Originally posted by: euphoricEshu i hope u fine? is it the eppy?
Originally posted by: -jia-Sonia... tu apne hisse ka ek takka kab de rahi hai???
Maine aaj ek takka de kiya... abhi ek baaki hai...
Jiaaaa....🤗🤗🤗🤗Originally posted by: -jia-Sonia Jaanu... 🤗
I finished all the parts in thread one.. You are AMAZING...remarkable, wonderful, incredible, brilliant, superb and all those adjectives I can't think of right now...😃 the story is so intense that it took me in a wave of emotional ride.. Why did these have to separate??😒 stupid Brij...I wonder whats the back story of HP is... is Brij the one who killed Geet's parents?? I cannot wait for the story to unfold... and then when they meet again.... its going to be so magical...😍Maan is so possessive...so loving... the party scene....☺️☺️☺️☺️ now see if you can make us blush with just a neck kiss zara soch...kya hoga jab woh dono kissy kissy karenge...😍The last part nearly choked me....to see Maan standing down to see her open the window...Aaaahhh It was just....FAB woh bhi kya kare...yeh dil hai ki maanta nahi...😛I love the ease and finesse with which you write the dialogues...Mindblowing!!!!Jaldi jaldi update karde please....Now I have just more thing left to sayEHHK aandolan ki maange puri karo....😆
Originally posted by: .muskaancongrats on new thread ...
did i say english paper is easy... it is boring... everytime i read a chapter i sleep .... and my boredom was increased coz my modem crashed.... finally aaj theek ho gaya....so yes there goes my guess...i hate u... u updated part 18 before i guessed trust me i had come up with something on the same lines ... but i dont hate u i was kidding...challo lets move ahead .... brij is her bro so naturally she wont maary him but he will force her into marrying someone of his choice so that he gets the property.... and that someone will be wait who all r left to enter the FF.... i think the person they would try forcing her into marrying will not b any imp character.... only the situation wil be tricky . .... geet goes to HP with her parents, in short goes missing, maan is not in twon that tym when he comes back he goes in search for her... reaches her HP house, finds her sitting in wedding clothes, supposedly marrying someone else and he leaves.... his damned male ego steps in and hence instead of confronting her he leaves.... namita does not know abt maaneet love, she thinks maan likes sam and hence due to some MU tells geet maan is engaged.... geet acts mahan and decides not to bother maan with her problems and RIPPED APART .... now coming to the present.... maan is soon going to meet geet again but i am certain he will yet think she is married and his ego will not let him say anything, but eventually he will find out..... did i eat your mind .....
Honey miss u sooo muchhhh....
sorry dearies for making u all wait...
Rakhi and Shruti... hope update pad ke tera gussa thanda ho jaye😊-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-
"Pata hai Geet, yahan sab log bohut achche hain, except the proprietor's wife. Bas usse door rehna" Pinky told Geet as she took her to meet the hotel staff. "woh itni buri hain?" Geet asked meekly. "arre tu mat dar... you would hardly be interacting with her. Besides, Sasha knows how to deal with her." Pinky said reassuring Geet. The rest of the day went with Geet being introduced to all and familiarizing with everyone. All that had transpired, had taken a great toll over Geet's confidence and her conduct. She was no more the same happy go lucky girl, she used to be. She was wary of strangers around her. But as it runs in the reins of the hospitality sector, Geet was immediately made to feel at home. Ofcourse having Adi and Pinky around helped a lot too.
In the evening, Geet went home with Adi and Pinky and when she reached home, she was bombarded with queries about her day and work from Pammi.
Flashback
"I'm so not going to let him go for this one" Anu added grumpily on her phone and she slammed the phone shut. Geet, looked at disconnected line and then turned to him. "Oh... toh is liye aapne itni subah subah aa kar meri neend kharab ki" she narrowed her eyes at him. "Mishti... what else could I do?... she had planned to eat up your whole day" he emphasized on each word. Geet rolled her eyes at him. "That's so rude! Maan woh aapki chotti behan hai" Geet tried explaining... "Correction... irritating chotti behan... besides you promised me and I so wanted you for myself if only just for a day, for the time being" he quipped winking at her and she blushed as she lightly hit his arm.
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"Anu, honey... why are you being so difficult?" arjun asked as he tried to coax a sulking Anu. After Maan had outsmarted Anu, not wanting to go to her own place, she went straight at Arjun's place. "How could Veerji just abduct Geet like that!" she complained. "What? Maan abducted Geet... Matlab?" Arjun asked a little perplexed and Anu narrated him the entire episode that left Arjun laughing. "Tum has rahe ho?" she narrowed her eyes asking. "Sorry baby... but had never thought Maan could do something like that" he said in his defense. "tumhe nahi pata... Veerji is obsessed with her... he can do anything for her" Anu told him. "Love makes people crazy... but obsession can be dangerous" he said. "Matlab?" she asked. Mischievously smiling at her, he put his hands around her waist as he pulled her close and leaning in he rubbed the tip of his nose to her cheeks as he whispered, "My obsession is my love baby... give me a chance, I'll show you who's more passionate... me or your Veerji" Anu blushed as she hit him on his chest and hugged him. Smiling, Arjun hugged her back.
