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waiting to be loved- mjht ff! :) Epilogue page 79 (Page 26)

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
nice part

loved it

continue soon

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Good that Nups got brains n she wont force herself on Mayu now
It wil hurt her but its best for her
Mayu is avein hi running away frm her
Mana he hav reason but it isnt compulsary tht same wil happen as it happened wit his parents
Sajan parents oye hoye
Waiting for Sam to be back

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Wao dear
amazing nd awsm part yar.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
omggggggggggggggggggg 
finally sam papa 
n nupur massi ban hi gayi :D
wow !!!!!!
part 6 n 7 are wonderful :D

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Beautiful update Mulan
Really veryyyyyyyyyyy nice
Maynk said that nups is not matured but i think she is more matured then anyone
i respect her decision- Love my Nups a lot
wow sam papa ban gaya- thats a great news
lovelyyyyyyyyy update mulan- good going
keep it up

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged
awesum update....mulan!!!
i felt soo bad 4 nupur....but she learnt her lesson...
she'll avoid mayank now... & concentrate on her baba's dream... den mayu wil realise his mistake...
aww... i'm luvin it!!
luv ya!Hug

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
wonderful update..Wink
continue soon

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged

hello frnds!!!!!!!!!!!! HugHugHugthanku sooooooo much for all the lovely coments!!! hope u like this part too!!!  do coment to let me know ur precious views!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

love u all!!!!! Embarrassed

thanku so much FARIA and ISHITA for such cute scraps!!! love u both!!! Hug

 

 


                                               PART 8

 

Gunjan was sleeping while Nupur sat beside her.

"Nupur…"

Nupur turned and faced Mayank.

Nupur: " hmm??"

Mayank: " tum ghr chale jao..mein hoon yahan.."

Nupur: " nahe..mein theekh hoon..i want to stay with her…"

Mayank: " Nupur…"

Nupur again turned…

Mayank: " about tonight…I am sorry…"

Nupur: " you don't need to be sorry… it is my fault Mayank..i cant force you to love me..and I wont ever do that again…"

She passed him a weak smile to cover the pain she had unconsciously portrayed in her words…

Mayank: " Nupur ..i …"
Nupur: " I said na Mayank… you are right… you cant help it if you dnt like me..i was a fool.."
Mayank moved forward.." Nupur.."
Nupur: " infact I should thank you… you finally made me realize how wrong I was…"
Mayank was now standing very close to her, and she was on the verge of crying…" wese bhe aj to itne khushi ka din hai…"

Mayank hugged her and without realizing what she was doing she hugged him back and cried Mayank pulled her closer in his arms and let her let out her anguish..he knew she will hate him forever and if ever she will be able to forgive him, he was sure he will never forgive himself ….Mayank could feel his heart wrench at every sob…he was the cause of her tears and he knew he will never be able to forgive himself for this..never…

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Nupur was hugging him tightly and crying…. She knew he was the one who was the reason for all her pain but she still couldn't make herself hate him..she loved him too much for that… she was ready to cherish this moment when he was close to her… maybe for a lifetime all she will have of him is this hug… her heart ached and cried but she had lost the battle and she was ready to accept it…

Let me hold you for the last time….
It's the last chance to feel again….
But you broke me, now I can't feel anything…

When I love you and so untrue…
I can't even convince myself…
When I'm speaking it's the voice of someone else…


Running back through the fire..
When there's nothing left to say..
It's like chasing the very last train..
When it's too late, too late..


Oh, it tears me up…
I tried to hold on but it hurts too much…
I tried to forgive but it's not enough…
To make it all okay…

                                                         

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Sam happily stood waiting at the reception area of the hospital to know where Gunjan was. He didn't call Mayank or Nupur as he wanted to surprise them by arriving earlier than expected.

Receptionist: " romm 404 sir."

Sam smiled at her and left in search of room.

He was very exited to see Gunjan and his son … his son… he was overwhelmed by the joy of becoming a father…but he wasn't prepared for the sight that greeted him on his entrance to the room…

Mayank and Nupur stood hugging each other.. what more, Nupur was crying…

Sam: " ahem ahem…"

Mayank and Nupur instantly broke apart , and Nupur quickly wiped her tears.

An odd silence followed until Mayank moved forward hugged his brother congratulating him, : " Sam! Tu papa ban gaya!!"
Sam was easily distracted by this and soon he was holding his baby in his hands, and hugging his wife , and the scene he had just witnessed was forgotten for the time being.

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Sam: " mein rukta hoon Gunjna ke pass, Nupur aur bhai aap dono ghr ja kar thora rest kerlen."

Both tried to argue but Sam was adamant.

Sam : " aur Mayank bhai app Nupur ko bhe drop kerden please."
Nupur; ( instantly) " nahe…" Mayank and Sam stared at her while Gunjan lowered her head.."mera matlab hai..mein ..ermm.. mein khud chale jaon ge na!"

Sam: " but…"

Mayank: " don't worry Sam..i will drop her… you take care !"
he hugged his brother again and escorted Nupur out of the room.

As soon as Gunjan and Sam were alone , Sam kissed her, : " you have no idea how much was I frightened when bhai called me.."
Gunjan hugged him tightly: " you have no idea how frightening tonight was…"

And she went on describing the events leaving a shocked Sam.

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Mayank and Nupur both kept quiet on the way home. Nupur was angry at herself for crying infront of Mayank…. She was afraid what if Mayank thought she was trying to emotionally blackmail him? She had no such intension and that would be the last blow to her self respect and she wasn't sure if she would be able to bear it…

However she couldn't deny ..deny that she felt secure and happy in his arms even if it was for such a short time…it had felt as if surrounded by those arms she was ready to face anything…she could still feel his arms around her and the thought alone made her shiver…

Mayank was quick to notice that.

Mayank: " are you cold?"

Nupur: ( turning red) " errmm.. no…"

Mayank took off his coat and gave it to her…

Mayank: " take it..you are shivering.."

As there was no way she would tell him the real reason for the shiver so she quietly took the coat and covered herself with it…strangely it did comforted her…

Soon they reached the house Nupur got out…

Nupur: " thanks…you want to come in?"

Mayank: " no..i will go home and get things ready for the homecoming of Gunjan and the prince.."

Nupur was amazed the way Mayank's eyes shined when he thought about his nephew.

Mayank caught her staring and so instantly pulled himself together and said: " by the way we have to meet the delegates tomorrow so I will pick you up from here and we can go meet them in the evening…(for the first time Nupur saw Mayank searching for words) "that is ..if… I mean if you don't want to come to meet Gunjan when she returns from hospital..in that case we can go to the meeting form there.."
He looked up inquiringly waiting for an answer but Nupur was too shocked to give him one.. it was as if he had invited her to his house…for the first time ever he had invited her to…. She pulled her thoughts together before they could go astray.. she could not commit the same mistake twice.. perhaps he was doing this only because he knew Gunjan will be happy to see her… she has to keep her thoughts in check…she couldn't afford another mistake…she already knew she will never be able to pull back the broken pieces of her life and so she had to stay in her senses..she had to remember MAYNK DIDN'T LOVE HER… this thought worked as ice water on all her emotions… he didn't love her…

Nupur: " yeha sure..I will be there .."

She smiled at him and turned and left…

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she was too exhausted to do anything and so instantly fell on bed and let the sleep take over her mind that was over crowded with thoughts.….

she lied there with Mayank's coat still covering her … and in her sleep she pulled it tighter, holding it as if her life depended on it…and after such a dreadful night she slept quiet peacefully  in the with the coat surrounding her as Mayank's arms had in the hospital………

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