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Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar (Page 39)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
loved it...superb...awesome update....

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
hey!!!! ur fanfic is awesome....
 
please add me to ur PM list!!!
 
ur ff was suggested to me by aash!!!.. it is absolutely awesome....
 
please continue soon!!!!
 
deepz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Hi Stawberry,

My mY that was an awesome date. 

Thanks for covering all the point as suggested

Past:
 Luv the date actually it was outing cum date.  He kidnapped her from his own sister poor anu feel sorry for she wanted to spend time with geet but couldnt becoz of her possesive brother towards his lady luv.

the cottage was awesome cant stop thinking about it and their dance cum initiate scene.

Present:
 Vicky is big flirt i say but he doesnot know who geet is.

so finally geet started coping up with life.  thats good step taken by her . 

Suggestion: Now i want geet to design the report which will be send to maan somehow as maan knows her work he will figure out as he has the same work done by geet.  with just a hope to see her he fly to mumbai before the expected

anyways its just outline to bring maan to mumbai just based on his insticts

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by doosheeka

awesome update.........loved the romance part to bits..............continue soon.................want to see geet and maan together in the present too...........
Thanks dearie... glad you enjoyedBig smile
will continue soon
 
Originally posted by princess163

 
Thanks a ton for the wishes Sonia!!
yeah,i amgood, just plain busy!!Dead
n yeah,i am thoroughly enjoying myself alongside the huge pile of work that waits me all the time....
hehe.....he...
dream....ummm.......to be truthful, i am scared of dreaming, scared of the fact that i might not be able to take it if they are not fulfilled!
sorry for getting serious here!!
Yeah, i am waiting for his Mumbai arrival....
till then...
take care...love you.....
n yeah, i might not comment for a few updates again, though i doubt if i can refrain from falling for the tendency of sitting down to post another one just a couple of parts laterLOL
anyways
take care
Love
Swati
Hey Swati.... its ok dearie...
 
no worries at all....
 
whenever u post... i would love to read them... they bring a smile to my face sweetie....
 
and don't be so scared... its life... just live it to the fullestEmbarrassed
 
i know u waiting for him to show up in Mumbai and he will... thanks  dearie...
 
take careBig smile


Edited by euphoric - 14 March 2011 at 5:21am
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
that was awsome one yaar

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
 
thanks dearie...
 
glad you enjoyed the updatedBig smile
will try and put up the next one soonEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by maankigeet4ever

firstly...u are awesome at the romantic stuff...i was awwing the whole time..well most of the time which was the past....anywayz..i loved the cottage scene..described really well...and the fishing scene was damn cute too....and the kiss...sighsssssssss...perfect.....loved it all...
 
thanks sweets for appreciating and reinstigating thatBig smile
glad that u enjoyed the whole of the past and the fishing sceneEmbarrassed


Edited by euphoric - 14 March 2011 at 5:22am

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shalve

loved it...superb...awesome update....
 
thanks dearBig smile
glad you enjoyed
 
Originally posted by maneet1985

hey!!!! ur fanfic is awesome....
 
please add me to ur PM list!!!
 
ur ff was suggested to me by aash!!!.. it is absolutely awesome....
 
please continue soon!!!!
 
deepz
 
Thanks a ton DeepzBig smile
 
Asshu is way too sweet... I m glad you have enjoyed the ff... 
 
would love to hear more from youEmbarrassed


Edited by euphoric - 14 March 2011 at 5:26am
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged

Originally posted by heermeher

Hi Stawberry,

My mY that was an awesome date. 

Thanks for covering all the point as suggested

Past:
 Luv the date actually it was outing cum date.  He kidnapped her from his own sister poor anu feel sorry for she wanted to spend time with geet but couldnt becoz of her possesive brother towards his lady luv.

the cottage was awesome cant stop thinking about it and their dance cum initiate scene.

Present:
 Vicky is big flirt i say but he doesnot know who geet is.

so finally geet started coping up with life.  thats good step taken by her . 

Suggestion: Now i want geet to design the report which will be send to maan somehow as maan knows her work he will figure out as he has the same work done by geet.  with just a hope to see her he fly to mumbai before the expected

anyways its just outline to bring maan to mumbai just based on his insticts

Hey Rakhi.... Hug...

 
chal update pad ke tera gussa toh shaant huaLOL
 
yup u right... its just the two of them... call it their reprise.. date or outing whatever but as he said a day exclusively for himEmbarrassed
 
glad you liked their intimate scene and the dance...
 
oh yes... Vicky is a damn big flirt... and about ur suggestion... madame he's coming down... will definitely try to use this... but not sure in same mannerEmbarrassed
 
Thanks a loads Rakhi...
 
Love yaEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by mrk_1

that was awsome one yaar
 
Thanks dear...
glad you enjoyedBig smile


Edited by euphoric - 14 March 2011 at 5:32am

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