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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god !!! This was hilarious πŸ˜† I actually LOVED a whole lot of lines 
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This is pinky promise...!!...and she grabbed his hand making a pinky promise   πŸ€£


 
Switch off your phone...she said in a panic voice trying to snatch the cell from his hand...!!

 
 
 
What are you doing handa...?...leave my hand...he spat...!!

 
 
 
No...your phone is bringing earthquake...!! ... πŸ€£

 
 
 
What...??...Are you out of your mind...?...he said and then thought...'maan why are you even asking...ofcourse she is...she is drunk...'...!!  ... πŸ€£

 
 
 
No...see the floor is shaking with the vibration of your phone...she pointed her finger towards the floor...!! ... πŸ€£

 
 

The driver silently start driving...

 
 
 
Khurana

 
 
 
Hmm

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
 
She paused and again started...

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
 
Maan was patiently answering the same question again and again trying hard to keep his cool but geet was no were near stopping...

 
 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghay aaya

 
 
Nahi

 
 
Ghar...  πŸ€£

 

 

Hey khurana...come here and look...the trees are running.. " πŸ€£ 

Oh god , these parts were so funny πŸ€£ But the humor did in no way decrease intense undercurrents between the 2 esp. Maan πŸ‘πŸΌ
His constant immense turmoil to fall weak in every moment with Geet was described perfectly πŸ‘ 
Geet was adorable πŸ˜›; such a kiddo , did not even realize the effect she had on Maan , just being her cute , kiddish self πŸ˜³
The way Maan took care of her clearly shows how much Geet means to him β­οΈ
Rahul... πŸ€£, serves him right πŸ˜ˆ

Loved the entire update , right mix of love & comedy πŸ‘πŸΌ
Fab part , loved it & thanks for pm ... πŸ˜Š


Edited by drashsree100 - 12 years ago
princess.rocks thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was awesome 
fantastic fabulous 
loved it sooo much


for the upate
salmankhanrulz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
dats was jst awesome...love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ...
aww geet ws so cute ...poor Maaan πŸ˜†
cont sooon 
thnx for d PM πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
freaking awesome dear./...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loughing out
when rahul visting loo
everytime
the story turning interesting
every part love it
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is Geet's valentine 😳
loved the update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yar..
loved it...
geet is so cute...
thnx 4 d pm..
and cont son..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part...the drunk geet was so cute...thnk god sam is not -ve here...rahul's bit was very funny ...continue soon...