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this. She had a quick shower & dressed up, while mk & Maan played few games sitting in the hall.

 

Maan & mk had their breakfast.. nanny had made everything according to maan's which was eventually mk's fav too. Everyone knew it was a special day today. Geet had already given mk all the gifts last evening before going for the engagement party saying it was given by Maan. Mk's fav out of all was the video game. She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

Before going into the class she kissed Maan again
Maan - I will pick u for the party sweetheart
she smiled & ran to her class.

 

But I guess maan misunderstood geet's birthday wish and thinks it's for him only. Don't think it's for their daughter mk also.

 

 

Loved this part . this part is so emotional. How a mothers helpless , how  amother see her child wants her dad , craving for him, longing for him ''..

Geet should scold maan.

 

Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this.

 

Aww father 'daughter like same food.

 

 

Loved this part. Mk is super happy to play with her father.

 

 

She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

But then everything ruined. A beautiful day which is start beautifully but ruined from now

Ok let me think and know dadi wants maan's happiness but can't she see or noticed how maan become angry, sad and hurt after hearing his marriage with any one except geet.

Can't she see or noticed how maan hurt, sad and angry after hearing geet moved on in her life but still knowingly or unknowingly dadi reopened  those wounds of maan regularly.

 Y she can't close her mouth for some time. At least let him stay in peace just for one day but what we can expect from a khurana.

 Maan needs time, yes she give him time but that time geet is not with him now after geet return ,now maan need understand the situation , maan also want to understand the situation.

 When maan seen last few days geet closely  and may be he will rethink  , sply after that kiss from geet, but  dadi spoiled it by seeding wrong thing in his head.

Even, I remembered before also dadi , first seeded the thing geet moved on.

Yes maan at fault also. But maan is vulnerable condition after this separation and always confused souls. But dadi make him more confused.

 Can she understand if she will do something forcefully then everything will fails and spl maan will do something or happen something worse.

Even dev can see maan is happy and want to see his bro happy and want to give him time but dadi being dadi , after dev told her she stop either way she want to continue .

Sameera , sameera, jaise sameera ka bhoot sar pe sawar ho gayi hain dadi ka.

Some time something have to released  on time . Don't force everything. Yes dadi wants to see him happy but still don't know what is his really happiness.

She doesn't know her own grandson and his happiness.

 

Maan picked all kids and arranged a party but mk will more happy if she is alone with her parents only. Then later come all kids.

Mk need only her parents together and happy with her.

Maan misunderstood her and do a BIG MISTAKE again.

Now geet will scold him

Yes geet should scold him and knock some senses in his head.

Like I told earlier in of my post here, a wife can forgive her hubby  but a mother can't.

now maan have to face a mother.

He needs it. Some one shook him hard and only geet can do it.

Man need to understand others feeling, he need to attend ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASS.

Itna gussa accha nehi hain kisi ke liye aur khud ke liye bhi.

Hope maan will make it up .

Mk needs to spend this birthday with her parents and be happy.

Update soon.

 




Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 March 2011 at 11:59pm

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ab toh please maaneet ko mila do........i can't wait 2 see them togethere again..............please.......

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Superb update can't wait please update one more mann deserve scolding from geet tab jakar shayad uski akal thikane aaye i want geet to tell mann husband ka farz to nahin nibhaya kam se kam ek acha dad to ban sakthe theh mann needs to know MK is his daughter geet needs to tell him he needs to be out of his thought that geet has moved on. I hate dadi she is so stupid........

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged

1st part is so nice.... all 3 cuddle up

MK is not khush.... why.... cz of geet or something else.... but wht ..... i cant understand

somthing missing ... or like its incomlete...
 
need a fast update..... 4 filling this one.....

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Mk missing geet?

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

 
Brilliant part. Loved it.

 Maan realized geet is not sleeping properly..

Geet is concern about their daughter .

But loved the way maan try to comfort geet .

Geet was restless at 5.30 a.m. previous 7yrs

Both r restless and both r in each other arms after long time.

After long more than 7yrs geet sleep in peace at 5.30 cause she is in arms of her love, her  soul, her maan. With maan she feels contents, relax. Even in the sleep maan also close to her.both r craving, longing for each other  and after more than7yrs , both together , yes  still lots of things to be cleared but still they r together .

Aww sweet mk want to sleep with her parents , such a cute scene.

 

Loved this whole part. Best part

 

 

7.00am both of them woke up to an angry little two eyes staring at them both, dressed in her school unform. mk had frown & big face. Geet smiled seeing her annoyed, she exactly knew why she was creating such a fuss. Maan got conscious & straighten himself. Mk made her way between both of them... mujhe bhi so..so....so....so....so......na hain.. dona ke saat
Geet moved a little & tucked her between them & cuddled back into maan's arms.
They felt so complete. Maan was finding it all so perfect.. but did he deserve it !!!
mk.. kissed his cheek..ha...ha...ha...ha...ha...ppy...ha...ppy...ba..ba..ba..ba..ba..
Geet kissed her...happy birthday sweet heart..
Maan smiled... & repeated happy birthday!!! thanxs sweeto
mk - ba..ba.....th...pa...rty??
Maan looked at Geet
Geet - birthday party
Maan - sure darling.. we shall have a blast after ur school..
mk was thrilled
Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this. She had a quick shower & dressed up, while mk & Maan played few games sitting in the hall.

