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Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar (Page 32)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by XXXYYYZZZ

Awesome part... loved it
 
Thanks dearBig smile
glad you enjoyed
 
Originally posted by blueopal

hmm...............wat  an  FB  yaar..............it  was  soo  lovely  n  enthu   too  read..............
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb   update.........................looking  fwd............

 
Hey pal...
glad you enjoyed
thank you dear

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namita25

soniya ...ye kya kiya dear.......maar dalaaBlushing
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muahas to you for such a sweetoooooo part....
it was marvellous....Clap
haiiiii annu is so sweet ..she blabbered her plans of spending her  day with geet to Maan...and she never expected her brother would dash her plans to ground....hate daarji.Angry... good for nothing...he behaves as if he is descended from the sun...iska toh kuchch karna padega...Angry
and that cottage scene...nonu.....i am in swarglok right now...Day Dreamingreally liked the way you penned it ...it was so captivating n I could imagine the whole scene.. the song you added is one of my favourites song.....Embarrassed
me also liking sasha....she is not evil.....Smile
and dear zara present ko bhi aagey badao......I want this MU track to end soon.....I have told you this umpteenth times  but you are not in a mood to listen.... baby...I am all set with my danda and rotten tomatoes.....so don't you dare ignore my request now..samjhi tum...n what's with this ending...phirse cilffhanger..ab achchi bachchi ki tarah jaldi se next part update kardo.

love
Namita

 
NamitaaaaaHug
 
nah nah sweetie... mera tujhe maarne ka koi iraada nahi thaLOL
 
Anu is too innocent na... Maan took the advantage of the information at handWink and dashed her plans cleverlyLOL... i wouldn't mind deporting men like brij nd daarji to sunAngry
 
haila... u called me nonu... my mom calls me that to get her way or placate meLOL
 
shoo glad u liked the song sequenceEmbarrassed
 
arre now since past coming to end... present will take momentum na... but till then i m getting my shield readyLOL
 
didn't i tell u i m in love with cliffhangersLOL... me achchi bachchi only dearie... will start penning down the next part shoonnEmbarrassed
 
thank kuuuuu.... muaaahHeart
 
Originally posted by amzu32

awesome update
Loved it.....
soo romantic .
 who was in her room?????
thanks pm

 
Thanks dearie....
glad u enjoyedBig smile
the mystery man will be out soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anuvenuch

sonia ,you made my day. after heartwrenching episode of yesterday ,you brought back my smile on my lips .awesome episode.you write so beautifully,full of emotions and luv  which i  can feel .don't koow about martial status but if you r single i wish to god you shld get maan of ripped apart who will luv you like this. i know you are an amazing girl with lot of emotions and luv ,you deserve maan inyour life . luv you and thankyou for making my day taking me to serene and maaneet dreamworld.

 
Hey Anu thanks for the blessings and such sweet words sugarbunEmbarrassed
ha ha... just for the information sake... me not married so the blessings r much requisiteLOL
 
its feels great to know that i could do something to uplift your mood and spirit after yesterday's eppy... thanks dearie for appreciating my work... glad u enjoyed the update
 
Luv you tooEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by janu_2006

Hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
 
Thanks JanuEmbarrassed
glad you enjoyed... will cont. soonBig smile

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

soni...............................BlushingBlushing

 
u are such a sweetheart!!!!HugHugHugHugHug
 
moi lubbsss you!!HugHugHugHugHugHug
 
kya bolu yaar mai sharm se pani pani ho rahi hu!!!BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
 
lekin agar maine nahi bola to tu mujhe wohi pani me duba dengi!!! and i;m dreaming that my maan will come to save me...!!!!LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
okies on behalf on DONS N BEHENS n married lady busy eating parathas!! we give u hugs n hugs n hugs....after the cruel epi last night..this one is like a soothing balme...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug
 
i made REQUEST(sacchi truly..plz bolz!!) to jia that we want JR maaneet in dreams now!!!CryCryCry
 
yaha to possisible nahi hai...hai kya???WinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWinkWink
 
okies now about the update....ClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
maan ne anu ko mast ullu babaya!! this was like my smart MSK!!! no jhagda just sneekines!!! me proud of my maan!!! and u sonia...i can imagine ur face when ur bro did this to u!!!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
me LIKED arjun in that scene......but u giving hints that all izz not well on that front!! will keep silence till then....tu apne aap ke saath aisa kar sakti hai arjun ko negative bana ke...nahi mai tujhe apne aap ke saath aisa nahi karne dongi!!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
and then the song sequence.....song was apt...actions wee wow!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
i was melting just rteading avout it!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
sonia sach me....grt written piece.....its sensuousness was wooowwww!!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
 
all the GUNDAS thank you from the bottom of their hearts....and our andolan continues...coz YE DIL MAANGE MORE!!!!!Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile
 
adinky were cute...u can expand there also....also sasha n vicky ...plz plz plz....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
vicky accha hai...use maan se mat pitwana!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
at the end of it...i'm stillllll BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
 
Ashhuuuu... me lubss uuu tooHugHugHugHugHug
 
oye tujhe bhi sharam aati haiShocked yeh toh news hai... Eshu... Jia... aaj ki taza khabar... aaj ki taaza khabar... Don Ashu ko bhi sharam aati haiROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
i'm sho glad ki mera update kisi kaam aaya... to make u feel better... i m more than glad and contended with thatEmbarrassed
 
tujhe JR Maaneet chahiye... i would love it too... but RA main woh log abhi itna door hain... toh JR kahan se aayega... dreamworld seLOL
 
Sudhar jaAngry... Main Anu nahi hoon... nahi toh ek Aashu Ripped apart main introduce karva ke... usse Maan ko rakhi bandhwa doongi... kaise lagegi Aashu gaate hue... Bhaiya mere rakhi ke bandhan ko nibhanaEmbarrassedLOL
 
i wanted to use that song... but was apprehensive ki pata nahi sequence kaisa hoga... its such a relief ki turned out theek thaakLOL
 
and Dil maange more ki bachchi... now time for story to move aheadLOL
 
adinky and Sasha-Vicky... will try in snippetsLOL
 
thanks a loads honeyEmbarrassed.... love you... muaaaahhhHeart

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by melody_quest

awesome update
 
Thanks dearie...
glad u enjoyedEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by shivangi783

SoniaSmile

I haven't been commenting these days but I am totally loving the way you are weaving the story co-ordinating the present and the past. The present evokes strong emotions, one can feel Geet's pain and the past just takes one to a different land!
Amazing!!!Clap 
 
Hey Shivangi...
i m glad that you have enjoyed the story so farBig smile
and the present and the past have managed to invoke the emotions that i had inteded to...
thanks a ton for the lovely comments... will love to hear more from uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by holyangel

that was wonderful... u wer good at romantic stuff here... Blushing
 
Thanks Angel...
glad you enjoyedBig smile
 
Originally posted by maan-ki-sanjana

Lovely update dear! Smouldering with passion Wink
 
Thanks Sanjana
relieved to know thatLOL
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutee987

loved the update......

thanks for pm

continue soon.
 
Thanks cutieBig smile
glad u enjoyed
 
Originally posted by sdtashin

lovd it.........
 
thanks dearieBig smile
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
kya kar rahi hai...??I'm feeling booooooooooored??Sleepy


Edited by esha143 - 13 March 2011 at 10:16am

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