Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar - Page 120

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

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details later....

btw u qualifu for a lamba ,amba comment😳😳

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Sabse pehle mai bol do'''''..to bahotttttttttttttttt badi kaminiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hai!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

the pleasure is all mine... i'm belong to a group of kaminis😈😆 so thanks for the compliment😆😳

 

Cliff hanger pe chod diya!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡

 

toh aur kya karti... kitna lamba chauda part ho gaya tha😆 lalchi bandar🤣

Tere se badla lungi!!! 😡😡😡😡😡😡

get to it😃

 

Mai bhi FF likhungi au raise hi imp pt pe aake chod dungi!!😡😡😡😡😡😡

 

i'm waiting for that day already... jiu and i told u much b4 tht u shud get to it😛 i promise main without fretting lumbe lumbe comments doongi😳😆

 

About ur update'

No HHWWK..so no long comment!! Rules are rules!!! Samjhi!!😈😈😈😈

theek se pad... 1 HHWWK thi☺️

 

Anu meri nanand meri soni kitni sweet hai'.mujhe pehle se hi pata tha'aakhir kamini kiski hai!!😈😈😈😈😈😆😆😆😆😆😆

 

chup oye... warna meri agli ff main anu aashu ho jayegi... with double 'a'😆 waise i know i m born sweet😆 i hv written two parts without tum sabke haath... using only two hands... aisa mat karo yaar mera naam karan karna padega😆😆😆

Arjun''.mai pehle se hi bol rahi thi'.dal kali hai!!! Hmmmm'''so he didn't hear about Mumbai!! Thank god!! Dono bahi behan ne jeena haram kar diya hai!!! 😡😡😡😡😡

ha ha... mujhe pata tha... tu pehle din se uske peeche padi thi😆

 

Vicky ke dialogues I love!! Specially the 'late VSK" wala!! Jisne meri geet ko late karne ki planning kar di hai! Apna mu band nahi rakh sakta kya babaji!!! Mere bechare dewar ko haddi mat bana samjhi!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

maine kahan tere dewar ko haddi banayi... bechare ke grounds bana rahi hoon... usse bhai bhabhi ke kaam aana hai😆

And forehead kissie n neck kissie does not equate to EHHK!!! Rules tod rahi hai tu!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

ek kiss this which Maan also deepened and she didn't stop... theek se padh😡😡😡😡😡😡

 

Anu maan ki planning mast hai'..tu bahot smart hai'kabhi geet ke saath milke maan ki bajati hai'aur maan ke saath milke geet ki!!....ek baar maaneet ko milke teri band bajane ka mauka de na..mazaa aayega!!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

 

do bandar ki ladai main billi jeet ti hai na... aur waise bhi Anu is all concerned about Maaneet happiness na😆 waise u forgetting Maan ne Anu ki bajai thi... remember when he abducted Geet for their first date😆😆😆

Lekin abh kaha,,,,such bhare din beeten re bhaiya'dukh aayo re'!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

yup😭😭😭😭😭 i miss writing those fun filled moments

 

Maan ne NT ki kya band bajayi'took me back to that scene,,,,wherin MSK sunaoed NT in the serial!! Seriously awesome man!!👏👏👏👏👏

 

somewhere while writing it mujhe bhi wohi scene yaad aaya tha... tht was one of the stupendous scenes😳 

Arjun ke khilaaf aur sabpoot!!😡😡😡😡😡😡

i c you r planning to abduct him to ur clinic🤣

 

Proporsal scene was awesome'soni u r too good with this romantic stuff yaar!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Mai to total latto!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

 

really? tht is something i m only now discovering😆

 

Kaha se seekha?? FTC aunties ko bol de,,,?? Unke jeevan me bhi tarang aa jayega!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

 

oye chup oye... don't forget u r their favourtie🤣🤣🤣 unka triangle ab poora hai🤣🤣🤣 

U portrayed the angst n insecurity very well!! Loved it!!👏👏👏

*bowing* thank you

 

Agar is update me maaneet nahi mile'to tu to gayi..DON aashu will show her true colours!!!!😡😡😡😡

 

mil gaye... mil gaye😆😆😆 keep ur tamatar colour to urself😆

Maaneets bebasi n emotions were sooooo sad yaar'.thinking n thinking'feeling but not ready to believe'👏👏👏👏👏👏

hmm... i wonder tu next part read karke kya karegi mera🤔

 

War between head n heart!! Wonder when will the heart win!! Knowing my OK '.i better be prepared for a long wait!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

 

ultimately heart has to win na... how can it now😳... fikar not OK won't disappoint u😃

Over to u!!....😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!

