*||m@gic@l dre@ml@nd||* - Page 22

aweslme update dear...
Hope geet will accept her feelin' soon...
thnx for pm

aweslme update dear...
Hope geet will accept her feelin' soon...
thnx for pm

awesome update...!!!
loved it...!!

part 10
nice part...
ohho Maan apna gusse ko khaboo mein rakna shuru karo...
Geet will not tolerate this...
looks like Geet has fallen for Maan...
but will not accept it for long a time...
cont soon...

awesome update
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

awesome update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

loved it 😛

Geet loves Maan 😳

thanx 4 update it was really good

hey friends! thank u sooo much for pressing the like button n for commenting! love u all❤️

geethanda1,  Karan_Kundra11,  cue1,  nazsij,  am_sweet_pari,  krati5,  sabeen675,  ri-za,  fend,  0711rokxoxo,  -Hina-,  geet06,  nahtani88,  silkyarora,  deepthichoudary,  princess_aakshu,  PLKG90,  zaara2212,  wajiha-1,  maaniqra,  KaSh-Maneet-Fan,  blackb28,  ...Pwincess...,  pickachu,  sharmake11,  kashndsel4eva,  spvd,  taibaaa,  Mariam94,  -sofiya-,  mrk_1,  zaryaabJuhi1b8, 

   hey friends! im back with an update..😆 i know u wanna kill me n wanna throw some chappals on me🤢🤣 coz everytime i say, i'll update it soon n then disappear.. sorry guys for late update again.. though i have vacations but i was lil bzy.. 😳 now without wasting ur time, here is the update:

                    PART-11

when maan saw geet unhappy, he decided to do something

special for her.. he sang a song for her:

gustakhi maaf kar de ab toh insaaf kar de...

apna dil saaf kar de...

kehna tu maan ley...

hey jaane bhi de...

jo bhi hua jaane bhi de...

all the friends were amazed to see maan like this..

Romeo: yar main ne maan ko kabhi aise nahin dekha.. ab to

pakka kuch garbar hai..

Dev: really yar.. ab to maan n geet r more than friends..

Arjun: but ye baat in dono ko kon samjhaye?? ye dono to kuch

samajhne ko tyar hi nahi hain...

on the other side:

after singing the song, maan went close to geet..

Maan: geet, u know na mujhe gussa kitni jaldi ata hai.. plz naraz

matt ho.. im sorry

Geet: its ok..

Naintara: agar tum dono ki narazgi khatam ho gayi ho to

handshake karo..😆

Romeo: ab friendship b kar lo guys..

maan n geet smiled.. maan ne friendship k liye apna hath aage

barhaya.. geet ne b apna hath aage barhaya aur dono handshake

kr k friends ban gaye..

dono ek dusre ko smile kartey hue dekh rahe thay..

Romeo: ehem ehem...

all the friends started to laugh..

Maan: stop it guys..

Dev: acha dont be angry again, chal class mein chalte hain..

they went to classroom..

Naintara: geet mujhe romeo se kuch kaam hai, tum maan k sath ja

k beth jao..

Geet: hmm..

Romeo: tumhe mujhse kya kaam hai??

Naintara: budhu! itna bhi nahi samajhte, geet aur maan ko ek sath

time spend karne do..

Romeo: oh... i c..

when the period ended..

Maan asked Geet: kya main tumhe aj ghar drop kar doon??

Geet: ok..

Arjun: chalo yar hum sab ja rahe hain..

Geet: ok. bye

in the car:

maan n geet both were sitting quietly..

maan n geet both spoke at the same time..

Maan n Geet: or tumhari..

then they started to smile..

Maan: ok.. first u ask

Geet: thanks.. ok so tum parhte bhi ho ya only masti??

Maan: han parhta hoon na exam se ek raat pehle.. acha ye parhai

ki boring baatein band karo, koi aur baat karein??

Geet: ok.. so tum bolo

Maan: hmmm..

Geet: wait mera ghar aa gaya..sorry ab baki baatein kal karenge..

Maan: ok.. c u

geet came out of the car n started to walk towards her house..

Maan: geet! wait ..

geet stopped n peeche murr k dekha..

Maan: agar tum mind na karo to apna cell no. do gi?

Geet: cell no. abhi

after thinking alot..

Geet: ok.. ye lo

Maan: thanks. aur mera nahi lo gi??

Geet: tum mujhe message kar dena, i'll save it..

Maan: ok thanks again.. c u 2morrow..

geet n maan went to their homes...

at night:

Geet:(thinking) geet tujhe kya ho gaya hai?? tu pagal hai?? kabhi

itni aasani se kisi ko no. nahi dia jis tarah main ne aj maan ko dia..

kahin naintara theek to nahi keh rahi thi.. no no yeh kaise ho sakta

hai..

on the other side:

Maan:(thinking) jis maan singh khurana ne kabhi kisi k samne

sorry nahin kaha aur na usko kabhi plz bola.. to aj kaise?? kya ho

raha hai mujhe??

both were confused about their feelings..

at morning:

geet was sleeping n her mobile rang.. she didnt see the number n

received the call..

Geet: hello

 on the other side of the phone was maan..

Maan: hello geet

Geet: kon??

Maan: maan here.. main tumhe 1 hour tak pick karne aa raha

hoon.. ready rehna

Geet: but...

Maan: but wat kuch nahin.. im coming

Geet: maan ko kya hua?? meri ek bhi baat nahi suni aur mujhe

order de dia.. huh

geet couldnt decide what to wear..

Geet: oh babaji! kya musibat hai.. aj mujhe kuch acha mil hi nahi

raha.. maan ne b abhi ana tha..

all the friends were waiting for maan n geet in the college..

Arjun: yar ye maan aur geet kahan reh gaye??

Romeo: naintara tum to geet k sath ati ho to aj kya hua??

Naintara: pata nahi, geet ne mujhe mana kar dia..

Dev: ye sab chal kya raha hai akhir??

on geet's house:

maan reached geet's house n parked his car n then started to

waiting for her..

Maan: pata nahi ladkyon ko ready hone mein itni der kyun lagti

hai??

maan called geet.. geet attended the call

Geet: bas do minute..

she was looking very beautiful..

maan was amazed to see her i that beautiful dress..

uski eyes k sath sath uska mounh bhi khula ka khula reh gaya..

Geet: apna mounh band kar lo es se pehle koi makhee ghus jaye..😆

maan opened the door of the car.. 

on the way maan was looking towards geet all the time..

they reached college..

all the friends were shocked to see maan n geet together..

Naintara: ye kya dekh rahi hoon main??😲

Romeo: main koi sapna to nahin dekh raha??

geet n maan came toward them..

Maan n Geet: guys kya hua??

Romeo: tum dono ek sath??

Maan: es mein itna shock hone wali kya baat hai?? tum bhool

gaye ab hum friends hain.. ab aisa react karna band karo guys!

warna class k liye zaroor late ho jaenge..
   
      friends! abhi tak itna hi.. plz do press the like button n also do comment n i also want ur suggestions.. plz give some suggestions if u want..
                                              thanks,
                                                             hafsah
Edited by dollie16 - 12 years ago