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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged

Itna chotaaaaaaaaaaaaa, ye to shuru hone se pahelehi khatam ho gayaShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked

 
but it was cute, pls continue..


Edited by cadbery - 11 March 2011 at 9:06am

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Ahaa.. sounds like it is going to be another lovely FF!!
 
Loved the beginning and nice to see a responsible Shantanu Khandelwal!! Great one Simi.
 
Curious to know who is on the phone? Hmm.. I hope not a girl friend/fiance!? But well am game!!
 
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Nice update Simi As uselHug
loved the shaan akki conversation
and like sheila part tooo
waiting for next part dearBig smile


Edited by Deepali88 - 11 March 2011 at 8:43am

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Waiting 4 ur next update...jaldi karna plzSmile

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
OMG Simi...

Ok i am back with both my comments...sorry for the delay

So Ioved the prologue...

both their entry was to the point and short but yet it was powerful and gave a sense of who they were and where they came from.

I loved Khanak's character, strong and powerful yet a bit of scared. It was superb and I loved it how she just disregarded Shaan.

Shaan's character was much visible in Part 1 and I loved it. It was sooo good, thank God you showed him as responsible guy... and no nonsense type...

You have  way with words...you make your story so easy and awesome!

i wonder who he was about to talk to...?

please continue soon

PS: where is your medieval time story?
PSS: here's the musical number I promised it is Lucia Micarelli. she is a violinist. she is good look her up in youtube...u will like her. 

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
hey Simi di!!

Looks like a great start Big smile
Loved the straight forwards crisp Shaan...Embarrassed

And whos on phone?? Big smile Eager to know, update quickly 


 thanks for the pmEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
loved it Simi! it was awesome, the dialouges  you gave Shantanu just fabulous! I wonder who called him?Wink

Thanks for the pm hopefully you can write more soon!

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Hey Simi...........
wonderful update..........Clap
loved it
wow u made shan's character strong loved the way u described him............n he is ambitious too..........
u r too good with words n u desribe the story in such a simple way..................love it........
who is he going to talk on the phone that by seeing the number he has smile on his face............reveal fast...........
update soon.............
 & Thanks 4 the PM!!

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