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Zindagi (poem)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged

Hey guys,

i just wrote this today, I just tried my hand in poetry but i guess it didn't turn out to be that good.

reason toh i don't know and to be honest i think its horribly terrible but a really good frnd of mine liked it so i'm just felt like sharing this poem with you all.

Bas ek request hai, isse padhne ke baad don't throw chappals and tomatoes on me.


Zindagi insaan ko kahan se kahan le aati hai,

ek pal khushi toh dusre pal gum de jaati hai.

Chahte hain jisse dilon jaan sanam aksar usse gum de jaate hain.

Pyar karne se roka nahi per nibhana hai kaise usse yeh jaana nahi.

Karke wafayein bhi hum usse nibhana hai kaise yeh jante nahi.

Pyar toh hum usse karte hain behat sanam per dihkana hum jaante nahi.

Chah kar bhi paa na sakhe jisse usse aksar apna mante nahi.

Jaane aisa kyun hota hai,

Zindagi insaan ko kahan se kahan le aati hai,

Ek pal khushi toh dusre pal gum de jaati hai.


Do give me your views regarding this, good or bad both are welcomed by open arms.


lots of luv,

Neha (Shona)


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