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part 13-
 
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i loved the card part a lot
 
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part 14-
 
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hope nupur doesn't get hurt again
 
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part 15-
 
i am crying for nupur
 
don't know why
 
but your ff has touched me the most
 
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part 16-
 
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read all updated parts
 
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 hellooooooo frnds!!!!!!!!!! i missed you guys!!!! 🤗 

actually i had college annual play and was completely caught up with it fro the last week!!!!! 😳😳but i am back!    ðŸ˜ƒ    ðŸ˜ƒ     

dezma@ that was soo sweet of u yar! and sooryy for disappearing!        

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kinzu@ love u! ðŸ˜³ ðŸ˜†



  PART 18

Mayank sat opposite to Nupur in the restaurant , looking at her. she looked beautiful .. Mayank was lots in her beauty .. he loved her so much and the fact that she loved him back snet a wave of pure joy in his heart… finally he was ready to accept the love.. he needed her.. she was all he cared about now..

 

Jaane kaise shab dhali jaane kaise dil khila…
Jaane kaise kab kahaan chal pada yeh silsila…
Meri aankhon ko yeh kaisa manjar mila…

Tera chehra sanam ik rubaai si hai….
Mere dil jism-o-jaan pe tu chaai si hai….

 

They ate the meal in silence… through out the meal Mayank was staring at her making her.. the intense stare was making her feel warm all over and she was getting so nervous that twice her elbow was about to make the glass of water fall… Nupur was still shocked at his behavior … in juts one hour he had reduced her to the same childish fluttering of heart she had always felt around him.. the problem was that unlike the man avoiding a besotted child before , now he was acting like a lover that disarmed Nupur's every move or attempt to act rude …

Mayank: "r you done?"

Nupru: " han?"
she quickly lowered her eyed at being caught red handed staring at him.

Mayank: Are you done with dinner?"

Nupur: " errmmm… yup…

Mayank stood and moved to her side. Thinking they were leaving she finally breathed , which was not missed by Mayank who chukled and held out his hand…

Mayank: " we are not leaving yet sweetheart..i have other plans!"
he gave a sideways glance to the dance floor and Nupur understood.

She thought over refusing , but somewhere in her heart she didn't had the courage to refuse Mayank. She accepted his hand and slowly they moved towards the dance floor…

 

 

Betaabiyon ki shaamo sehar se…
Na tha main waakif dard-e-jigar se…
Guzra nahi tha main toh kabhi bhi…
Pyaar ki dilkash raah e guzar se…
Deewaanagi ki yeh intehaan hai…
Har chehre mein chehra tera hai…
Sari duniya teri parchaai si hai…
Mere dil jism-o-jaan pe tu chaayi si hai…
Tera chehra sanam ik rubaayi si hai..
Mere dil jism-o-jaan pe tu chaayi si hai…
Jaane kaise shab dhali jaane kaise dil khila…
Jaane kaise kab kahaan chal pada yeh silsila….

 

 

They kept on dancing for a long time… Mayank cherishing every moment when he had Nupur in his arms… with each passing minute , his resolve to have her forever increased… he knew he had been running away from her but no longer was he capable of that…

On the other hand Nupur swirled in his arms remembering the last time they danced… the imaes of the dance brought with them all the memories of that night and with it came the …PAIN.. she remembered how she had accepted her love to him in his arms.. how she had expected acceptance but what she got was the fact that he along with her father was trying to send her away…

Hide as she might the pain was instantly etched in her eyes… a scowl appeared on Mayank's face at seeing the pain… the eyes that were shining with his and only his name till few days ago were now filled with pain.. and he knew he was the reason…

 

 



Nupur: (in a shaky voice) can we go back?

Without replying Mayank took her hand and left the restaurant… throughout the way back he kept holding her hand .. both of them didn't say a word to each other.. but there hearts were communicating…. As they both were waiting…

Like their hands their hearts were linkjed and both were waiting… to be loved… 
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved this part yaar... worth the wait... n awwwwwwww i dint knw u wer busy wit ur college activities... i loved the "loverboy" mayank... but this nupur.... yaar uska dimaag galat timing pe galat cheezon ki yaad dilata hai.... 😡

 
he knew he had been running away from her but no longer was he capable of that…
 
loved this line.... so happy to knw that mayank is finally accepting her whole heartedly... i agree that nupur is right from her POV... But she shd atlst listen n understand mayank's situation...
 
waitin for the next update.... do update wen ur free n pm me too.... thx a lot dear.... 😃
Edited by arjun_dez - 13 years ago
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awesome update dear...loved it.............................
Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by arjun_dez - 13 years ago
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superbbbbbbbbb part mulan :D
hope dey'll come close soon :D