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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
amazing update

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
i liked it.so pls add me in ur pm list.continue soon.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
intro and part 1
very cool intro.................very nice start.................cont soon and pm me............

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
hey firends!! thanks aloooot for liking my update!! love u!! Hug
without wasting your time, here comes another update. hope u like it too. so read n enjoy:

                                      PART-2

At maan's house:
     
maan k ghar pe to geet k ghar se sab kuch different tha. wahan pe geet uthne ko tayar na thi aur dadaji ko uthana para.LOLlekin yahan to maan ko uthane ki zarurat hi nahin pari. maan subha subha jogging k liye park gaya hua tha aur dadi maa tea kay sath newspaper parh rahi thi. jab maan ghar mein enter hua:
maan: good morning dadi maa!!
dadi maa: aray beta! aap aa gaye.. good morning!!
maan: dadi maa breakfast ready hai?? mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai..
dadi maa: (smiling) han beta aap jaaiye, fresh ho jaaiye. main nakul se breakfast lagane ko kehti hoon..
maan: ok dadi maa!
dadi maa: maan bhi na! kabhi kabhi bilkul bachon wali harkat karte hain..
    maan fresh ho kay aya aur breakfast karne kay liye beth gaya. breakfast mein parathe baney thay n then:
maan: waise dadi maa breakfast mein kya hai??
dadi maa: beta aj aalu k parathe hain.
maan: dadi maa!! you are great.. i just love you!! aalu kay parathe yummy!
dadi maa: acha beta ab maska lagana band kariye aur breakfast kijiye es se pehle k breakfast thanda ho jaye..
maan: ok dadi maa!!LOL
   breakfast karne kay baad:
maan: dadi maa! main college k liye ready hone ja raha hoon.
dadi maa: ok beta!
   ready hone k baad:
maan: dadi maa!! main colege ja raha hoon, im getting late..
dadi maa: acha beta! dekh k jaaiye ga aur car dhayan se drive kijiye ga.
maan: dadi maa! main ab bacha nahin raha.. i'll take care of myself!
dadi maa: ab apko larte hue der nahin ho rahi.. ab jaaiye..
maan: ok im going.. bye dadi maa!!
       
       ok friends! abi tak bas itna hi.. i know its too short..Unhappy but i'll try to update the next part longer.. so friends if u like this update then plz press the like button!! n if u dont like it then feel free to criticize.. n do suggest me some ideas if u want to!Big smile
                                                 thanks,
                                                                 hafsah


Edited by dollie16 - 15 March 2011 at 4:58am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
part 2
nice part...........but a short one.................cont soon and thanks for the pm............

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Wowww
Yr nice part
Bt short..................
Amazing..........
Next part thora long update karna ok.........
Well veryyyyyy niceeeeee partEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
nice update dear.......want u to continue soon........! thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
it's nice 
do contimue

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