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Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar (Page 148)

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

How culd u do this
Aisa koi end karta hai kya
I was dieing for their meet aur jab meet aayi toh update khatamCryCryCryCry
Im so angry wit u im crying I want one more updateCryCryCryCry
Chaoti si hi sahi but one more n wo bhi jaldi plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzz
Cuming to update
Liked how both got that feel of each other
If Vicky wuldnt hav said his full name she wuldnt hav knwn still abt him
Wen she fainted i thought as usuasl our Maan will hold her par nahi tenu ne toh kuch aur plan karke rakhiyasi
Past was really sweet
NT she the cause after all these thgs for sure
Anu is tension pain
She hav no one to share her pain evn Arjun is gng far feeling bad for her
Loved that Geet atleast replied to her
Loved Adi n Pinky's concern
I so want Maaneet meet
sorry Afsha... but kya karti already part itna lamba ho gaya thaLOL
had to stop na... isiliye thot i'll give what was most anticipated and then stopped itLOL
 
aww don't cry dearieEmbarrassed... and i know u can't stay angry with me for long... i'll start working on the update right awayBig smile toh ab gussa chod deLOL
 
yea... it only struck her when Vicky announced her full name... sometimes she really gets dumb naConfusedLOL... ahh Maan aake uthata toh le wahi ka wahi khatam na ho  jata... kuch toh hatke hona chahiye na... ok no jootas pleaseLOL
 
i told u tht Geet fill finally relent and reply to Anu... its sad tht even she had got isolatedOuch
 
Thanks a ton dear for the lovely commentsEmbarrassed
 

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krati5

finally....... uff.... atlst they met...............
i hv tkn a sign of relief nw........
well hey knw nw there is no turning back for them
 
Thanks Krati
yes finally they meetLOL
no no turning back nowWinkLOL
 
Originally posted by SOLACEofEYES

Very nice part
finally they met
plz update soon
 
Thanks dear
glad you enjoyedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess_xaini

owsome update..
loved it so much...
 
Thanks dear
glad you enjoyedBig smile
 
 
Originally posted by SapphireFlames

OK. just caught up. Juggling between the past and present, i'm sure is a difficult task. But u seem to accomplish it quite well. Smile

So, finally the much awaited part is up next. The encounter. I have waited for it since the time i started reading your FF. Big smile

Both part 21 and 22 were beautifully written, each emotion captured in words very serenely. I could picture things in motion in front of my eyes, literally. Kudos for such brilliant writings. 
Update soon. Smile
 
 
Thanks ton GeetEmbarrassed
 
I am glad that you enjoyed and have felt the juggle is glitch free...thts my major concern most of the timesSmile
 
they r face to face now... so lets c what the next updates holds upLOL 
 
glad that u can visualize the pictures and the updates... thanks dearEmbarrassed


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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nahtani88

fantastic
cont soon
 
Thanks Nahtani
 
glad you enjoyedEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
 
Thanks Janu
I'm glad you liked itBig smile
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Teenage.dream

Yay! Finally you updated! OMG! I freaking LOVED IT!! Heart
Throughout the beginning.. All the memories of his kept haunting her, giving the sign that he's here; giving the sign of his presense near her. simply WOW! Big smile
Even Maan felt it as He saw all those flowers.. It reminded him of her!
And coming to flashback.. OMG! His words.. to take the promise from Geet to wait for him. All those dreams of getting married to his love are going to be shattered after only 2 months.. Cry 
OK! I literally had a lump in my throat thinking about the separation.. I dont know If I'll be able to handle it once it happens.. Cry
Coming back to Present again.. The hotel scene! Their restlessness, their urge to have just one sight of one another!! IT's like beyond Wow!! LOVED that scene! Star
OMG!! The ending.. THEY MET!! Ofoooo How will I be able to wait for the next part Sonia..
OMG! What If he missunderstands her!!? How will his reaction be!!? What if HE says something to her!!? She has just started to live in present.. OMG!
MILLIONS questions are going around in my head.. And I'm just DYING for your next update!!
I desperately wanna read the next one..
PLEASE Soni.. Plzz update soon..
And OPPS! I forgot!! What an update!! Beautifully written Sonia.. Just Superb!!! Clap

Hey Dearie...
 
thanks a tonEmbarrassed 
 
when two ppl r so bound to be connected with each other... they tend to sense each other's presence naSmile... and so did Maan and Geet
 
the promise in the past was a sign of his insecurity... his intuition... the nagging ffeling of his heart about being away from her... so there it came fromOuch sometimes times and circumstances don't spare anyone... but then here they'll be together in the end...
 
the separation has already happened na dear... the past will now just show wat and how the MUs crept upConfused
 
his reactions and hers too will come up in the next part... will try to post it soonEmbarrassed
 
glad you enjoyed the update

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puth

lovely update Sonia.......
finally maaneet met.....but gal you stopped at the cliffhanger we have been waiting forCry
 
Thanks dear...
glad you enjoyedEmbarrassed
wat could i do... it was running so longLOL
 
Originally posted by ashvinisharma

Yaar i waited for a whole week for ur update it s nice no words its excelent. Waitin for next update
 
Sorry Ashvini to make you wait but i was really not up to itConfused
glad that u enjoyed it finally
Thanks  a tonBig smile
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakadafi

And they meet!!!! Let's see what the confrontation brings forth....I expect there'll be one or will she simply run???? hmmm Day Dreaming
 
Yes dearie... they finally meetLOL
 
lets c wats in there for the confrontation...
 
glad you enjoyed... thanksBig smile
 
Originally posted by Miss-Riz

That was Awsome but continue soon with the next part :)
 
Thanks Riz
glad you enjoyedBig smile
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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maankigeet4ever

Ohhhhhh my master of emotions is back.....yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Big smile
as always u have kept a perfect combo of happiness and sorrow with the past and present...
ok...we shall talk about the past first cause that's my favourite part....
firstly...the sunset was so so simple yet perfect...u probably know my weakness for sunsets due to Blind Love but this scene was just...perfect...i don't know how to explain but it was my fav scene in the entire update...
and second fav was when he proposed...oh..i loved it...
and then the scene with Nt when Maan walks in and tells her off...seriously..i was grinning like a fool.....
now coming to the present...
i loved the way they could feel a connection...u know how they felt a change in the atmosphere even though they didn't know the other was there....
i was so disappointed when geet fainted and she couldn't meet Maan...and i was like Sonia is so dead if they don't meet...
but they did meet....i love Vicky for that...
OMGGGG...did i tell u how excited i am about the next part?? i can't wait...
p.s i am not pulling ur leg...i chose the name : master of emotions very seriously.......but i won't use it if u don't like it...
Hey Reya...
thanks a loads dearieEmbarrassed
 
hmm the perfect balance is going to go for a toss for the next couple of updates as u see the past is all moving towards the sad end and the present... well there's lot of water under the bridgeLOL
 
yup... blind loveDay Dreaming... this couple brings on the magicLOL
 
yea i wanted to see that scene... enjoying comfortable silence is as important as talking naBig smile
 
i have no suicidal tendencies dear... i knew i would be signing a death pact without letting them meet in this oneLOL  thanks for the such beautiful comments... i m humbledBig smile
 
Love you ReyaEmbarrassed

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