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Posted: 12 years ago
wowieee...i lovedd it alott...
great work
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! It's really becoming scary now..
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm   intresting...lovely annie,,,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvellous update

Loved it

Scared me sort of

Cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

*phewww*

read the parts
completely loved my sammy
superb rocking update dear
really amazingggly written
loving the way story is proceeding
sorry for late n short comment busy in exams =(
continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so scary update...😳
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part yaar
hope uss bhott se bachne ka koi hal miljaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am scared anzie😆
mayank's red eyes..OMG agar jun ko tu red eye me dekh le
to tera kya hoga?😆
but it was fantastic...loved sam this time..he is really caring bro and
update is really scary.
do cont soon🤗
Posted: 12 years ago
Finally, the night was over with the dreads. But yet, everyone was worried for the condition of Mayank. The scene opens where Nupur, Gunjan, Dia and Uday go to meet the professor.
Prof.: Wo atma kal kitni baar Mayank par haavi hui?
Nupur: 2 baar Professor.
Prof: 2 baar… hmm… aage bhi khatra badh sakta hai.
Nupur: Khatra badh sakta hai matlab??
Prof.: Wahan aik nahi... Teen atmayein hain... Kuch bhi karne se pehle hammein sirf yeh pata lagana hoga... Ke wo tum sabse chahti kya hain...
Gunjan: Hammein uske liye kya karna hoga professor?
Prof.: Dekhiye.. Atmayein kayi tarah ki hoti hain... Kuch achi aur kuch buri... Mujhe yakeen hai ke inn 3 atmaon mein se... Kam se kam aik toh achi hogi.
Nupur: Arre wah... Toh ab aap kya chahte hain... Ke ham jaake atma se poochein ke bhai... apmein shareef wali konsi hai? Huh!
Prof.: Dekhiye ap relax kijiye... Main janta hoon aap aisa kyun bol rahi hain... Main yeh bhi janta hoon ke aap sab Mayank se kitna pyar karte hain... Main toh sirf apki madad karna chahta hoon.. Thats it.
Dia: We are sorry professor.. leikin hammein uss atma ko bulane ke liye karna kya hoga?
Prof.: Hammein uss atma ko... Kissi aik ke shareer mein bulana hoga...
Gunjan: Kiske sharer mein??
Prof.: Ap sab decide kijiye.
Gunjan: Mere sharer mein bula lijiye..
Nupur: Leikin Gunjan…
Gunjan: Mujhe yeh karna hoga Nupur.
Nupur: Nahi Gunjan... Tumhe yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi hai..
Prof.: Dekhiye... Jo bhi yeh karre ga... Uski jaan ko khatra bhi ho sakta hai...
Nupur: Theek hai... Toh yeh sab main karoon gi...
Gunjan: Nahi... Tum nahi karo gi... Karan abhi bohot chotta hai... Aur agar tumhe kuch ho gaya... Nahi.. 
Nupur: Nisha toh Karan se bhi chotti hai na... Uske baare mein nahi socha? Gunjan.. Please.. Mayank ne life mein mere liye bohot kuch kiya hai... Its a payback time... Ab main Mayank ke liye kuch karna chahti hoon.
Gunjan: Leikin..
Nupur: Please...
Gunjan nodded.
Prof.: Leikin ab mere khayal se... Ap sab ko sabse pehle yeh baat Mayank ko bata deni chahiye... Aur ho sake toh bacho ko aap log kahin aur bhej dein.
Dia: Bacho ko kahin aur bhej dein? Leikin kyun?
Prof.: Kyunke agle kuch dino mein apke ghar mein jo kuch bhi hone wala hai.. Usse ap sab ki jaan ko khatra hai..
