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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashsree100

LOL

Oh god !!! This was hilarious LOL I actually LOVED a whole lot of lines 
"
 
This is pinky promise...!!...and she grabbed his hand making a pinky promise   ROFL


 
Switch off your phone...she said in a panic voice trying to snatch the cell from his hand...!!

 
 
 
What are you doing handa...?...leave my hand...he spat...!!

 
 
 
No...your phone is bringing earthquake...!! ... ROFL

 
 
 
What...??...Are you out of your mind...?...he said and then thought...'maan why are you even asking...ofcourse she is...she is drunk...'...!!  ... ROFL

 
 
 
No...see the floor is shaking with the vibration of your phone...she pointed her finger towards the floor...!! ... ROFL

 
 

The driver silently start driving...

 
 
 
Khurana

 
 
 
Hmm

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
 
She paused and again started...

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
 
Maan was patiently answering the same question again and again trying hard to keep his cool but geet was no were near stopping...

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghay aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar...  ROFL

 

 

Hey khurana...come here and look...the trees are running.. " ROFL 

Oh god , these parts were so funny ROFL But the humor did in no way decrease intense undercurrents between the 2 esp. Maan Thumbs Up
His constant immense turmoil to fall weak in every moment with Geet was described perfectly Clap 
Geet was adorable Tongue; such a kiddo , did not even realize the effect she had on Maan , just being her cute , kiddish self Embarrassed
The way Maan took care of her clearly shows how much Geet means to him Star
Rahul... ROFL, serves him right Evil Smile

Loved the entire update , right mix of love & comedy Thumbs Up
Fab part , loved it & thanks for pm ... Smile


 
thank u so much for the lovely comment priya...Smile
 
M really happy to see u all r liking the comedy so much
 
it gives me confident to experiment with new comic linesEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

loughing out
when rahul visting loo
everytime
the story turning interesting
every part love it
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu dear
 
rahul is a complete jerkAngryAngryAngry...it give me immense satisfaction in torturing himEvil Smile
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zahra15

amazing part...the drunk geet was so cute...thnk god sam is not -ve here...rahul's bit was very funny ...continue soon...
 
geet is a cutey pieEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...and for sam I wanted to make her +ve specially as maan's friend
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fourleafclover

Wat an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The drunk geet s even cuterLOL
Geet's rantings n maan trying to be b patient made a nice read
And m so happy with the way rahul had to literaly make a permanent home in d loo...SERVES HIM RIGHT!AngryROFL
M getting more n more hooked to ur story...WAIIITING FOR THE NEXT PARTDay Dreaming
 
yeah...me also thought to make him stay in the loo foreverLOL...but I need him for my story in futureConfused
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by QueenbeePallavi

loved the update yaar!!! Blushingspecially a dizzy geet means a lot more peppiness and masti around..Clown Thumbs Upand obviously as you have opened your cards... maan is just a true age old lover of our lady protagonist..*sighs*... Day Dreamingsuch a sweet and complete part..Hugloved it to the core!!! you rocked it completely dearie!!! simply and graciously keep it up!!!Clap ClapI am a fan here for sure!!!StarBig smile
 
age old lover...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...rightly said...Tongue
 
thanks for the wonderful comment
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Liked the update
Geet was hell cute n adorable
Jus loved her to the core
It was so awesum
Saab gadbad horahi hai
Pata nahi wen Maan gets to knw abt Geet's plan wat he will do
Lets c that
 
abhi bahut kuch hona baki haiWinkLOL
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Awesome
loved this ff so much
love maan and geet here sooo much
plzzz add me to ur pm list
thanks u
cant wait da next part
con soon
Muahhh
Xxx
 
thanks for my liking the ficSmile
have added u dear
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DrashtiDhamiNo1

first of all my like thingy button isnt working so just
to let you know i liked it Big smile
anyways that was a great update
geets gestures were sooo cute
yaaay maan is starting to feel something for geet
he's already affected by her closeness
rahul running back and forth to loo was funny
cant wait till the next part
hoping for some close maaneet action
cont soon please
thanks for the pm
 
that is really sweet of uSmile
lots more is yet to come...have patienceWink

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