"Aap batayenge hum kahan ja rahe hain?" Geet asked for the nth number of time as she put another potato chip in her mouth. "Geet, patience naam ki kisi cheez ke baare main suna hai tumne... kaha na kuch der aur" he replied a little irritated. She frowned and turned away from him to look outside the window... "kuch der aur... kuch der aur keh keh ke 1 ghanta ho gaya... babaji dekha aapne abhi se kaise hukum chalate hain mujh pe" she complained looking up as she kept munching on her chips.
Spacious, warm, cozy and nice, it was a perfect getaway from the bustling city life. The interiors of it were wood and glass. She was surprised to see the huge piano and the fireplace that gave the room a very alluring appeal. As Geet was observing the serene beauty of the gracefully done place, a uniformed chef came to stand by them. He then exchanged greetings with Maan and politely gave her a bow. Geet smiled back in acknowledgement and then she went back to explore the place. She pulled the curtains open of huge French windows to glance at a small well-trimmed garden. The house, the garden were encircled by a picket fence that marked its boundaries. All of a sudden she felt as if she had been shifted to the colonial era. Watching her expressions, Maan came towards her and hugged her from behind, "I knew you would like it" he said satisfied. Geet leaned behind a little so as her back now rested against his chest as she said dreamily, "Like it?... I love it!" she almost screamed the last part. "You haven't yet seen the best part of it" he whispered in her ears and then taking her hand he led her towards the back door of the cottage. If what she had seen was dazzling... the sight in front of her caught her off-guard. The back door of the cottage opened to a porch that looked over to the beautiful lake. Geet looked at the breath-taking site in awe as she forgot to blink her eyes or even to breathe. He huskily whispered, "Breathe Geet" and placed a soft peck on her cheek. "This is beautiful" she whispered.
Excitedly, he led her and showed her around the whole place. The dining room, the kitchen, the bedrooms, etc. Each room had stuck to the original theme yet was so different than the other. "I can stay here forever" Geet said as they reached his room. "Feel free ma'am. Its all yours" he said as he put one hand behind his back and brought the other forward to his waist and bowed in front of her a little imitating the British men of the colonial era and she laughed. His room had his private gym, study area, a small private bar and when he opened the final door she couldn't help but exclaim, "Could I have expected anything less than a Jacuzzi for Maan Singh Khuana?" catching on with her teasing tone, he pulled her close and whispered throatily, "Madam, I would want and love to share this as well with you... Do you want to try it now?" Geet at once turned a deep hue of red at the implication of his words and turned to move out but he caught her and his lips almost touched her ears when he whispered, "one day for sure. Aur us din tum mujhe rok nahi paogi Geet" said that her knees felt weak as she felt thousands of butterflies somersaulting in the pit of her stomach.
"Rano keep the bags ready... kal subah ki pooja khatam hote hi humme yahan se nikal na hai" Mohinder instructed Rano. "Tune apni zidd nahi chod ni" Daar ji's voice called on their attention as he entered the room and Rano instinctively adjusted her duppata over her head. "zidd? Galat zidd toh aap log pakad ke baithe hain daar ji... main yahan sirf meri Beeji ke liye aata hoon... If it hadn't been for Beeji's death anniversary I would have never entered this house ever" Mohinder said with pain and anger clearly etched over his face. "aur main... hum sab... yeh parivar... tera kuch nahi?" Daarji asked dubiously. "mera parivar Rano aur Geet se hai, Darji... aur Simi? Simi bhi aap hi ki beti thi na?" Mohinder asked gulping down the lump in his throat. "us ladki ka naam mat le mere aage... na uska... na uski us beti ka... koi nahi lagte woh mere... I just came to explain it to you once... iske baad Brij jo bhi kare main usse nahi rokunga" saying he stormed out of the room.
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Geet enjoyed the delectable Punjabi food which Maan had got made from the chefs as per her likes. He looked on as she enjoyed her favourite brownie dessert. Where, he didn't object her to take her parents' calls, he didn't let her take Anu's call and answered it himself letting her know that Geet was fine. As they were talking in his room, she had fallen asleep and he kept looking her. Watching her sleep in his arms, his room, on his bed was adding on to his ecstasy as he realized what he had been missing in his life so far. He now felt more anxious than ever to share his life with her completely. But he knew he needed to wait.
