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~deewangi~ maaneet ff pt85 pg133 20MAR (Page 86)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
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hey...me too waiting...........
please update soon.......

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~deewangi~
part 83

 
Rano couldn't bear this strange feeling towards her.. she just left from there.. now she understood why Maan seemed so helpless. When a mothers heart could feel she was Geet.. then Maan couldn't be blamed at all.

Geet was shocked & confused. She was wondering when did she tell Maan that he was heartless, how could she..she sat cuddled up in the kitchen. kuch samjh nahi payen, mama ne aise kyun kaha? How could her mama ask her something like that!! she cried ..but then her crying didn't make sense. She immediately called Arjun & arohi.
Geet - could u please some down here immediately
Arjun - ticket Maan le raha hain kya
Geet rolled her eyes
Arjun - teehk teehk, I will check the ticket availabity
arohi - kya baat hain
Geet - its bit confusing I need to talk to u personally
Arjun - 3hrs main next flight hain
Geet smiled
Arjun - Maan se khah dena I will charge him latter '
Geet - thanxs

 
Geet was getting tensed she went to the airport & decided to wait there, she didn't want to meet Maan with this state of mind.. he could see through her & will get tensed & worried for her.
Arjun called from the airport - we are boarding the flight
Geet - I am waiting
Arjun - stupid 8hrs ki flight hain
arohi - woh aise tension Maan ke samne betagi tho Maan pura ghar sur pe utta lega
Geet giggled
Arjun - wat ever...
Geet - come soon.
 
 
OUTHOUSE

Maan woke up late at night Rano sat next to him & caressed his forehead.
Rano - main usse milli
her words were filled with compassion & understanding.
Maan hugged her immediately.
Rano - I understand & kissed his forehead lovingly
Rano - isse main samjha doongi.
Maan - nahi mama Rimi ko kuch mat kahna please
Rano - aise kaise challenga beta
Maan - mama please abhi nahi
Rano - lekin
Maan lifted her hand & kept it over his head - mama aapko meri kasam.. aap rimi ko abhi kuch nahi kaho ge
Rano painfully nodded caressing his cheek.

 

AIRPORT

Geet was restless & immediately googled about rimi.. nothing much was revealed. Except that she was a successful  new model engaged to Maan Singh khurana. Nothing about her parents or family background. She checked all the articles, pictures.. nothing told much about her. She carefully saw all her snaps.. just to see if she had any snap that could lead to some thing more on rimi. Now she was getting curious about rimi!! why was Rano so concerned about that Rimi?? why Maan got engaged to rimi when he still loves his Geet..

 
OUTHOUSE

Maan checked the time it was 11.30pm.. he immediately got worried..
Rano understood he was worried for her.
Maan murmured usne dinner bhi nahi kiya hoga, Rano closed her eyes. She was one way happy for Maan but other side she was worried that this girl should not break his heart.

 

He reached the flat opened the door slowly. from the silence that prevailed he knew, she was not around.. the chillness in the air he felt, he knew she was not around, he rushed into the room, he checked the wash room, kitchen, balcony, he ran his fingers in the hair, he took the phone & called her number. The phone rang but she didn't answer the call. He panicked, he wondered wat happened to her. He checked the wardrobe, all her belongings where in tact.  He checked the table for any note.

 
he went down & checked with the watchmen if they saw her going out.  They were not sure. Maan drove crazily in the streets looking for her. He had no idea where she could go. He went & checked in the ladies hostel. He didn't know where she could go?? the fear of losing her.. he could never see her again.. already killed him within, he could feel his heart drowning in the pool of pain. How could she leave him.. she promised she won't.. the world already seemed dead around him. She was every thing he wanted & needed, now his mind began to realize wat she meant to him.. it was not just a momentary interest it was something beyond he could comprehend, she was connected to his heart to his soul.
 

He always feared just this.. that one day she may leave, as she was too good to be true & his world would fall apart eventually did & he didn't know what to do. She was really his everything, she meant the world to him, he wanted them to forever be. He went in to rano's room as late as 4am with wild red eyes.. he shook her from the sleep..wat did u tell her mama? Kya kaha aapne usse?? kyun kaha?? why did u have to do that.. how could u ?? how could u hurt her? Rano didn't quiet understand wat he was talking about. She gave him a confused look.
Maan - woh mujhe chod ke chali gayen..
then he thought for a while.. her belongings were still there in the house. He immediately rushed to the flat again & checked. Every thing was in place.. now the fear if something happened to her..Oh god..wat if something happened to her.. he would never spare himself for losing her. 

 
He took her dress & cried..please come back.. please wapas aajavoo..please don't ever break your promise, please don't ever leave me as without you, I wouldn't be me. Please aajavoo..
 
 
AIRPORT

Geet met up with arohi & Arjun at 3am.
Geet saw the continuous non stop calls from Maan. She knew he might be getting worried. She didn't know wat to do. She couldn't put him through this. Her heart felt his pain she knew he was crying there. 
Arohi - baat karle na
Geet - kya kahoon gi unse
Arjun - kahna friends ke saat hain
Geet - aane ki zid karenge
arohi - kah dena it will look odd.
arjun - isse aacha tho ghar main rah kar usse tension dethi..kitna pareshan ho raha hain, bechara


She answered the call.. he yelled on top of his voice.. very the hell are u?
She was quiet.. arohi & Arjun could even hear his voice. ..they pretended to look away
Then he immediately asked tum teehk ho na?
Umm
mujhe chodke mat javoo please
she cried instantly
mama ne kuch kaha kyan tumse?
Umm
isse liyen
she shook her head
phir kyun naraz ho, mujhse
main ne kab kaha ki u r heartless
sorry .. please come back..
aacha so javoo
nahi, tell me where u r I will come & pick u now
nahi abhi nahi.. friends ke saat hoon teehk nahi lagen ga
he clinched his fist hearing friends
aap unse millen ho na hospital main
he relaxed a bit thinking she was talking about the doctor.

 

PRECAP
Geet knowing about Rimi
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Edited by muskanp - 18 March 2011 at 10:50am

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No matter how much you think you write enough....

Its NEVER enough
 
Kya Muskaan, itne bure point me update chod diya...I was expecting a bit more than that....
Waiting for you to updates something else now too...please mana mat karna


Edited by pushpi - 16 March 2011 at 10:27pm

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A wonderful long awaited update.Now time has come to reveal Rimi's truth.
Maan Deewana is in Love with Geet........u r playing with his emotions gurl,
have mercy on him poor fellow has started showing the sign of "MAJNOON"ab pathar marnay ki dair hay.LOL
  Inspite of the doubt about Meet his heart does recognizes his LOVE .
Unko Jaldi Milado.

CONTINUE SOON









Edited by Dilsay - 16 March 2011 at 11:05pm

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