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Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar (Page 155)

-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Awe maan can feel her presence and geet wants to avoid seeing him but alasshe can't fight destiny and there at the end of the day they see each other anyways great update and can't wait to read more Smile

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mishti4maan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 April 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged

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euphoric IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan


details later....
btw u qualifu for a lamba ,amba commentEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Sabse pehle mai bol do''''' bahotttttttttttttttt badi kaminiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hai!!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

the pleasure is all mine... i'm belong to a group of kaminisEvil SmileLOL so thanks for the complimentLOLEmbarrassed
Cliff hanger pe chod diya!!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
toh aur kya karti... kitna lamba chauda part ho gaya thaLOL lalchi bandarROFL

Tere se badla lungi!!! AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

get to itBig smile
Mai bhi FF likhungi au raise hi imp pt pe aake chod dungi!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
i'm waiting for that day already... jiu and i told u much b4 tht u shud get to itTongue i promise main without fretting lumbe lumbe comments doongiEmbarrassedLOL
About ur update'

No no long comment!! Rules are rules!!! Samjhi!!Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile

theek se pad... 1 HHWWK thiBlushing
Anu meri nanand meri soni kitni sweet hai'.mujhe pehle se hi pata tha'aakhir kamini kiski hai!!Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileEvil SmileLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
chup oye... warna meri agli ff main anu aashu ho jayegi... with double 'a'LOL waise i know i m born sweetLOL i hv written two parts without tum sabke haath... using only two hands... aisa mat karo yaar mera naam karan karna padegaOuchLOLLOLLOL

Arjun''.mai pehle se hi bol rahi thi'.dal kali hai!!! Hmmmm'''so he didn't hear about Mumbai!! Thank god!! Dono bahi behan ne jeena haram kar diya hai!!! AngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

ha ha... mujhe pata tha... tu pehle din se uske peeche padi thiLOL
Vicky ke dialogues I love!! Specially the 'late VSK" wala!! Jisne meri geet ko late karne ki planning kar di hai! Apna mu band nahi rakh sakta kya babaji!!! Mere bechare dewar ko haddi mat bana samjhi!!CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
maine kahan tere dewar ko haddi banayi... bechare ke grounds bana rahi hoon... usse bhai bhabhi ke kaam aana haiLOL

And forehead kissie n neck kissie does not equate to EHHK!!! Rules tod rahi hai tu!!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

ek kiss this which Maan also deepened and she didn't stop... theek se padhAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry
Anu maan ki planning mast hai'..tu bahot smart hai'kabhi geet ke saath milke maan ki bajati hai'aur maan ke saath milke geet ki!!....ek baar maaneet ko milke teri band bajane ka mauka de na..mazaa aayega!!!LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
do bandar ki ladai main billi jeet ti hai na... aur waise bhi Anu is all concerned about Maaneet happiness naLOL waise u forgetting Maan ne Anu ki bajai thi... remember when he abducted Geet for their first dateLOLLOLLOL

Lekin abh kaha,,,,such bhare din beeten re bhaiya'dukh aayo re'!!CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

yupCryCryCryCryCry i miss writing those fun filled momentsOuch
Maan ne NT ki kya band bajayi'took me back to that scene,,,,wherin MSK sunaoed NT in the serial!! Seriously awesome man!!ClapClapClapClapClap
somewhere while writing it mujhe bhi wohi scene yaad aaya tha... tht was one of the stupendous scenesEmbarrassed 

Arjun ke khilaaf aur sabpoot!!AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

i c you r planning to abduct him to ur clinicROFL
Proporsal scene was awesome'soni u r too good with this romantic stuff yaar!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Mai to total latto!! Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
really? tht is something i m only now discoveringLOL
Kaha se seekha?? FTC aunties ko bol de,,,?? Unke jeevan me bhi tarang aa jayega!!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
oye chup oye... don't forget u r their favourtieROFLROFLROFL unka triangle ab poora haiROFLROFLROFL 

U portrayed the angst n insecurity very well!! Loved it!!ClapClapClap

*bowing* thank you
Agar is update me maaneet nahi mile'to tu to gayi..DON aashu will show her true colours!!!!AngryAngryAngryAngry
mil gaye... mil gayeLOLLOLLOL keep ur tamatar colour to urselfLOL

Maaneets bebasi n emotions were sooooo sad yaar'.thinking n thinking'feeling but not ready to believe'ClapClapClapClapClapClap

hmm... i wonder tu next part read karke kya karegi meraErmm
War between head n heart!! Wonder when will the heart win!! Knowing my OK '.i better be prepared for a long wait!CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
ultimately heart has to win na... how can it nowEmbarrassed... fikar not OK won't disappoint uBig smile
Over to u!!....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Thanks a loads MKKBig smile
Love ya loadsHugHeart

