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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
oh wow Simi! What a Shaan you have created ! So romantic...Day Dreaming

Loved it! And in the previous update the via TV message was sooo swoon worthy! They shd add such a scene in RBO yar! Sigh! Kash our hubby's cud learnsomething from your creativity! LOL ...Hmmm???

Hai...can't wait for the next!!!


Edited by HKfan - 27 April 2011 at 6:10am

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Okay sorry for the lateness!(I seem to be saying that alot, don't i?LOL)
Part 11-
Loved what you said about doctors.Very true!
Loved how Shaan moved from adoration to respect after seeing her working environment, always feel thats a very important thing in any relationship
Also loved the family scene at Khanak's house and how you portrayed the feeling that Shaan shall fit right in...
As for the song-was totally imagining Heath Ledger (RIP) singing it!

Part 12A
Hahaha the scene where her mum is trying to interrogate her about Shaan is SO realistic! Love itBig smile
And Irregular Heart beats ka chapterLOL
And Megha playing cupid in her cute, innocent (?) way was a nice touch!

Be back with more later =)

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Wallaaahhh...
 
Mere mehboob ki har adaa par humein pyaar aataa hain,
Inkaar mein bhi humein ikraar nazar aataa hain...
 
I am a goner on these lines!!
 
simi you write so so enchantingly... I am smitten...
 
Haay.. Shantanuji, is doctor ko manaana itna aasaan nahin hoga.. bahut paapad belne padenge...Embarrassed
 
Brilliant...
 
I am curious to know what is in that note...Big smile Waiting for your next one...Smile

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Hey DocHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

awesome update...

loved the khanak's dream& shan disturbing her dream by calling her...

shan ...aww he wants her to say ILU...& she says it but its very different & amazing...
loved it...

&

lines in end amazing...wow...

waiting 4 next part now update soon...

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
I loveee Shaan...
Specially his dhamki about calling up on her landline and waking her mom and dad if she didnt do what he says...Sooo cuteee !!!
 
And his "Omgg...I am getting a heart attack...can u come here"...How adorable is he?? Hahaha...
 
She needs to start dating him A,S,A,P before I steal him away !!!
 
What a fab and amazing characterization you have put up for Shaan yaar...Loveee him !!

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Okay Simi dear..i read your update...cutie cute twas..however, there were particular lines I wanted to comment on and now this bleeding IF wont let me do that...dunno why the hell why...twas a very short part..update soon

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
brilliant update continue soon

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

hei simi,
that was a wonderful update..shaan is too naughty n lil adamant too..i was smiling over their conversation..first i was think wat is this with forest n all..then realised may be it wud be n it was..in the dream too khanak thought like this..

Several moments passed and yet she did not feel his warm lips on hers...

'What The Hell are you waiting for? Get on with it! Have you forgotten the basics of Life Support?' She wanted to scream at him but couldn't...

really i felt blushing..n tada..there comes our shaan's call at the mid of the night..that too emergency call..so in the thank u note she gave him permission to call whenever he wishes..haan?poor khanak she wud not have expected that he wud call like this..silly shaan..asking for megha's teddy 1st..n then giving up himself that it was his emergency..loved it..how adamant he is to ask her say "I Love U"..n he forced her to say that by saying he wud call home n ask her mom,dad n palak abt that..how confident he is..poor khanak is alone in her own house..no one will support her in this.. but shaan is always shaan..nothing can be done abt that..Sweetheart,Sapnon ki rani by his was so sweet to hear..the final lines were killing..

Hmmm...I love all of mankind, so if you are Human ( which I doubt very much,) then I love you!..she laughed..

Haiii!! Khanak I'm having a heart attack..can you come here Please??...

Then hearing her giggle he said..in his honey glazed voice...

continue soon simi..
 
HugLove the way you analyse my narration!!Embarrassed It makes it sound better than it is!!Smile

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