FF~:Human After All:~ Imp note Pg 150:) - Page 34

purvi08

@purvi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi simi

loved the update

loved the k family

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

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Posted: 13 years ago

ohh god beautiful simvi when shaan saw khanak for the first time in the hospital ........wht a piece of writing was imagining every words as real its just bliss... waiting for the stroy to unfold

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

fab simi...........

as always the update was awesome...................

loved it...........

from start to end................

now continue soon..............

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Jessica

@jparker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aahhh simi, loved the nice Dr. Khanak pulling the naughty Shantanu's leg!!!!😆😆😆😆😆 Heamorrhides indeed!!!😆😆😆

Nicely written Simi, again the minute details has me in awe...

Their feeling for each other, especially as she is a doctor and a professional, but the touch seering his skin as well as affecting her... Sigh.. am going to love this one even more...

Awww... teddy misses Dr. Aunty... so do I... so shall wait for that sweet tryst.. simi... 👏👏👏👏

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Simi

@simikr

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

@ Saaz: Ghor kalyug??!! Lol Mads is just crazy, she doesn't hate Khanak!!:)

@ Purvi: Thanks dear...:D

@Jyothi: Aww so sweet of you to be imagining the scene!! Thanks!!:D

@Roshni: Thank you sweet heart!!:D

@Jess: Hey late kyun?? Thanks yaar!! Shanak ke nok jhok and teddy ko pasand karne ke liye!!:)

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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Simi

sorry yaar....

Loved every part of it... Lol beautiful mouse.. he he

I am waiting to see her reaction when shaan lands up feigning something..lol

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

dear simi sorry for teh delay...loved it Thanx for teh long updat

pehle ladka ab baap lagtha hain poore khandaan ka eye check up karna padega😆😆very funny loved it 😊

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576961

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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful and beautiful update Simi..it
all feeling of shaan and khanak shown very beautifully
loved their cute meeting
speciealy loved below part to much😆😆
You certainly are not as Bholi Bhaali as you look! Seem to have quite a wily brain floating around in that pretty skull of yours! Beauty and brains.. a deadly combo! No wonder Dr Deepak is lattooo over you!, Now why don't I like that?!!, thought Shaan pursing his lips, feeling a tinge of jealousy.

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 13 years ago

@ Priya: Thanks dear and no sorrys please!:D

@Shriya: Again thanks for keeping up all the time with me!! And liking what I write..:)

@ Deepali: Sorry girl, you are so busy with MOTW. But you made time to comment!! Thanks:)

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry sorry for being late!

Maafi pleej!

Great update!

The feminist in me rejoices at Khanak's revenge on Shaan and her being brains plus beauty and how!

Poor Shaan is smitten! No chance does this fella have=D

Read the last line of the poem again and again-My heart is your home for keeps.Sigh.Appealed to my romantic heart.

Update soon!

*hugs*

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