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c00l_girl Goldie
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by debomaaneet

part 2 was shrt bt nice...
n part 3,long n outstanding!!!
love maaneet's fight n hw dev,arjun,naintara,benji/romeo hv bcm frnd..
bdw...in character u've introduced benji as romeo bt here in part 3-u said benji..
bt i'd nt any prblm 2 identfy him.so its ok...
n benji naam hi rakhna cz romeo se benji naam hi a66a lagega as a clg stdnt.

hye.. dear!! thank u soooo much for ur compliments!!Wink
n sorry for writing the wrong name..Confused
i was feeling that i have written something wrong..LOL

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
loved it!
Continue soon! 

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
its ok hafsah....:)
evry1 makes mistakes...!!

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
awesomeee part

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Nice update Clapsorry for late Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
   hey friends!!! im very happy to see that u r liking my updates... thanks aloot for ur lovely comments!!Hug they mean aloot to me.. here's the next update.. so read n enjoy..

                                               PART- 5


    shaam ko naintara ne geet ko call ki.. but geet ne attend nahin ki..
Naintara:
lagta hai k geet ab tak naraz hai mujhse..(sad) ab main kya karoon?? arjun ko call karti hoon..
   arjun's phone rang..
Arjun:
hye naintara!!
Naintara:
arjun! i want your help..
Arjun:
kya hua naintara??
Naintara:
yar geet is very angry with me aur woh ab meri call bhi attend nahin kar rahi..(sad)
Arjun:
awww.. naintara! dont be sad.. geet ka to tumhein pata hai na.. kal tak dekhna theek ho jaegi..
Naintara:
i hope so..
Arjun:
ab tension lena band karo aur chill karo yaar..
Naintara:
(smile) ok.. thanks!!
the next day:
 
                  next day, sab friends ek sath college aye.. maan n geet both were angry with each other.. when they enter the college, they didnt notice each other n went to class..
     geet n maan entered the class..

Romeo:
hey maan!
Maan:
hye..(angry)
Dev:
yar maan ab to apna mood theek kar le..
Romeo:
han maan plz ek bar naye friends bana k dekho.. hum bhi to kabhi naye friends thay na!!
Dev:
ya maan!! plz maan jao na..
Maan:
(smiled) ok!!
    all the friends become very happy..
    whereas on geet side..

Naintara:
good morning geet!!
 
geet came n sat silently...
Naintara:
plz geet!! ab gussa choro.. plz
Arjun:
han geet!! ab bas bhi karo na.. naye friends bana k dekho to sahee, boht maza ayega!!
Geet:
(smiled) ok! agar tum log itna force kar rahe ho to try karne mein kya harj hai..
Arjun n Naintara:
yippeee... its the party time!
Naintara:
to chalo aao hamare sath, hum tumhein naye friends se introduce karate hain..
Geet:
ok.. lets go!!
Naintara:
hey guyz, wass up?? acha suno main tumhein ek awesome news dene ayi hoon.. guess what????
Romeo:
what??
Naintara:
geet friendship k liye maan gayi..
Dev:
hamare paas bhi ek good news hai.. k..
Naintara:
what?? batao bhi
Dev:
maan bhi maan gaya.. hai na brilliant news??
Naintara:
wow yaar!! fantastic.. acha chalo baatein boht ho gayi.. main tumhe introduce krati hoon geet se..
Romeo:
ok..
Naintara:
geet! yeh romeo hai.. boht masti karta hai..
Geet:
hye romeo..
Romeo:
hey
Naintara:
yeh dev hai..
Geet:
nice to meet u..
Dev:
same here..
Naintara:
tum maan ko to janti hi ho..
Geet:
(whispered) es ko kaise bhool sakti hoon..
    
on the other side..
Dev:
aao maan main tumhe sab se introduce karaun..
Maan:
maan singh khurana kisi introduction ka mohtaj nahin hai..
Romeo:
yaar aa na..
Maan:
huh theek hai..
Romeo:
maan!! yeh naintara hai..
Maan:
hey dear!! nice to meet u..(flirting)
Naintara:
(sharmatey hue) hey maan!!
Romeo:
aur yeh arjun hai..
Maan:
hey buddy!! wass up??
Arjun:
hey..
Romeo:
aur geet ko to tum jante ho..
 
   maan aur geet hand shake karne k liye tyar hi nahin thay..
Romeo:
hey guys, bohat hua! chalo ab hand shake karo..
Maan:
hmm...
Geet:
(thinking) hmm.. ek baar friendship karne mein kya jata hai.. waise thodi mistake meri bhi thi..
   geet ne hath aage barhaya phir maan ne bhi barhaya.. n then they became  friends..
Naintara:
yaar ab to party banti hai.. aj raat ko kaisa rahega??
All friends:
yipppeeee...
Dev:
but party dey ga kon??
Arjun:
obviously maan aur geet.. dono ki friendship ki khushi mein jo party ho rahi hai..
Maan:
acha beta! abhi se lootna shuru kar dia..
Arjun:
friends to hote hi lootne k liye hain..
Naintara:
to bas pakka!! aj raat.. ok??
Maan n Geet:
hmmm.. ok! tum logo se jaan churana itna aasan thode hi hai..(joking)
    everyone was laughing, teacher came..
Students:
good morning sir!!
Teacher:
students kal dance competition ki last date hai.. aur abhi tak koi entry nahin.. thats not good..
Romeo:
sir maan aur geet ki jodi kaisi rahegi???
Geet:
romeo ye kya keh rahe ho..
Naintara:
han sir.. geet to boht se prizes bhi jeet chuki hai dance k liye..
Geet:
(staring) naintara!!
Dev:
aur maan bhi to har saal prizes win karta hai.. dono ki jodi ko koi takkar nahin de payega..
Teacher:
i think thats a nice idea..
Maan:
but sir...
Teacher:
no but.. i have listed u n geet as a jodi for the dance competition..
Naintara:
yipppeee!! ab to double treat..
Geet:
chup kar naintara! tujhe to bas hamesha treat ki pari rehti hai..
Arjun:
guys, be positive yaar!! ho sakta hai tum log jeet jao ye competition..
Dev:
u will definitely win..

   
friends! abi tak bas itna hi.. plz press the like button if u like it n if u dont like it, feel free to criticize.. n plz do comment.. they mean alooot to me..Big smile
             thanks,
                          hafsah

 

 




Edited by dollie16 - 26 March 2011 at 2:27pm

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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