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~deewangi~ maaneet ff pt85 pg133 20MAR (Page 37)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
small doubts...

how can they b 22 n 27 respectivly... as she was sent to London whn she was 16 n its been 4 yrs since, thn she is 20 n he is 25...right. Wacko

whn will they celbrate their bdays!!!! may b thn it hit his stupid mind that she is his Geet... Ermm

smail small hints she have been given..like she like chocolates, sying i love u ..i love u a lot ,as she used to b4, janoo n all... thn also  he is doubting... Confused

n last not the least.. he nevr evr said "I love u" to Geet in last 11 yrs... Angry ..
only once whn he brought her n her mama home aftr her dad's death... thn too she was sleeping he said to himslf...

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Hye Muskan di,

 
 
 
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i thought u meant rimi in trouble as in maan finding something out
rano clealry doesnt know her own daughter wht if meet showed up in rimi's absence? and maan and meet go married? new cool twist lolz
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for this thread




part 79





She adjusted her dupatta & looked at him.
He cupped her face - bahut pyari lag rahi ho
she blushed instantly.

He pulled out the golden payal he just brought for her & put on. Her hand rested on his feeling the payal - mere liyen
he knew that's exactly wat she would say, he smiled & nodded
Maan - mujhe tumhare pawan suna nahi pasand
she knew he was angry about her not wearing the payal he brought for her. But that broke when she had newly moved to London like 5yrs ago.
Maan - aab issen nahi nikal na
Geet - usse bhi nahi nikal tha...


Kitni mohabbat kisko kaun yaha karta hai
Yeh koi bhi naa jaane
Deewane, pyaar ke hain hum deewane
Na maane, pyaar ke bin dil naa maane

they probably sat their until it was dark & the creature began calling on Maan's cell endlessly. He cut the call & finally put the phone on silent & walked with her to the car. Geet felt some thing was bothering him.

Duniya mein kya hain, dhoka hi dhoka
Mujhko to bas hain tujhpe bharosa
Zulfon ke saaye, resham si baahen

Geet - sab teehk hain na?
he hugged her - aab sab teehk hain.

Tere liye hain, meri vafaayen
Shamma hain deewani, voh naa kabhi samjhegi
Kyoon jhalte hain parwaane
Deewane, pyaar ke hain hum deewane
Na maane, pyaar ke bin dil naa maane

She came with two mugs of hot drink & cuddled up next to him, peeping into the screen. She became curious as he was looking into the design sample.
Maan - kaun sa wala select karoon
Geet - yeh wala
Maan - yeh wala kyun
Geet - this texture will suit the living room better.
She knew that was way too a technical answer.. she gulped her saliva & pretended to sip the milk.
Maan taunted - tum galti se meri coffee pee rahi ho
Geet - nahi nahi mujhe pata hain
Maan - tumhe pata hain..umm...kept the laptop aside & started crawling over her.. he took the coffee mug away from her hands. She made a baby face..yeh kya kar rahen ho?
He closed the distance - tumne meri coffee pee...
she timidly nodded ..tho main aapni coffee pee raha hoon.

Aaya hain mausam dil ki lagi ka
Aalam naa poocho deewangi ka
Naa hosh hain naa mujhko khabar hain
Yeh sab teri chaahat ka asar hain
Sard hawaa ke jhoken dekho is rut mein bhi
Mujhe aaye hain jhalaane

I love...her heart raised erratically..i love my coffee

Deewane, pyar ke hain hum deewane
Na maane, pyaar ke bin dil naa maane

He carried her to the room.. aab tumne coffee pee hi li hain..tho..
Geet - tho..
he naughtily smiled - u can stay awake the whole night.
She innocently said - aapne tho nahi pee
he groaned intending to make love all over again - tum ho tho coffee ki kya zarorat.

Kitni mohabbat kisko kaun yaha karta hain
Yeh koi bhi naa jaane
Deewane, pyaar ke hain hum deewane
Deewane, pyaar ke hain hum deewane






Rano - beta yeh Maan ne new paper main diya hain kya?
Rimi herself was shocked & was sure that this was probably done by Brij.

rimi in trouble 

part 80


aab aur dar nahi chalega, humne pandit ji se date bhi nikal li hain
Rano very excitedly - 15 days ke baad ki date hain.



he even hated the feel of voicing her name - rimi kanha hain
Daadi - yeh kya beta tum usse rimi - simi bolten raheten ho, mujhe tho Geet hi pasand hain


Maan - kiska phone that Daadi?
Daadi drank some water & with sinking heart - kidnappers ka
she couldn't even complete she fainted. Maan called for the dr. & also the police.
Within an hour, the KHURANA  MANSION was crowed with police, media & dr.
as Daadi regained consciousness she told Maan that someone called asking ransom.



Maan answered in attitude - I will do anything for my wife

we know but apney is state se bahir ao.geet ko wapis khurana mansion me le k ao

will Maan pay 10crs for Rimi?




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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
deewangi mei note kashish mei note ab tum bhi likho na ek note " UPDATING
please yaar ab bahut ho gaya
wonder why maan cried
did he find out any thing like the mangalsutra chain & rings or her moles
update soon with explanation


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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
awesome, mindblowing

wonderfull

read all the ff till now.

it is superb seriously
i m loving it

plz do cont soon waiting desperately

love

MEENA

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