 

finally maan and geet met!

 

continue soon!

Originally posted by: esha143

I have to stop myself from reading the next update however tempting it is right now....to post my comments on the 22nd part.....look what you do to me kamini.....the lengths I have to go to satisfy you....I better get a nice reward for my sacrifices😡.....

 

I m a true crowned kamini... wat did u expect😆😆😆... i know how difficult it would have been for u to hold urself from next part😆... and i know u did it to comment on this part justifiably... thnks hun😳

Okay part of it is my fault too I agree.....damn my laziness....chalo ab apni ram katha band karke teri comments shuru karthe hai 😉😆😛......

 

Bingo... aalsi HK😆

Geet finally replied back to Anu.....great....at least she kept her stance as a good friend by replying back somehow.....not that it did any good to Anu ratehr it only increased her worry and led to a fight with Arjun later on but still.....and Arjun this guy is acting weird...I mean I can understand his frustration but knowing Anu from so much time he should ahve understood her instead of yelling at her for her concern for Geet....why do men tend to be such big jerks at times...

 

Geet had to reply to Anu na... Anu had been like a sister to her and have always been beside her... even when she very well knows that Maan wouldn't like Anu to contact her... Anu is persistent... this shows the strength of their bonding and friendship na... how long could she put that off😕 Men would be men from Mars😆... But Arjun's behaviour has a reason u'll find out😉😆

And speaking of jerks....there is not actually a lack of them in here....only abundance....on one side there's geet who is feeling weird from the start of day and finally after knowing the cause of her restlessness fainted right out instead of facing it and end up considering quitting the job altogether...why is she being a coward if she thinks she is doing the right thing?She wanted to move on she should do it in front of him only.....as long as she runs away from him she'll find herself in front of him at every corner....

 

She was contemplating Eshu but then she knew aise job chod di toh adi aur pinky ko reply karna padega... so she didn;t... but she's not ready to give up and will not😊 woh toh hai... yahan bhi toh she wanted to avoid him and bingo found herself facing him on the very day

And there is the other Jerk,maan....now what can be said about him......he is so far the biggest one of all of them....he finds her presence in everything he lay his eyes on yet he denies her mere existence in his life....what to do with this man??

 

ha ha... i already said Men are from Mars... but he's been an impulsive guy.. possessive about her... and when she left he was shattered too... iski personality ka kuch nahi ho sakta😆

the FB was amazing......the beautiful sunset,the hearty teasings of each other,the dinner plans,the foolish move of NT which was snubbed by Maan himself,and finally the wonderful proposal......the dream proposal actually....I didn't thought that you'll make him propose to her yet but glad u did it....the proposal contained all the answers to her insecurities,her wishes,desires n love.....that was beautiful....and also his protectiveness towards her....who can help it??😆

 

how could i miss that... maine prologue main hi marriage proposal hint kiya tha... had to bring it on😳... I so wanted him to snub off NT in Geet's defense... glad u enjoyed the sunset and the whole FB... last happy happy FB

And now back in the present she is trying to play hide-n-seek again with him.....well she can hide herself but how can she hide her presence which he can detect anywhere......and finally he laid his eyes on her.....shock would have been an understatement for his feelings when he saw her there as he's under some other impressions of where she might be......

 

You are right where do u hide from someone who is a part of you😕... you are bound to meet them... to complete yourself and the person... where else for him... never in the wildest drream he would have thought of meeting her in his own hotel... but she stoos right there in front of eyes.

so now I'm going off to read what happened next 😆😆😆...I'm dying to read it from the time u updated......byeeeeeee