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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Hey Doc...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

wow ...

awesome update ...loved it...

shaan he  has straight forward approach...

loved the convo b/w dad & son

loved it...

(just came to see...& i got ur PM...lovely update...)

don't  have time now have to go...will read ur poem on saturday...&  ur MK update...
will comment on it later...

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
thanks for the lovely poem on love

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Hi Simi when you updating..can't wait for the next chapter.. Day Dreaming

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aussiegal

Hi Simi when you updating..can't wait for the next chapter.. Day Dreaming
 
I hope tom if I am not MOTW!!!CryCry which I absolutely don't want to be!!!
And thanks for liking my other FF!!Smile


Edited by simiv - 12 May 2011 at 5:21am

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
simi...HugHugHugHugHugHugHug

loved the man to man talk...
very well written...
too good...
loved shaan's bet...LOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simiv

Okay here's a small but weird poem dedicated to my Shanak and love in general!!  
 
Please do read and comments are welcome!!
 
 
Love is...Heart
 
 
 
 
Love is innocent
Love is pure
Love is tough
It can endure
 
 
Love is a rock
It stands the test of time
Love is tender
A sweet surrender
 
 
Love is honey
Yet it can taste bitter
Love is desire
Sets hearts a twitter
 
 
Love is work
May take years to master
A genuine effort
Can unravell this twister
 
 
Love is weird
Hard to comprehend
It is a riddle
A never-ending maze
 
 
Love is pernicious
Most fall victim
Remedies are simple
A look, a touch, a dimple.EmbarrassedSmile
 
 
Looovvveeelllyyy...
 
sigh.. this is how I thought of it.. Siply beautiful. Love is everything that you say and still more... Sigh simi, such a beautiful poem.. you are so good at this.. makes me sigh often and feel this thrill of love as it surrounds us all.. in different forms.. yes.. a beautiful Ode to love...ClapClapClap

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Thank you everybody so much for reading and enjoying my story!!
 
I was hoping to update this weekend but it may not happen due to MOTW obligations!!
 
Please excuse me for the delay!!OuchSmile and have a great weekend!!!Thumbs Up
 
 

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simiv

Thank you everybody so much for reading and enjoying my story!!
 
I was hoping to update this weekend but it may not happen due to MOTW obligations!!
 
Please excuse me for the delay!!OuchSmile and have a great weekend!!!Thumbs Up
 
 

we'll excuse u..but u should try to update..as grilling has not yet started there..so when u get free time u write it..

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