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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vatsalya

Such a milestone on your FF and we didnt get any invitation?

But I love surprises!!! And oh man, Did I love this update or did I love this update?
It was so cute and romantic!! Loved ittt!!                                                                                                                                                
And I loved this line : Shantanu Khandelwal can be trusted Khanak, you can bet on it. 

Plus dudeee our Shantanu Khandelwal can no way look like a loser even in a one day old stubble..infact I think he must've looked pretty hot :D

And I am still wondering whats with Sunil...though I must say Khanak has got herself such a lucky family!! Awww!!
Shaan's antics : I was so sure he would do sthing in front of everybody!!
I loved the part Megha went and sat on Khanak's lap :D


And their first official convo..lol...was so eye-widening!! Total Ooh-la-laa!!
I might need a scientific blush-o-meter.  -_-

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                
 
Hi sweetie!! Was so busy that I had to go out..so couldn't send you the invite! But you did read, didn't you??Big smile
 
 
@ Blue: My thoughts exactly but Shaan you see is not into himself!LOLLOLLOL
 
@ Hot pink: this is just the first one..but you know my besharmi right? I'm not afraid to express myself!!!EmbarrassedWinkLOL

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aussiegal

Hi Simi, thank you for a wonderful update. Amazingly told. Hai... loved Shaan at Khanak's house, making her bring in the chai. Tongue brings back some very fond memorie.. Thumbs Up Can't wait for the next update.. will it be pre-engagement or the engagement and when you updating? xx
I'm not sure, likely preengagement! Have started working on it!!Smile
And Thank you!!Big smile I wanted things to be as natural as possible!!Smile with their special flavor!

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
@ Dish: Thanks dear..I meant it to be different too! Shanak in real life is my theme!!:)
 
@ Naveen: Love you girl for your statement. I'm honored!!!:)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
balle balle my shanaks baat pakki...simi its a gr8 n sabse blushy blushy update:) loved it ur writing is always beautiful no doubt:)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
great  update! loved it Simi!

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
thanx for the pm simi
loved eh last two updates very much..Mrs.bak bkas charactre I dont know i like her a lot Smile
shanak rock as usual..Smile
keep rocking..u  FF writers make our sundays the bestSmileand that You tube one in the recent ... is fabulous U ha e a fine taste I must say Smile

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged

I may have made you wait for this Simi (sorry Embarrassed) but I delivered on my promise! Hopefully the comments will be worth the wait! Big smile Like I said I would, I've commented on all parts that I've just read. BTW I read an update, then wrote the comments before moving to the next one, so if it seems like I don't know what's gonna happen next, it's because I didn't! Lol.

 
14 - Sealed With a Kiss: Oooh lala what was that?! Seriously hot! I'm blushing here! *fans herself* Loved all of it, from Khanak's conversation with her mum and Palak teasing her, Shaan's typical guy 'play the game' tactics, the invite to the party, her mum and sister fussing over her getting ready, Megha's importance towards Khanak, right through to Shanak on the beach... ending with him popping the question! Heart
 
I have to say, you've created a brilliant Shaan... he sounds a little too much like my ideal guy! Lol. He wants to be a son to her parents, a brother to her sister, wants to support and admires her dreams/aspirations, has noble intentions towards her... and if that wasn't enough he's handsome and has a sense of humour too! *sigh*
 
Loved Khanak's admission that she is indeed 'human after all'... you can put your guard up all you want, but when the right one comes along, you yourself won't know how and when the walls come down...
 

15 - Of Muses and Such: Awww cute update! Shaan doesn't waste any time does he?! LOL And bechari Khanak, finding it difficult to concentrate on anything but him, but  who can blame her?! The guy is a smooth operator! Lol at the cold showers and hormones talk!

 
Loved how comfortable Shaan is with her parents already, and the line about the two most important men in her life... so true, a girl would feel like that in the given situation. The nokh-jokh between the two in the elevator was so Shanak, especially the 'shut me up' part... wonder what he had in mind! Wink LOL
 
16 A- Blow Hot, Blow Cold: Oh my gosh I loved it! A bit of emotional drama is always good. Even though Shaan may have over-reacted to a teenager paying her attention, it's a typical response that a guy would have. Call me crazy, but I love it when a guy gets a little jealous and protective of a woman in that scenario, shows how much he cares...
 

Khanak poor girl having to bear the brunt of his bad mood, but I'm sure he'll make up for it good! Big smile Loved the little hide-and-seek game they were playing! Heart

 
16 B - Killing Me Softly: Girl, you are killing ME softly with your updates! Loved the whole scene at the listening station, and your choice of song was perfect. Like how you include music as part of the FF, takes it to another level! Thumbs Up
 
Awww he wants to pamper her but he doesn't want to change her... how sweet! Nice that you showed her possessiveness too, it was a very natural reaction, but our (not so burthal as it may be) Shaan knows how to calm all her fears... heartfelt words and a kiss that leaves no doubt. Heart
 
17 A - Shaan States His Case: Nice update! Was good to see the situation from Sheila's eyes, gives a new perspective of the characters and their relationships. Interesting that Sunil was hoping for the girl in question to be someone else, and asking about Khanak's background leads me to believe that issues on social divide/status are to follow... Shaan is so confident that he will get his way. Hoping he does! Smile
 
17 B - The Wait: Yay Megha's back! That little girl is just too cute, and any moment spent with her Chacha is truly special. She misses Dr Aunty too, love that she never forgets her! Her story of fiction/reality was adorable and babies are made by kissing?! Cuteness personified!
 
Really liked the Sunil and Madz convo too, her reaction was unexpected but I love her for it! It's kinda like a role reversal for the two from what we get on RBO.
 

17 C - Baat Pakki: OMG best update ever! Loved it! Shaan's initial worry, the family's reaction, and the phone convo were the perfect build-up to the formalities. Loved the scene between Khanak, her mum and Palak. So so touching and real. That's exactly how I reacted when my sister got married! Lol.

 
The tradition of the girl bringing in the tea, Khanak's feelings and Shanak's little interaction on the sofa were beautifully described by you. And the terrace scene totally reminded me of Vivah! Day Dreaming
 
BTW loved the poem too, so true! Perfect description of all love can be...
 
So glad I finally got to catch up with your FF, loved all of it! Waiting for the next part...


Edited by -mesmerised- - 21 May 2011 at 10:52pm

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Ohhh...such a sweet, and loving atmosphere...all families complying...phew...much better than having a tug of war...and letting them meet as per tradition even when they know each other...ah...how sensitive of the families! loved how you treated the whole scene Simi...modern and traditional and so perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!! Muah!

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