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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE :) WISH IT WAS A BIT LONGER :D

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
hey friends!! i cant tell u how happy i am coz u r liking my updates..Big smilethanks aloooot to all the friends who pressed the like button n who commented.. so friends, here's the update.. so read n enjoy:


                                                PART- 3

At college gate
:

                     maan aur geet dono gate pe pohanche aur guess what happened??LOL maan aur geet ki takkar ho gayi..
Geet: ouch! dekh k nahin chal saktay kya??
Maan: tum koi miss world ho jo tumhein dekhoon..
Geet: ek to dekh k nahin chaltey aur upar se mere sath oversmart banne ki koshish kar rahe ho..
Maan: chalo moun se sach to nikla.. i know im smart!! sab mujhe yehi kehte hain..
Geet: excuse me!! tumhen main ne kab smart kaha?? aur jo koi tumhen smart kehta hai uski ankhen zaroor kharab hongi..
Maan: mujhe kahin se jalney ki smell aa rahi hai..
Geet: lets go naintara! aise logo se to baat karna hi fazool hai... huh
       phir geet aur naintara wahan se chale gaye. naintara to maan ko dekh k baki girls ki tarah faint ho gayi thi... woh to abi bhi maan k khayalon mein gum thi.. canteen mein  arjun unka wait kar raha tha..
geet bohat gusse mein enter hui..
Arjun: hey geet! hey naintara!
Naintara: hey arjun!
   geet ayi aur gusse se ek side pe baith gayi..
Arjun: naintara! what happened to her??
Naintara: tumhein to pata hi hai k geet ko kuch keh dey  to larai to hona lazmi hai..
Arjun: ab kis ki shamat ayi thi??
Naintara: tha ek handsome boy..
Arjun: naintara! sambhal k yar.. lagta hai k aj us bechare ki khair nahin jis k peeche tum aur geet par gaye ho..LOL
     geet unhen kafi time se note kar rahi thi.. arjun aur naintara were whispering..
Geet: oye tum log kya baatein kar rahe ho??
Naintara: kuch bhi to nahin
Geet: tum log jo ghante se baatein kar rahe ho, mujhe sab nazar aa raha hai..
Arjun: yaar geet naraz kyun hoti hai, main to bas naintara se pooch raha tha k kis ne tujhe tang kia..
Geet: mujhe us idiot k barey mein koi baat nahin karni
Arjun: acha acha hum us k barey mein koi baat nahin karenge, ab to apna mood theek kar le..
Geet: ok!!
      whereas on other side, maan was also very angry...
Dev: hey maan!!
Maan: hello!!(in angry look)
     romeo came n saw maan angry..
Romeo: hey maan kya hua??
Dev: main bhi to es se yhi poochne ki koshish kar raha hoon..
Romeo: yar bata na kya hua??
Maan: yar wo hai ek pagal ladki, gate pe mujhse takrayi uar pata nahin apne aap ko kya samajhti hai..
Dev n Romeo: ladki ka chakkar hai?? han!!
Maan: tum dono apna moun band karo, mujhe us churail ki shakal bhi nahin dekhni, sara din kharab kar dia usne.. huh
Dev n Romeo: ok ok!! maan, hum to sirf mazak kar rahe thay.. chor yaar!! bhool ja..
Maan: agar ab mili to main usay chorunga nahin..
Dev: acha jab milegi to dekh lena.. abhi chal waise hi bohat late ho chuke hain class k liye..
Romeo: han maan es se pehle k principal humein pakkad le, bhago class mein..
Maan: ok! lets go guyz..
       maan aur geet dono class k liye ja rahe thay k phir se takra gaye...
Naintara: oh no!! not again..
Geet: mujhe to ab pura yakeen ho gaya hai k tumhare paas ankhen nahin, button hain..
Maan: moun sambhal k baat karo.. churail
Geet: kya kaha tum ne mujhe?? churail?? tum ne aoni shakal kabhi dekhi hai, kisi bhoot se kam nahin lagte..
Maan: main aur bhoot???
        sab unki ladai rokne ki bohat koshish kar rahe thay but kuch fayda nahin hua.. achanak principal aa gaya:
Principal: kya ho raha hai yahan pe??
Geet: kuch nahin sir, ye ladka mujhe bohat tang kar raha hai..
Principal: maan mujhe tumse ye umeed nahin thi..
Maan: sir, main ne kuch nahin kia.. ye jhoot bol rahi hai.. sare jhagre ki waja ye khud hai..
Geet: dekha sir, abhi bhi kya kya bol raha hai..
Principal: silence! i want a pin drop silence.. mujhe aur shor nahin chahiye.. samajh mein ayi baat.. ab tum dono mere sath mere office mein chalo..
Maan n Geet: but sir!
Principal: mujhe kuch nahin sunna... ab chalo mere sath
Maan n Geet: ok sir!!
         principal k office jaatey hue maan aur geet ek dusre ko ghurne lage aur phir se larne lagey..
Principal: waise kam problems thi k ye do aur aa gaye..
       on the other side, maan's n geet's friends were introducing themselves to others..
Romeo to Arjun: hey im benji.. whats ur name??
Arjun: hey nice to meet u.. im arjun
Romeo: n he is dev..
Arjun to Dev:oh! hye dev.. glad to meet u!!
Dev: smae here..
Arjun: this is naintara!
Dev n Romeo to Naintara: hye.. naintara!
Naintara: hye.. so guys! we all r friends from now, right??
All said: ya why not..
Naintara: yippeee sooo happy 2 have new friends.. i can imagine now k hum kitni masti karne wale hain..
Arjun: by the way guys, maan aur geet ka kya?? wo log to ek dusre ko dekhne k liye bhi ready nahin hain..
Romeo: ya kuch to sochna padega!!
          
             friends abi tak bas itna hi.. hope ye part last part se long ho ga..LOL will update soon.. dont forget to press the like button n also do comment..
                                        thanks,
                                                       hafsah


        




Edited by dollie16 - 23 March 2011 at 3:55am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
luved it
do continue

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it loadz
love their fight
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm di

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
gud work dear

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear
loved it
update soon

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome Update

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Awesome Updates...

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