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Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar (Page 102)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
sab se pehla kaam....kjbcjhgsdvghkjsdvnbucfsjdhasjghvckj bhjgfvshf............ nikamma, nalayak,gadhe,kutte,khothey.....AngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry

na na ye sab tere waasthe nahi re Soni.....ye sab gaaliyan hai IF ke liye.....teri update ko bhi main 'like' nahi kar paayi....bolo bhala ye kya baat hui???AngryAngryAngryI'm berrryyyyyyyyy angry with IF.....huh....

chal ab update ki baatein-shaatein karthein hai.....tu na apni hunter diwaar pe latka pehle....LOL

He knew that it was she on the call....I knew it that he'll know....haiiii how painful it must be to go through some thing like that....not able to talk even if u are only a phone call away from each other...and he called back only to hear Adi at the other end whom he mistook for her supposed husband.....oh the disappointment I felt at that instant I can't possibly explain....I can make out his pain at that moment.... the pain that is still there...that will never ever go without her being with him.....the pain he possibly couldn't ever share with anyone,not even his Daadi....so sad!!!

And the sole witness of this whole ordeal...this whole pain is Vicky,who didn't have a clue of what's happening and with whom....if only he had known about Maan n Geet before-hand..... still he tried to bring Geet,his friend,out of the pain she's going through in his own  ways... .making her laugh at his jokes....diverting her attention.....being a true friend.....who doesn't need to know what's wrong with teh other....they just know something is wrong and they are by your side cheering you up and bring you out of your sadness....they never force you to tell what's wrong but wait for you to open up yourself......like Vicky asked Geet to come to him if needed to open up about her pain.....i just love everything about the notion called Friendship.....n Friends......Kaminis take inspiration from such instances LOLBig smile.....



So the defeated duo are heading back to Delhi after being stumped by Maan yet again....serves them right.....esp.that witch NT....I wouldn't want her anywhere near Geet for now after getting an idea of what she was involved in possibly to ruin Geet's life....AngryAngryAngry

Here comes my favourite part of your updates honey....THE PAST...or THEIR PAST.... The whole interview thing was nice.....and Anu's teasing along with Maan and Geet's retaliation was fun....Anu never leaves an opportunity to tease both Maan n Geet.....that girl is really something....I just love her character more n more....so lively,funny,trusting and adorable..... and that cute moment they shared there was so adorable....I love such cosy moments....but that witch has to ruin it by her evil gaze....huh AngryAngry.....so that's when she basically started plotting against Maan n Geet I guess.... after seeing for herself tehir love for each other....

Rano is such a sweet lady...she supported her daughter's choice of her man and made sure she's happy.....Anu was being Anu all through the time LOL......her adorable self.....and maan was being Maan,his caring n protective self with Geet Embarrassed.....life seems so beautiful for them at this point.....

Man was he trying to make her jealous by being with Sameera now....??Boy that's an open invitation for trouble for any boyfriend who has a possessive girl friend yaar LOLLOL....and see the aftermath of your little act...Geet became reckless again.....but I wonder whose car was that.....first the figure in Geet's bedroom in the middle of night,now this car stalking her at her college....what's going on Kamini..???What are u planning in your evil brain now??Angry

So he was not there when she needed him the most....he was away for to months during which all that is responsible for their separation has happened in HP.....but what is that???I hope we'll get the answer to this significant question soon.....and here Maan is finally in Mumbai now.....waiting for their confrontation excitedly......

And you know what taht last dialogue of Vicky's "Kaun hai be?" ,instantly reminded me of our Kaminis conversations...I think they are having their affect on you kamini ROFL,well no complaints as that was fun watching him fumble with Maan on teh other sideLOLLOL.....

I'm still unable to like u honeyCry......but I'm glad to see u too are getting more than 100 likes with ur updates....may the count only raise with each update u give......Tongue





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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
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[QUOTE=namita25]great part Soniya.....par yaar honestly speaking ..I don't know why but I feel that present track is moving at a snail's pace......waise I am happy to see Maan  reaching  Mumbai.....really like Vicky..he is trying his best to bring smile on geet's face...yaar agli baar present track mein I demand Maaneet  confrontation.....bahut intezaar hua yaar ab milwa bhi do in dono ko....thak gayi hoon mein ek hi baat kehte kehte par tujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aata kya....ab maan bhi jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa naaaaaa LOLLOLLOL

Thanks Namu....
 
snail's paceLOL... sad times always drag sweetuLOL
 
oye... itna bhi snail's pace nahin hai yaa... and now Maan too is here... toh these ppl will meet for sure na... and itn i jaldi Maaneet confrontation? matlab uske baad epilogueOuchLOL
 
pehle milne toh de... do chaar dhamake nahi honge toh pata kaise chalega ki maan-geet saamne aaye hainWinkLOL
 
maan jao? oye maan ko kahan bhej rahi hai?
 
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oye Soniya......Maaneet confrontation jab hoga ..tab hoga....lekin tu uske baad kam se kam 100 -200 parts ke baad epilogue ka sochegi...samjhi..LOL
aur mein Maan ko kahin nahin bhej rahi...ROFLhaiiii babaji mein toh aisa soch bhi nahi sakti...uske bina mera kya hoga.........main tu tujhe mana rahi thi......ki tu maan jaaye present  track mein MU  end karne ke liye..LOL





Edited by namita25 - 24 March 2011 at 9:21am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged

Present Kaminis......

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
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Present Kaminis......


abi nahi be...abhi tim ehai apun ke aane ka...thoda wait karr....LOLLOL
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i did it!!!


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Ohhhh I'm sooooooooooooooo happy seeing us 3 branded as Kaminis...bas aashu ki kami hai....pata nahi woh lagayegi ya nahi.....I'm all Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile right now.....moi lubbbbbbbbbbssssssss u my chweet kaminis......


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Ohhhh I'm sooooooooooooooo happy seeing us 3 branded as Kaminis...bas aashu ki kami hai....pata nahi woh lagayegi ya nahi.....I'm all Big smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile right now.....moi lubbbbbbbbbbssssssss u my chweet kaminis......


Eshu.... I can't like you but you know I lub ju.... Heart

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
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i am completely hooked to your story...i am lost in terms of the dialogues since they are in hindi...but your fantastic narrative work makes up for it big time...i am going to faint when maan and geet meet again at the present...keep updating!
 
thanks a ton dearBig smile
i'm humbled... glad tht u r enjoying it so muchEmbarrassed
 
for emphasis i write dialogues in hindi and english... i'm sorry if u hv missed on something... but do let me know if u find anything uncomprehensible... i'll try and translate itEmbarrassed
 
Maan and Geet would soon be meeting... please deariehold urself... don't faintLOL
 
would love to hear more from uEmbarrassed
 
it's ok about the dialogues...thankfully i read your story sittiing down...that way when i faint i won't hurt myself too badly...LOL ....but it really is an awesome story and the way that you have twist and turned it to the point where it is at now is just amazing...i hope your update is soon to follow!
 
 

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