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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Di!...it was amazing!!...
 
ps - wat is GMKB?? (ur signature!)

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei simi,
i was just abt to ask u when r u updating..i thought abt it n u updated..u r a sweetheart..mmmwwaaa..
i have to prepare to take class..however i cant resist reading..so i'll leave comments later..

*edited*
before u did all the coloring effects i started reading..after seeing it with colours those lines got more beautiful..sitting relaxedly reading it again n i'm commenting now..
first of all thanks for giving this as a single part...as asked u really made it very special simi..mmwwaaa..HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug
palak will never miss a chance to tease her sis khanak..the choice of songs so apt for khanak's situation..
Shaan thinking abt Miss.KISSMISS..so shaan..i so wish instead of a casino sunil would accept to help in some manner for khanak's charity hospital..
khanak's realization  "she accepted what she had refused to admit so far, that she felt something very close to love for Shantanu" is simply superb..finally she accepted it to herself..
khanak expecting shaan to send an SMS ..so nice..after all she admitted to herself how she felt abt shaan..
The invitation for megha's b'day party was nice n megha's note too simply cute like her..a fairy tale b'day party..khanak dressed up like an angel..shaan's SMS is just killing right at the time when its most needed..
Every one waiting for khank's arrival in K-house..cutie pie megha missed her doc aunty n she started crying..oh cutie pie..ur doc aunty reached u on time..kushboo's change in behaviour is just adorable..should thank khanak for making her realising abt precious megha..wow the teddy is so close to megha that she feels that is her best gift..
puppet show by her dear chachu uncle n doc aunty..awww..(how can one die multiple times?if we read something like this we can...Wink)picturised the whole b'day party..so u made megha sleep to avoid any interruption..
Haaye!!!killed me again(So my sweetheart been missing me?..)
Really madhvi is such a woman..poor shaan cant hide anything..shaan all happy while driving..n singing too..beach is such a nice place to talk..khanak's reason when shaan asked abt did she really mean it when she asked him to kiss the other day was justwow..who is she kidding..haan..y did he put her in the water n made her a wet mermaid..nice description..cool..
she speaking out wat she intended & not intended to n shaan's reply for those..ahhh..he would be a part of her family n she his family..most needed assurance for her..so sweet of shaan..n the lines "So I really wouldn't mind , as long as my wife, returns to warm my bed at night..or day!" killed again..

Khanak asking him to KISS properly..oh god..simi..u made it simply more special by letting her assk for it..(as she was not ready to accept her love for him earlier i found this more special) awww...shaan realised that he is abt to do something illegal n moved away..really he is a sweetheart..n he asked her(his sweet innocent angel) to marry him?awww...so eagerly waiting for the next part simi..continue soon..so would their wedding be a fairy tale wedding?

 
Love U so much honey that you lived through this!!!!Smile
 
And fulfilled yr contract with me to give a detailed comment!! Bless U sweetheart!!!Smile
 
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
thanx for the pm simi
 
really u have worked very hard on this part  ..It shows all through
 
u have given  a detailed descriptionevery fine aspect of human emotions/doubts/expectations l esp while entering a relationship..
 
loved the whole part.Thumbs Up.the description of each n ones dress for the evening...brought those dresses right in front of my eyes Big smile
 
khanak realising she is colse to loving him ( close to loving very well said )..megha /shaan inviting her to party..entire party scene
 
shaan driving her to beach  ..
 
.khanak speaking her longtime doubts so freely..shan and khanak getting intimate..shaan behaving responsibly khanak accepting him whole heartedly everything was fabulousSmile
 
 
and selaed with the kiss part Mein mar jawaan Big smile
 
  not to froget all those lines of beautiful ghazals   standing ovation to u Clapon this fabulous part U rocked it Thumbs Up

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
amazing update!  loved it!

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vatsalya

What was that!?!?!

*Dhadaam*

My blush-o-meter went out of control. 
 
Yeh kya!!! Itna chota sa comment nahin chalega!!! Hmmmppphhh!!!

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshriyaa84

thanx for the pm simi
 
really u have worked very hard on this part  ..It shows all through
 
u have given  a detailed descriptionevery fine aspect of human emotions/doubts/expectations l esp while entering a relationship..
 
Thank you!!!!Embarrassed
 
loved the whole part.Thumbs Up.the description of each n ones dress for the evening...brought those dresses right in front of my eyes Big smile
 
khanak realising she is colse to loving him ( close to loving very well said )..megha /shaan inviting her to party..entire party scene
 
shaan driving her to beach  ..
 
.khanak speaking her longtime doubts so freely..shan and khanak getting intimate..shaan behaving responsibly khanak accepting him whole heartedly everything was fabulousSmile
 
 
and selaed with the kiss part Mein mar jawaan Big smile
 
  not to froget all those lines of beautiful ghazals   standing ovation to u Clapon this fabulous part U rocked it Thumbs Up
 
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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
hi simi
 
sorry for nt commenting in detail, was in offc when I read it for the 1st timeSmile
 
read it again, wat can I say that wll justify how good u r with ur wrods?!  StarClap
 
Loved the b'day party, they r always my fav  (yumy cake) !LOL
 
Loved shaan's idea to send Dharam , he dsnt want to take any chance LOL
 
I loved ur Palak, she is such a sweetheart, playing the role of cupid perfectly., wish we had some1 for the same cause in btw *ahem* ...Wink
 
So this time khushboo was quite nice to khanak, hope she is nt planning anything Confused
 
nd abt the final scene...apart frm the wellknown fact that it was super hot nd sensual nd passionate etc etc LOLI loved  wat shan told her, he wants to b the son for her family, ,,,,that is  dream for any gal to hear frm her guySmile, I love ur shan even more nowEmbarrassed
 
..and when he proposed, I was like awww...Day Dreaming
 
But I missed ur signature lines at the end of the update, they r always my fav !!
 
 
one more thing I forgot to tell u,its frm the previous update,  loved shaan's reaction to her NANOLOL  and and and...SUPERLIKED her rply !!!
 
oh yeah one more thing, this is frm the last update again, when she rplys to shaan "then kiss me"   my heart skipped a beat, I was liked wat? m I reading it right? I went back nd read again to ensure LOLEmbarrassed
 
thanks for the update
nd a big hugSmile 


Edited by -Ray- - 03 May 2011 at 1:13pm

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