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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
Megha appears to get cuter and cuter through each update...and playing cupid too...wonderful update as usual! can't wait till Shanak meet x

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
loved loved loved the SMS..am so sorry have been quite sporadic here..so have not been able to catch up..hopefully shall this weekend before I am off again..update soon..I was wondering if yu could write a scene from Megha's POV...I think it would make interesting reading..As readers, we read Khanak and Shaan's actions towards each other through Megha's eyes..the innocence overlapping yet underlying their love would be interesting..hey, don;t mind..just a suggestion since you were asking for some..Wink..I have always wanted to write a scene like that..i think in your FF, and your style would do complete justice to it..

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
nice update again !!
 
thanks simi!
 
now update soon nd a longer one ...:)

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
hey Doc...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug
awesome update

 loved it

 khanak's mom how easily switched shantanu with shan beta...& Palak she called shan her jiju...this embarrassed khanak ...awesome description...
khanak is affected by shan's name...cute...& she wrote a note for him & she knows that they will cross paths...sweet & cute... amazing description...

Shan & Megha...so adorable love their convo...
wonderful description...

Megha wanted an operation for his teddy ...so cute...lovely description...


Dear Doctor Aunty! (Just Khanak..for me)

You are the best! (Of course, you are!)

Teddy is broken.can you fix him for me?(Say yes, Stealer of my heart)

I will send him to you tomorrow. (With his fav courier of course!)

I hope you won't faint again... Megha! (Unless you faint in my arms...!)

(Meet you at fav watering hole tomorrow..just type Y or N..and I'll be there!)

loved the SMS wow ...u wrote it amazing...

it took my heart away...
how can i forget ur ending lines loved it too... awesome again...waiting for next part ...update soon...

 i want shanak meeting...& their interaction...i am in love with ur shanak now they r amazing & different  ...                       

 

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
hei simi,
love u for such a sweet n cute part..even though it was shorter than the prev shorter update..
so khanak's mom n sis have already opened fan club for him..who can resist that for our cute shaan?palak said him as jeeju..naughty girl made khanak move out khanak blushing..the way u write it is really superb..to ease herself khanak trying to read the book but keeping it upside down..ahhh..she wrote a note for him after reading the crumpled note she had..n she loved the way he wrote it..she hoped that she would meet him n give it to him personally..eager to know wat did she write..
then comes our cutie pie megha..too intelligent n adamant little girl..she wants teddy to be operated that too by her doc aunty..giving idea to shaan to send sms..but when did he get her mobile number?let it be..the sms was o cute..continue soon simi..

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Excellent update  Simi
chota tha per supperb tha
loved all megha and shaan conv...amazing
and last part...OMG..Juse awesome and beautiful..Loved it with shaan's feelingsEmbarrassed
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Dear Doctor Aunty! (Just Khanak..for me)

You are the best! (Of course, you are!)

Teddy is broken.can you fix him for me?(Say yes, Stealer of my heart)

I will send him to you tomorrow. (With his fav courier of course!)

I hope you won't faint again... Megha! (Unless you faint in my arms...!)

(Meet you at fav watering hole tomorrow..just type Y or N..and I'll be there!

                     

 
 I'll be there rain or shine

I will never leave you alone

whatever the future has in store

    You can hold my hand, thats for sure...

waiting for next part..pl update itLOLLOL

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
oh simi di so cute update 
but very small AngryBig smile
loved the cuteness of megha and the way she talks to shaan about dr. aunty
keep writingHug

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Simi... Awesome darling... Palak and khanak's mom pulling khanak's leg was sooo cute... Damaadji and jijju... Awesome... It made me also blush... Then khanak toh will definately blush very much... She looking at his letter... Her thoughts very well explained... Megha oh... She is sooo cute... Love her... The sms was lovely specially shaam's comment... I love him... He is just so confident... And last mein ur poem... Loved it...
please update today... Plsss...

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