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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

i am not going to tell anything wat i think abt the preview.............hamhari dhamki bhi tumpe asar nahin hotha hain aur tum maan ko hurt karthi rehthi ho

I agree with you dear

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
hi sejal, what have u done? maan with split personality ??? any way congrts for the new thread

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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Here is the most awaited Part 36, as you know I got busy with writing BROKEN FLOWERS , hence this FF got delayed. Anyway I hope you will enjoy this part. 
And grace me with hitting like button and good comments.

Part 36

Please listen to this music while reading this part:

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CopWklmi7f8&feature=related

Operation was performed but Doctor wasn't sure until Maan would get his consciousness back, they were afraid that he could go into coma, coming 24 hours were the most critical time for Maan and Dadima. Dadima decided to visit temple for Maan but media had covered the entrance of hospital to get the news about Maan, it was everywhere in the Media that Maan was still in danger and Doctor denied to say anything about patient. Dadima went to temple from the backside of the hospital with the help of one nurse. Cops were also waiting for Maan to get his consciousness back as according to media, he was a murderer and on the location they found his fingerprints on the gun, but cops were still inspecting the location carefully, Sameer's mansion was under cops' investigation to find some strong proof and they found the solid proof which could twist the entire story.

Back at Geet's house, Shasha and Pinky were crying and they finally decided to inform Geet about it. They wiped their teary eyes and went to Geet's room, Geet was all set to go for her wedding, she looked so excited and happy like today nobody could stop her from running away with Sameer, but of course fate had written some different story for her. With the heavy heart, they looked at Geet, trying to hide their tears, but Geet sensed something wrong through their gestures and haunted facial expressions.

"What happened to both of you?"Geet asked authoritatively.

They both kept silent.

"I will lose my breath, if you won't say anything now."Geet said firmly after sensing the nervousness on their face.

Finally they broke the silence, and Shasha said, "Geet, Sameer." And she started crying, she couldn't finish the sentence.

Geet yelled at her while grabbing her from her shoulder, "Shasha, what happened to Sameer? Tell me now, otherwise I will die right away."    

Pinkey blabbered while sheding tears, "Geet, Sameer was killed, he is no longer in this world."

That's it, and Geet's world came to end, she couldn't believe her ears, her entire life lost the purpose within a second, and she yelled, "No, this can't happen to me, God couldn't be so cruel."

She yelled at top of her lungs, "Sameer" and she fell down on the ground while Sahsah and Pinky caught her, she fainted, and immediately Shasha and Pinkey held her through her arms and laid her down on the bed. Pinkey ran to kitchen to grab some water to sprinkle on her face.

They knew it; Geet wouldn't be able to handle this unfortunate fact of her life but how long they could wait. After all Geet had a right to know about her life and sooner or later, Geet had to accept the reality.

"Poor soul, what did she do wrong in her life? How could God be so heartless? She had already suffered a lot, and now more suffering, does she have any right on happiness?" Pinky yelled while walking towards Geet from kitchen and holding a cup of water in her hand.  

Manga jo mera hai
jaata kya tera hai
maine kaun si
tujhse jannat mangli
kaisa khuda hai tu
bas naam ka hai tu
rabba jo teri
itni si bhi na chali

Shasha and Pinky decided not to tell her anything about Maan as they knew that Maan was her friend and it could even hurt more.

They were sprinkling water on her face, she was slowly sensing the cold touch of water on her face, Geet was trying to open her eyes slowly, each drop of water felt like a current on her numb skin, even though she was trying hard to open her eyes but she had already lost her senses and reached to another world where she wasn't able to hear anything or feel anything, the suffering was much more than sheding tears, tears wouldn't help her, actually tears was a luxury for her in this situation but she wasn't able to feel anyting, her eyelids were heavy with pain, she couldn't see anything but dark against her eyes, she was almost dead, there was no life or no hope left with her.

Shasha and Pinky believed that if God would give you pain then he would give you courage also to tolerate it, it was the only hope they carried, but they were afraid that if Geet would do something wrong, something undesirable with her life, and she didn't have anybody except them with her at the most critical stage of her life. They made sure that either Shasha or Pinky were with Geet all the time, she wouldn't be allowed to stay alone.

After a while, Geet opened her heavy eyelids with much force, Pinkey and Shasha tried to talk to her but it was in vain, she wasn't responding to anything like she had lost her voice or hearing abililty. Sameer was the only ray of happiness in her life which she got but she lost it, she couldn't get anything in her life which she wanted, her life became meaningless, her life was like a sinking ship which nobody could save, she never got love from anyone in her life, and the only person who loved her got killed.

Shasha and Pinky forced her to eat something but she couldn't take a single bite.

A day had already passed but Geet was still half dead, Shasha and Pinky didn't know how to deal with this situation. From the moment Geet fainted, Pinky and Shasha didn't get a single minute of relief or any sleep. At last they noticed that Geet was in deep sleep, so they decided to get some sleep as well.

In half an hour, they heard some noise from Geet's room, but it was wired noise, it was like someone was growling, and slurping. They both instant woke up and ran to Geet's room and they observed that the bottle of sleeping pills was open and floating on the marble floor, Geet was slupring and subconsciously laying on the bed, by looking at this sight, they understood that Geet tried to commit suicide, they immediately called ambulance and took her to the hospital.

What was written in her fate, God knew?

They reached to hospital within a few minutes and doctor promptly performed operation.

                                  **************************************

Police investigation was done at Sameer's mansion and they found the important clue, which was tape from the security camera, being a businessman, Sameer always had good amount of security but during the wedding days, there were so many people in the house so Sameer had loosened security as it was a happy occasion so they wanted people to enjoy but luckily there was a hidden security camera in the room where this incident took place.

Local Delhi Media got this news but they didn't get full information yet. So based on their limited knowledge, they spread the news,

"Maan killed Sameer for Geet, Sameer's would be wife"

"It was the case of love triangle, who knew that reality was not different from a typical bollywood movie"

Dadima heard this news and she couldn't believe what she just heard. Photos of Maan, Sameer and Geet was on the media and she couldn't believe her eyes that Maan was in love with Geet, same Geet who actually got rejected by Maan once, she couldn't believe, it was not possible, after all how was that possible as Maan had rejected Geet, how could he fall in love with her, and Maan was not the kind of person who could go to this extreme for a girl, Dadima was completely reluctant about the entire scenario.

Two hours after operation, Geet got her senses back and she was awake, doctor made her to eat something, she had some food and she was simply staring in the sky from the window. Shasha and Pinky ran to her room but she wasn't in a mood to talk.

Precap: Whatever happened at Sameer's mansion will be revealed in the coming part.

Will Geet forgive Maan after knowing the full truth?

SEJAL

Broken Flowers - short story - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1642620



Edited by Asha2010 - 23 March 2011 at 8:34pm

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
that was quite intense

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
have u heared of slow death thats wat u r doing to me dear with ur updates.............u update once or twice in a week and then give jhatkas all thro ur updates and then leave us @ cliff hanger situation and the precap even worse than that..............pl dont do this to us............i am really tensed to know abt it...................pl jaldi se next update karo yaar

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Nice part. How r you planning to take it forward. Is Geet really going to hate him after knowing the truth. Or is she going to help him getting out of this multiple personality disorder? O, I cannot wait for the next update...

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