"Geet... tum mujhe pehle bata deti ki tumhe Pani main utar kar fishing karni hai... toh main tumhe mana thodi karta" he said teasing her as he tried hard to control his laughter. Needless to say, Geet was annoyed as she splashed some water on to him and groaned. Holding her hands, he pulled her up as she kicked the fishing rod away and tried to wriggle the extra water out of her duppata. Her wet clothes, that had become quite transparent now, clung to her body extenuating her each curve. Though it was a private area, he looked around just to ensure no one was around to witness the sensuous glory of his Geet. Maan sighed as he moved towards her. "Andar chalo Geet" he started leading her inside but she whimpered as she tried to wriggle some water from the hem of her kurta. He closed his eyes and then scooped her in his arms. "Geet, thand lag jayegi" he whispered and walked inside with her.
Around half an hour later, when Geet came downstairs, dim lights had come up in the room. However, there was no one else around. "Maan" she called out looking around. "Main kitchen main hoon Geet, 5 minutes... yahan mat aana" he told her as he prepared the sauce for the pasta. She frowned and started towards the kitchen but heard him again, "Geet! I said NO!" he said authoritatively. "Kyun?" she grimaced and he smiled. "Please" he pleaded this time. "Ok" she complied unwillingly as she went over to the huge windows and rested her arms over the railing, watching the sun as it melted into the lake water.
Not being able to stop himself anymore, he went behind her and holding her lightly kissed her shoulder... making her gasp... as the song played into the background
He pulled her to him as he placed her hand on his chest and looked deep in her eyes, with a look that burned her insides causing her gaze to fall immediately
Holding her by her waist, he placed his lips on her cheeks now as he moved to kiss, tease and caress where the loose strand had been resting.
As he increased the pressure of his lips, she closed her eyes and moved her hands over his shoulders.
Moving his hand over the length of her arms, he intertwined his fingers with hers and bringing her hand above, he kissed each finger as he kept looking at her watching her reaction.
He twirled her around to hold her from behind... and slowly pushed her hair forward bringing it to rest over her shoulder. The almost backless blouse exposed her back to him as he slipped his hand on her bare waist and caressed it lightly with his fingers. The moment he traced his hand over her belly button, she freed herself and ran out of his grip to stand by the window once again.
Her breathing ragged and her beartbeats intensified as she held on to the window sill for support. The sun had set and the water was still a faint gold. Walking upto her, he ran his fingers over her back starting from the back of her neck to her waist. As she tried to move, he held on to her pallu.
He walked upto her again and supporting her by holding her waist, he started teasing and feeling her back with his caresses and kisses and then bit her very lightly. Unwittingly a moan escaped her lips causing her to bit her lower lip.
Walking over to face her, through his eyes, he conveyed his passion and desire. His dark eyes, dared her to move as she felt her insides melt just like the sun in the water.
He caressed her lower lip with his thumb urging her to stop biting her lip.
He swayed with her in his arms... as his hands move below her hips to lift her up and move in circle holding her, he then let her slip against his own body.
He leaned in kissing and licking her nape... neck and collarbone. She bent behind a little to give him more access as her hands moved into his hair by its own will and her other hand slipped on his back while he pulled her close.
Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera
Twirling her in and out of her arms, he held her close as he moved his fingers passionately feeling every inch of her exposed skin around her neck and shoulder. She leaned back on him.
He began his assault on her neck again... bit her earlobe and kissed and licked the skin below her earlobes as he made his way to her shoulders.
She turned in his arms and looking into his eyes brought her trembling lips close to his and looked at him unsure. Not wasting a single second, taking her cue, he gently pressed his lips over hers and kissed her tenderly. The kiss expressed more than their words could. It expressed his love... his declaration... her trust... her complete surrender. Moments later, as he rested his forehead against hers, she whispered, "I love you Maan" he opened his eyes and kissed away the tears that were threatening to spill any moment. He took her in his embrace; "you are everything to me Geet" was all that he whispered. Geet's grip on him grew tighter and he smiled kissing the top of her head.
He then served her the food he himself had made for her. Their playfulness was back as he kept teasing her. On their way back, Maan drove exceptionally slow just to steal a little more time with her. None of them spoke because no words were needed as Geet rested her head over his shoulder. Their comfortable silence made the whole atmosphere peaceful.
It was a little after 1 when a loud bang, jolted Geet out of her sleep. As she adjusted her vision, in the dim light of the night bulb, she saw a faint figure standing by her bed. A creepy fear took over her as she asked, "kaun hai..." and sat upright at once reaching for light switch but by then the figure ran over to the window and effortlessly jumped out of it, leaving behind a shaken Geet.
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