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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged

Awww.......first of all..i wanna tell u abt d poem...it ws such a cute one...i just luvdd it soo muchh...read it agn n agn....ahh..its lovely...!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 
thn abt d update....it ws too gudd..awesome part....!!luvdd it too....
beautifully written....!!very well done.....choo..cute..
 
Her dream...Day DreamingDay Dreaming..evn i ws imagining d scene...dreamin...**LOLLOL
Everything was expressed beautifully....it ws fabb....
 
luvdd it...!!cont. soon...soon means...soooooooooooonnn.........LOLLOL


Edited by shamasallfav - 22 March 2011 at 6:50am

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Hi Doc........
loved the update.................
wonderful & amazing.................
loved the way.........u described the activities going on in hospital..............
khanak's dream very unusual & lovely............shan is her man of dream...............wow......lovely..........
she doen't want him to be on her list.........as she will get heartache...........beautifully described...........
wow khanak behaves so confident around sunil...............& successfullly releases shan's pain...............
lovely............
when i got ur pm i was just reading ur update...............
u r wonderful & talented writer...........loved the lines & dialogues.............Clap
P.S if it  feels weird then should i call u simi.............  



Edited by angel_9 - 22 March 2011 at 4:58am

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:49am | IP Logged
 
 
@ Ammu: Thanks dearie..I thought some might find the medical stuff boring!! Its nice if you could picture it!!:)Smile
 
@ Vatty: Thanks dear! LOL Yes I am a doc:)Wink
 
@ Jyothi: Thanks sweets!:)Smile
 
@ Angel: Wow, I am honored!! Thanks dear!! Call me whatever..Smile


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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
hi simi
 
khanak drives nano!!! I didnt like it, sorry, I dnt like that car....:(
 
.., the acute nd elaborate details of medicine nd treatment, honestly , bouncer lagta hai, lil less will do ...sorry if I sound rude, sorry again.
 
but this time u gave us a lengthier update, thanks .:)
 
 
 
...the update was realy nice nd ur  signature lines at the end , man , I m in love with them.
 
thanks again
 
 

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cadbery

hi simi
 
khanak drives nano!!! I didnt like it, sorry, I dnt like that car....:(
 
Hey I didn't know that!! I chose it coz its inexpensive!!LOL 
 
 
 
.., the acute nd elaborate details of medicine nd treatment, honestly , bouncer lagta hai, lil less will do ...sorry if I sound rude, sorry again.
 
Wow!! Not at all!! As a doc that sort of happens a lot on a day to day basis!! LOL
 
I knew that some of you may not like it!! Thanks for being honest!! But it can happen!!Smile 
 
but this time u gave us a lengthier update, thanks .:)
 
 
 
...the update was realy nice nd ur  signature lines at the end , man , I m in love with them.
 
Thanks again!!Smile
 
 

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Wow!  This was so different, seeing Khanak as a doc and Shaan as a patient! Too good! It was realistic and I felt like an onlooker- nicely told!And liked ur naming khanak's sister palak-super !

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by HKfan

Wow!  This was so different, seeing Khanak as a doc and Shaan as a patient! Too good! It was realistic and I felt like an onlooker- nicely told!And liked ur naming khanak's sister palak-super !
 
Wow you read it!!!Big smile
 
Thanks so much Dee!!Smile
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Awesome simi
loved it

isn't it a co-incidence ? that 2 of my favourite writers on this forum, mani and you are both doctors.
do they teach you ppl to write too?
lol
or may be the way you people see life and death, misery and happiness, new life taking birth so closely adds to the deeper understanding of a human

loved every bit of your writing. my elder sis is a doc too, so have heard ER stories from her

Update soon

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