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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: purvi08

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hi zara 
lovely update
keep writing๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thx dear purvi ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Deepali88

Excellent and supperb Update zara
all scene was perfect๐Ÿ‘
waiting for next update

thx dear deeps ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: angel_9

hey Zara ...๐Ÿค—

wow cute & sweet update...
loved the description...
&
thanks for the PM

luv u angel ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ thx for reading ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: adeelakhokar

hey zara...
welcome back dear...๐Ÿค—
lovely update ...
loved it...
update it sooon...

thxxx adeela dear!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: simiv

Hey Zara,

Sorry for the late reply!!
 
Very cute update, so slowly the doori will bring them closer? So cute! Update soon!
 
Love, Simi

hey simi dear thx for reading my ff ...and i apologize for not leaving my comment on ur ff plz for give me but yes i try to read ur updates ๐Ÿ˜ณthx for ur swee comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: kiwu

hey zara..
loved it..
plz update it soon..๐Ÿ˜Š

hey dear!i think u r new here so welcome to the forum and thx for reading ...i m glad that u liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey my lovely rocking girlzzz ...hope u all are fine ..thx each 1 of u for liking and commenting on my ff
i m really thankful to ur all becoz i m writing part 8 now and all credit goes to u guyzzz...
my lots of love and bundles of thank u to u all :)

part 8



sapna:what??
khanak:shhh itna chill la q rahi hai pagal...?
sapna:di tu ap bhi tu ajeeb batein kar rahi hain ..
khanak:kuch ajeeb nai hai ...its just i m sharing my feelings with u ...
sapna:par di ap ko aisa q lag raha hai??
khanak:u dumbo agar pata hota tu tujh say bat tohri na karti ...
sapna:di relax kabi kabi aisa hota hai ...ap plz so jao kal ap ko office bhi jana
hai na???
khanak:han (after hearing office the first think click in khanak's mind is)
kal tu shaan ja raha hai ...kahi mujhey isliye tu bura nai lag raha???(khanak thinks inher mind)
nahiii...
sapna:ap kya di pehlay han kaha aur ab nahiii ???ap ney koi purani hind movie tu nahi dekhi na ???
(sapna joked)
khanak:shut ap ...so ja ...
sapna:ok di...gud nyt ..
khanak:gud nyt ...

sapna drifted in to sleep and khanak still trying to sleep ...khanak is constantly thinking abt shaan
she don't know y but yes she is thinking abt him ...

khanak:khanak tu pagal ho gai hai ...




next day ...

khandelwal home:


madhvi:shaan ...shaan
sunil:shaan kaha reh gaya lyt ho jaye ga abhi tu is ko office bhi jana hai..
madhvi:don't worry sunil ata hi hoga ...
madhvi:shaantanu ...shaan...
shaan:yes mom ...coming (shaan shouts from his room)
madhvi:jaldi karo beta u are getting late ...
shaan run to downstairs:ya ya ...i m so sorry mom dad...
sunil:chalo jaldi ao breakfast karlo then we have to leave on time ...
shaan:ya dad
sunil and shaan take there seats while madhvi called every one for breakfast

khusboo and akshay:gud morning every one they both take dadi's blessings
and have there seats ...

whole k family have breakfast and have gud time with all together

shaan:ok ...i m done ..
sunil:me also ...
akshay:shaan tuney sub saman achey sa rakh liya na...
shaan:han bhaiya ...
akshay:are u sure ...sub files important documents and all stuff..
shaan:bhaiyaaa plzz i m not a kid mainey sub kuch rakh liya...
i have checked my bag three times ...
sunil:aksay...shaan keh raha hai tu us ney rakh hi liya hoga ...acha ab jaldi karo ..
shaan starts meeting fist with dadi..
shaan:dadi plz pray for me (shaan said while take dadi's blessings)
dadi:shaan tumhey kehney ki zarorat nai hai main tu hamesha hi tumharey
liye pray karti hun ...
shaan:thx dadi..
madhvi:bless u shaan ...and all the very best to u ...my baby
shaan:mommm i m not more baby...plzzz
khusboo:hey my handsome dever ...all the very best to u
i m sure u r going to do it better then akshay ...
shaan:awww thx sweet heart ...suna bhaiya ???
akshay:han bai tum bhabhi aur dever meri bht tang khictey ho ...
shaan:ok my lovely ladies thx for blessings now i have to leave ...

shaan akshay and sunil left for the office...

khanak and richa are w8ting for shaan in the office ...


shaan entered every greeted with him very nycly and give hm lot flowers with lots of good wishes

shaan see khanak and richa and quick approach to them...

shaan:hey guyz ...tum log mujhey wish nahi karo gay ???
richa:shaan aisa ho sakta hai ...(richa give him a warm hug )all the very
best to u ...i know u can do it...
shaan:thx yar ...
shaan:tum kuch bolo gi ya aisay hi kahri raho gi ??(shaan asks khanak)
khanak:wo...all the best shaan ...apna khayal rakhna ...she just shake hand with him
shaan:thx ...aur tum dono bhi apna khayal rakh na ...aur sath main hi lunch karna ..
(shaan suggest)
richa and khanak:ok ...

