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Posted: 12 years ago
greeattt prt...
thnsk for the pm ya
Posted: 12 years ago

Note: Happy Friendship Day, to all the readers of this FF. =)

Mayank's body wasn't responding to the treatments anymore. Everyone was worried. The doctors weren't allowing anyone to even meet Mayank. Everyone was quite worried when Samrat's mind was filled with the Prof.'s thoughts. He was constantly thinking of him. His words "Doctors kuch nahi kar payen ge" were sailing down his mind.
He quickly went to Nupur and Gunjan and told them to come with him. While he told Benji and Dia to stay in hospital with Sayank's parents and kids. Two minutes after that, they departed the hospital to search for the prof.
Sometime later, after searching almost half of the city; the usual places where Prof. was mostly found. Samrat, Gunjan and Nupur finally came back home to ask the watchman that did prof. come? 
The watchman answered with a no, but then strange voices started coming from inside of the house. Samrat, Nupur and Gunjan went inside the house. They knew they were risking their lives but still they were risking it for only Mayank's life. They wanted him to enjoy health and prosperity.
Entering the house didn't feel like they were entering there house only. But suddenly then, a horrible creature was standing in-front of them. It seemed feminine. Gunjan and Nupur screamed and Samrat was shocked.
Finally, Nupur gathered some courage to talk. She in a shivering voice asked her,
"Kon ho tum?"
The reply they got was an evil smile.
Then, the silly creature went upstairs. Nupur, Gunjan and Samrat kept on wondering why did she go up. They went and followed her.
Samrat: Bhabhi, aap dono neeche rukiye main ooper jata hoon.
Nupur: Ham sab saath jayen ge Samrat, warna koi nahi jaye ga.
Samrat: Bhabhi..
Nupur: Isse pehle ke woh hamare haath se nikal jaye.. chalo uske peeche.
They went behind her... and she was directly going into Mayank and Nupur's room.
A slight reason of her being behind MayUr was a little clear.
Now that they reached the room, they found all four of them there. 
That was purely somethings super-natural. 
Nupur, Gunjan and Samrat stepped in,
Samrat: Tum ham sab se kya chahte ho? Hamara ghar chod kyun nahi dete?
One of them rised his awful voice "YEH HAMARA GHAR HAI"
Nupur: Yeh tumhara nahi... yeh hamara ghar hai, samjhe? Yeh ghar sirf hamara hai. Tum sab kon hote ho hammein nuksaan pohonchane wale? Kya samajhte ho apne aap ko?
Gunjan: Tum sab hamare ghar se challe jao. Warna...
Four horrible evil-ish giggles were being heard now.
A double voice spoke "TUM SAB KO AB TAK MAZA NAHI AYA... WOH LADKA TOH NAHI BACHE GA... TUM SAB BHI MARNA CHAHTE HO?"
Samrat: Hamare ghar se nikal jao warna...
A horrible voice replied "Warna kya?"
Nupur remembered a trick, the professor told her. They had to do that as soon as all four of them were visible.
She in the code-language i.e in actions told Samrat and Gunjan the idea.
Nupur and Gunjan kept on questioning them whereas Samrat... On his tight-feet left the room and started throwing kerosene oil all over the house.
And then in the room too... and then they escaped lightening a match-stick and throwing it.
They finally returned to the hospital.
Gunjan and Nupur were sad, they had decorated the house... they had memories with it.
In the next hour, the doctor came out and told that Mayank was now improving slowly and will be conscious in till the next hour.
Everyone was quite happy,
But then,
Gunjan: Nupur... tumse aik baat poochoon?
Nupur: Han,
Gunjan: Tumne ghar ko jalane ka idea kyun dia?
Nupur: Mujhe prof. ne hi kaha tha... ke uss ghar ke neeche inn chaaron ko zinda dafan kar diya gaya tha. Issi liye woh ab hamare peeche pade the. Maine socha ke agar inn sab ko jala dein ge toh ham sab ki jaan bach jayegi... ghar toh aana jana hai... Waise bhi hamara Mumbai wala ghar kaafi hai hamare liye. Yahan ka business koi aur bhi sambhal sakta hai.
Gunjan smiled and hugged her.
Nupur hugged her back.
In the next few months, Mumbai, Khanna Mansion.
Everyone was on the dinning table, laughing and giggling again.
Because, all's well that ends well. And they lived happily ever after...

Thanks for reading my FF,
Hope ur journey with my FF was good. I know I gave it a rushed ending because of an IF member I wont name here.
I am sorry.
Love,
-Annie
Edited by -Annie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic ending...im glad alls  alright
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht was sooo niceee ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab ending dear...happy friendship day dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

annz:)

nice ending...but yeah i agree it was rushed😕

happy fday rqueen:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
happy ending...
 
happy friendship day...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Annie, tune itni rush ending kyun kardi

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Annie, i really dont like this ending.
for first time i really dont like this.
it was so rush
tune pura FF cover karke last me aisa ending dia😭
nice ending.
everyone was happy.
n those 4 bhoots also went to heaven or hell...what ever.
bt where is professor...it was still a unsoled mistry.
nice FF.
beautiful ending.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
and lovely ending!
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww u ended it
wasn't it a bit earlier than planned
happy friendship day
amazing ff dear
loved it completely
will miss it seriosuly
do write more
sorry for not commenting
m literally busy these days