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euphoric IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

finally maan and geet met!
continue soon!
thanks dear
glad you enjoyedEmbarrassed
Originally posted by -shamima-

Awe maan can feel her presence and geet wants to avoid seeing him but alasshe can't fight destiny and there at the end of the day they see each other anyways great update and can't wait to read more Smile
Hey Shamima... thanks a loads dear
yes.. maan could feel her and Geet wanted to avoid him so that she could spare him and herself from the confrontationOuch
its destiny ofcourse and they r destined to be togetherEmbarrassed
lovelycutietedy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
update soon

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esha143 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
unreserved my post on pg 140....finallyTongue

euphoric IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

I have to stop myself from reading the next update however tempting it is right post my comments on the 22nd partOuch.....look what you do to me kamini.....the lengths I have to go to satisfy you....I better get a nice reward for my sacrificesAngry.....
I m a true crowned kamini... wat did u expectLOLLOLLOL... i know how difficult it would have been for u to hold urself from next partLOL... and i know u did it to comment on this part justifiably... thnks hunEmbarrassed

Okay part of it is my fault too I agreeEmbarrassed.....damn my laziness....chalo ab apni ram katha band karke teri comments shuru karthe hai WinkLOLTongue......
Bingo... aalsi HKLOL

Geet finally replied back to least she kept her stance as a good friend by replying back somehow.....not that it did any good to Anu ratehr it only increased her worry and led to a fight with Arjun later on but still.....and Arjun this guy is acting weird...I mean I can understand his frustration but knowing Anu from so much time he should ahve understood her instead of yelling at her for her concern for Geet....why do men tend to be such big jerks at times...D'oh
Geet had to reply to Anu na... Anu had been like a sister to her and have always been beside her... even when she very well knows that Maan wouldn't like Anu to contact her... Anu is persistent... this shows the strength of their bonding and friendship na... how long could she put that offConfused Men would be men from MarsLOL... But Arjun's behaviour has a reason u'll find outWinkLOL

And speaking of jerks....there is not actually a lack of them in here....only abundance....on one side there's geet who is feeling weird from the start of day and finally after knowing the cause of her restlessness fainted right out instead of facing it and end up considering quitting the job altogether...why is she being a coward if she thinks she is doing the right thing?She wanted to move on she should do it in front of him long as she runs away from him she'll find herself in front of him at every corner....
She was contemplating Eshu but then she knew aise job chod di toh adi aur pinky ko reply karna padega... so she didn;t... but she's not ready to give up and will notSmile woh toh hai... yahan bhi toh she wanted to avoid him and bingo found herself facing him on the very dayTongue

And there is the other Jerk, what can be said about him......he is so far the biggest one of all of them....he finds her presence in everything he lay his eyes on yet he denies her mere existence in his life....what to do with this man??
ha ha... i already said Men are from Mars... but he's been an impulsive guy.. possessive about her... and when she left he was shattered too... iski personality ka kuch nahi ho saktaOuchLOL

the FB was amazing......the beautiful sunset,the hearty teasings of each other,the dinner plans,the foolish move of NT which was snubbed by Maan himself,and finally the wonderful proposal......the dream proposal actually....I didn't thought that you'll make him propose to her yet but glad u did it....the proposal contained all the answers to her insecurities,her wishes,desires n love.....that was beautiful....and also his protectiveness towards her....who can help it??LOL
how could i miss that... maine prologue main hi marriage proposal hint kiya tha... had to bring it onEmbarrassed... I so wanted him to snub off NT in Geet's defense... glad u enjoyed the sunset and the whole FB... last happy happy FBOuch

And now back in the present she is trying to play hide-n-seek again with him.....well she can hide herself but how can she hide her presence which he can detect anywhere......and finally he laid his eyes on her.....shock would have been an understatement for his feelings when he saw her there as he's under some other impressions of where she might be......
You are right where do u hide from someone who is a part of youConfused... you are bound to meet them... to complete yourself and the person... where else for him... never in the wildest drream he would have thought of meeting her in his own hotel... but she stoos right there in front of eyes.

so now I'm going off to read what happened next LOLLOLLOL...I'm dying to read it from the time u updated......byeeeeeee

Thanks a loads sweetieEmbarrassed

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esha143 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
moi couldn't like u but i liked ur replies to my comments....Big smile

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