akshay interrupts:shaan u r getting late flight miss ho jai gi..
shaan:ok bhaiya ...
for the last time shaan:ok guyz by take care and plz miss me(shaan said with a smile)
khanak:we will miss u shaan :)
richa:ya ..
shaan:ok by
richa and khanak:bye :)


as soon as shaan left khanak is feeling sad she don't even know
why she is feeling this but yes she is very sad with fact that shaan is gone for 15 days ...

richa:ab tu yaha kahrey kahrey kya soch rahi hai kam nai karna kiya??
khanak:i don't know yar ajj kuch bhi karney ka maan nahi kar raha ...
richa:aisa q ..??tabiyet thek hai na tumhari ???
khanak:han tabiyet to thek hai par...
richa:par kya...?????
khanak: mujhey nai pata main apney cabin main ja rahi hun ...
richa:aray meri bat tu sun khanak ...khanak.uff ye larki bhi na ...kya howa is sey achanak???

khanak in her cabin constantly thinking abt shaan she trying to consantrte on her
work but unfortunately she can't ...

khanak thinking in her mind:mujhey kya ho raha hai ??main q kisi cheez
pay consantrate nai kar pa rahi ...ajj kam karney ka maan bhi nai hai ..kya ho raha hai mujhey
ajj sub kuch bht ajeeb lag raha hai...par q????ughhh tu pagal hai khanak ...



after 4 days khanak is seating in her cabin ...doing her routine work and her
mobile rings..

khanak had a bright smile on her face as soon as she look the number flashing
on her screen ...it shaan :)

khanak:shaan ka phone ...she was too excited and nervous equally ..

khanak:hello
shaan:hi ...kaha thi yar tum kab say bell ring ho rahi thi...
khanak:wo actually main buzy thi (she lies)
shaan:wo acha ap tumharey pas apney dost say bat
bhi karney ka w8 na hai ..(he complains )
khanak:nai shaan aisa nai hai ...i m really missing u ...wo i mean we are missing u ...
shaan:really  tu jab say main yaha aya hun tum ney kitni bar call ki mujhey ..?aur wo stupid
richa wo kidhar hai ...???
khanak:richa bhi yahi hai she is at the time is not with me but ya she is also missing u shaan
shaan:lag tu nai raha tum log mujhey bhool gaye na...tum dono soch raho gi acha howa jan johti
khanak:shut p ..pagal ho tum ..kuch bhi bol rahey ho ...
shaan:ok baba i m sorry ...acha ye batao kya ho raha hai...
kahnak:kuch khas nahi bus kam ,,tum batao project ka kam aur meeting kab hai ??
shaan:kam tu thek hai aur meeting 2 din bad hai...
khanak:ooo ok ..so shaan ...tum ..i mean tum meeting hotey hi ajao gay
mera matlab hai phr tu tumhara kam kahtam ho jai ga tu phr 15 din rok
k kya karo gay???
shaan smiles on her silly question and thinks that she is really missing him
so shaan toke the advantage and thinks to have some fun...
shaan:ohh my sweet heart is missing me a lot hann??(shaan said in husky voice)
khanak start  breathing heavily she dosen expected this reaction 4rm him
actually she was shocked..
khanak:wh...what ...sweet heart han ??
shaan:han tum ho na meri sweet heart.. ?(shaan was laughing becoz he knows he is
successful in his plane)
khanak:shaan kya ho gaya hai..tumhey ??
shaan thinks that he should not trouble her more:khanak tum bhi na main mazak kar raha tha
khanak was relifed ..:idiot
shaan:thx mam :)waisay main tumhey bata dun k meeting k bad bhi main nai a sakta
q k us k bad bhi mujhey yaha apna legal work karna hoga ..aur agar waisay tu i m sure k hamey hi ye project miley ga hopefully ..tu phr mujhey aur bhi cheezey disscuss karni hongi..samjhi ??
kahnak:ok ...smajh gai
shaan:acha kahank mujhey ik kam say jana hai tu i'll talk tu later
khanak:ok ...bye take care ...
shaan:u 2 ayr han us richa ki bacchi say kehna k main us say bht naraz hun ..
khanak:ok kehdun gi ...
shaan ok bye
khanak:bye




so girlz this was part 8 i hope u enjoyed it ...
plz keep reading keep commenting and let your suggestion come to me
becoz i need it :)
critisimis always welcome with open arms

plz ignore or correct the spelling mistakes๐Ÿ˜Š

luv zara


Edited by AzaraA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai zara,
finally u got time to update...
i pity khanak..she is not aware of her feelings for shaan..she misses him a lot..poor baby..
n shaan teasing her calling sweet heart..how can anyone resist the husky voice..wish soon shaan to gets the feelings for khanak..as of now there is no sign of that..
next update ke liye kitna time lagega tujhe?jaldhi update karna..
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
zara lovely update
i was waiting eagerly for the update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ab khanak shaan k liye feel krne lgi hai...hmmm...
Very nice part...keep writng n update soon:)