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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RB81

Originally posted by simiv

Thank you everybody so much for reading and enjoying my story!!
 
I was hoping to update this weekend but it may not happen due to MOTW obligations!!
 
Please excuse me for the delay!!OuchSmile and have a great weekend!!!Thumbs Up
 
 

we'll excuse u..but u should try to update..as grilling has not yet started there..so when u get free time u write it..
 
Ramani...the grilling has already started btw. Amrita has ordered an OS! Roshni and Sonali have given me their list! So in between if I get some time, I'll writeSmile

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Big smileOkay I am going to read all the chapters again *dont thank me cuz the pleasure is all mine* LOL

Since I have missed commenting here and then come back and edit this postBig smile

16 A
Okayyy, I absolutely loved the Blow hot blow cold!! Shaan was so stumped LOL
And my my!! Is he possessive or what?!! Bachche se!!Shocked ROFL
But I guess, he is human, after allEmbarrassed

And then the SMS thing..I liked it a lot..I dunno why but I like such little thingsEmbarrassed

16 B

the previous update had me laughing with this guy's juvenile nature toh this one had me with his tactics!! Oh dear!! Total nautanki!!
the way you descibed that other guy listening to music, I was total ROFL So apt!! Such a small detail but lovely!!
Oh and the word "Vixen" Embarrassed

The shoe thing was so sexy!!Loved loved loved it~!!!!!! 

Plus, I so love the song you used for this update..dil khush ho gayaBig smile

17 A

The secretary is so awesome!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL Her part was so well-described!! from the carpet to her being on her toes cuz of her moody boss ROFL

Shaan's standard pose, as I imagined, was so droolworthy. I actually read it again n again to just get a huge grinEmbarrassed

And I really dunno how to describe how awesome I found the convo to be..the father-son..no..the businessman father and mature son convo, if I can term itEmbarrassed
It gave us so many insights into Shaan's personality...I like him even more now :D
The poem was so good, apt.

So does he have an extreme personality...like a pendulum ends I think..its either this or that.. black or white...he loves unconditionally, is firm in his decision, no faltu stuff..

Oh dear! I love this FF!! LOLEmbarrassed





Edited by vatsalya - 12 May 2011 at 11:21pm

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
I never comment on your poems..never have..simply because I dont have words to describe how classy and what amazing writer you are..seriously..Clap

But for this one, I have to tell you this, I actually read it out to my parents..It was so good, so touching, I had this huge smile reading it...seriously, how do you manage to capture so many things in so few words?

Awesomeness.Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
simi .. Update karo naaa ...*whines*

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vatsalya

I never comment on your poems..never have..simply because I dont have words to describe how classy and what amazing writer you are..seriously..Clap

But for this one, I have to tell you this, I actually read it out to my parents..It was so good, so touching, I had this huge smile reading it...seriously, how do you manage to capture so many things in so few words?

Awesomeness.Embarrassed
 
OMG!!! My poetry worth being read out aloud!!! Never imagined it!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simiv

OMG!!! My poetry worth being read out aloud!!! Never imagined it!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
y do u feel that way simi?its really good n easily understandable..that is the good thing abt ur poetry..its in simple words n classy..mmwwaaa..keep writing more..

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Hi Simi
Lovely poem on love simply superb Clap
Love all ur poems u are an amazing writer Heart

Love is...Heart
  
Love is innocent
Love is pure
Love is tough
It can endure
 
 
Love is a rock
It stands the test of time
Love is tender
A sweet surrender
 
 
Love is honey
Yet it can taste bitter
Love is desire
Sets hearts a twitter
 
 
Love is work
May take years to master
A genuine effort
Can unravell this twister
 
 
Love is weird
Hard to comprehend
It is a riddle
A never-ending maze
 
 
Love is pernicious
Most fall victim
Remedies are simple
A look, a touch, a dimple.EmbarrassedSmile
 
Simple remedies very true rightly said  " A look, a touch, a dimple. EmbarrassedSmile "
Really loved it
dear friend  Big smile
Thanks for the lovely poem Big smile

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Hey Doc...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

awesome poem...

loved it...

wow amazing...

superb lines...

i am short of words...can't describe... its beautiful...

you r lovely & wonderful poetess & wonderful writer...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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