 

Maan & mk had their breakfast.. nanny had made everything according to maan's which was eventually mk's fav too. Everyone knew it was a special day today. Geet had already given mk all the gifts last evening before going for the engagement party saying it was given by Maan. Mk's fav out of all was the video game. She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

Before going into the class she kissed Maan again
Maan - I will pick u for the party sweetheart
she smiled & ran to her class.

 

But I guess maan misunderstood geet's birthday wish and thinks it's for him only. Don't think it's for their daughter mk also.

 

 

Loved this part . this part is so emotional. How a mothers helpless , how  amother see her child wants her dad , craving for him, longing for him ''..

Geet should scold maan.

 

Maan - so wat do u want to do..
she hugged him tightly around his neck & cried da da '.. tears fell from her eyes getting too emotional. Geet felt emotional..seeing her little angel so much longing for Maan - she wants celebrate the birthday with u..she couldn't even complete & left from there to the wash room. She punched her hand on the wall..she hated herself, she hated Maan as a father.. why couldn't he just be there for mk. She was getting angry & annoyed seeing mk like this.

 

Aww father 'daughter like same food.

 

 

Loved this part. Mk is super happy to play with her father.

 

 

She ran to the bedroom picked the game & told Maan to play with her now.
Geet - abhi nahi beta ..school ke liya late hojayega
mk nahi abhi
Geet - MK
Maan - aaj ke din use mat danto na please.. kitna der lagega, just one game
Geet leaves from there to get mk's school bag. Maan opens the game & carefully reads the instruction & teaches her to play the game. It was 8am they were still stuck..at one more game.. one more ...
Geet - time up
Maan - yeh last wali hain
Geet uff.. kept looking at them standing there crossing her arms.
Maan - last paka
8.35am they mk finally won the game both of them shouted loud...yes..yes... & hugged each other.
Geet - aab challen
Maan carried mk & sat in the car with Geet. 

 

But then everything ruined. A beautiful day which is start beautifully but ruined from now

Ok let me think and know dadi wants maan's happiness but can't she see or noticed how maan become angry, sad and hurt after hearing his marriage with any one except geet.

Can't she see or noticed how maan hurt, sad and angry after hearing geet moved on in her life but still knowingly or unknowingly dadi reopened  those wounds of maan regularly.

 Y she can't close her mouth for some time. At least let him stay in peace just for one day but what we can expect from a khurana.

 Maan needs time, yes she give him time but that time geet is not with him now after geet return ,now maan need understand the situation , maan also want to understand the situation.

 When maan seen last few days geet closely  and may be he will rethink  , sply after that kiss from geet, but  dadi spoiled it by seeding wrong thing in his head.

Even, I remembered before also dadi , first seeded the thing geet moved on.

Yes maan at fault also. But maan is vulnerable condition after this separation and always confused souls. But dadi make him more confused.

 Can she understand if she will do something forcefully then everything will fails and spl maan will do something or happen something worse.

Even dev can see maan is happy and want to see his bro happy and want to give him time but dadi being dadi , after dev told her she stop either way she want to continue .

Sameera , sameera, jaise sameera ka bhoot sar pe sawar ho gayi hain dadi ka.

Some time something have to released  on time . Don't force everything. Yes dadi wants to see him happy but still don't know what is his really happiness.

She doesn't know her own grandson and his happiness.

 

Maan picked all kids and arranged a party but mk will more happy if she is alone with her parents only. Then later come all kids.

Mk need only her parents together and happy with her.

Maan misunderstood her and do a BIG MISTAKE again.

Now geet will scold him

Yes geet should scold him and knock some senses in his head.

Like I told earlier in of my post here, a wife can forgive her hubby  but a mother can't.

now maan have to face a mother.

He needs it. Some one shook him hard and only geet can do it.

Man need to understand others feeling, he need to attend ANGER MANAGEMENT CLASS.

Itna gussa accha nehi hain kisi ke liye aur khud ke liye bhi.

Hope maan will make it up .

Mk needs to spend this birthday with her parents and be happy.

Update soon.

 




Rightly said rakhi he has just seen geet as wife, friend, luver.  But now he is going to see new avtar of geet thats as mother as a wife she can forgive him every thing done but as a mother she will never forgive him especially when he has yet not been a responsible father till now.

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Originally posted by heermeher

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Rightly said rakhi he has just seen geet as wife, friend, luver.  But now he is going to see new avtar of geet thats as mother as a wife she can forgive him every thing done but as a mother she will never forgive him especially when he has yet not been a responsible father till now.

yes, even it's needed for maan.some one have to shook him , some one have to give him sense .
maan's thinking about geet moved have to change,

right now he needs scolding and knwo that his geet is still waiting for him and mk is his daughter.



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 March 2011 at 12:48am

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