Gunjan: Leikin aapne toh kaha tha ke... Hammein wo atmayein kahin jaane nahi dengi..
Prof.: Maine ap sab ke baare mein bola tha.. Bachon ke baare mein nahin. 
Nupur: Ji Prof. 
They went back home.. and there,
Samrat: Dekha bhai... Ap aise hi dar rahe the... Doctor ne toh saaf saaf keh diya ke yeh sirf aapke mental stress ki wajah se hota hai.
Nupur: Mayank... Maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai na... Ke itna sara kaam na kiya karo... Dekha na doctor ne kya kaha.
Mayank: Leikin kal jo kuch hua...
Nupur: Dekho Mayank... Kal jo kuch hua... Usse bhool jao... Ab, hammein tumse aik baat karni hai.
Mayank: Kya baat karni hai?
Samrat: Ab... Bhai... Wo...
Mayank: Bol na..
Samrat: Bhai main abhi apko jo baat bolun ga na... Ap shayad mujhpar gussa bhi ho... Leikin yeh baat sach hai.
Mayank: Bolo toh sahi ke baat kya hai?
Benji: Darasal wo Mayank... Wo kya haina ke... Jo kuch kal raat hua... Wo tera mental stress nahi tha... Woh to... Tujhpar aik atma ne kabza kar liya tha.
Mayank: What rubbish! Toh kya doctor jhoot bol raha tha...
Samrat: Bhai.. Wo ... Usse aisa bolne ke liye maine hi... Maine hi kaha tha bhai.
Mayank: Tum sab ne jhoot kyun bola??
Samrat: Woh issi liye kyunke ap inn sab baton mein believe nahi karte the bhai.
Mayank: Atma... yeh sab toh sirf horror films mein hota hai Samrat.. Tum sab paghal ho gaye ho.
Gunjan: Acha ham sab pagal hain? Toh wo sab kya tha Mayank?  Hamara family frame girna... wo Nupur ko kuch dikhayi dena... Tumhare woh fits... Wo sab hamara pagalpan tha??
Mayank: Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai.
Samrat: Bhai... Apko samajhna hoga... Aur.. Hammein bachon ko bohot jald mom dad ke paas bhejna hoga...
Mayank: Bachon ko? Leikin kyun?
Dia: Wo atmayein hammein iss ghar se nahi jaane dengi... Leikin hammein bachon ko kissi safe jagah par pohonchana hoga!
Mayank: Theek hai... Toh phir ham kal hi bachon ko Mumbai bhijwa dete hain... Mom dad ke yahan...
Samrat: Han... Yeh theek rahe ga. 
Then Mayank walked to the staircase.
Nupur: Arre kahan jaa rahe ho?
Mayank: Bachon ke paas.
Dia: Leikin kyun?
Mayank: Aaj tak bachon ke baghair raha nahi.. Ab kal woh sab challe jayen ge.. aur phir hammein kya pata ke kal hamare saath kya hojaye... 
Mayank went upstairs.
There in the room,
Kids were resting there heads in Mayank's lap.
Karan: Papa...
Mayank: Han beta..
Karan: Ap hammein dada dadi ke paas kyun bhej rahe ho?
Mayank: Taake aap jaake enjoy kar lo..
Nisha: Ham enjoy yahan bhi toh karte hain na chachu.. please chachu hammein ap se door nahi jana...
Mayank: Jaana padega na beta...
Nisha: Leikin kyun? Wahan par toh app mein se koi nahi hoga... Aur agar kabhi daadi dante gi toh bachane ke liye ap bhi toh nahi honge na.
Mayank: Leikin beta... acha chalo yahi samajh lo ke ham jo bhi kar rahe hain na... ap sab ke bhalle ke liye hai. 
Nitin: Leikin Mayank uncle..
Mayank: Hmm..
Nitin: Ham sab aapke saath kyun nahi reh sakte?
Mayank: Bas kuch hi dino ki baat hai beta... Phir ham sab saath saath rahen ge... Jaise pehle rehte the.. 
Kids: Promise?
Mayank: Promise.
--End--

Thanks for reading and thanks for those lovely comments.
Hope you enjoyed the part.
With lots of love,
-Annie
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part. continue soon