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Posted: 13 years ago
intro and part 1
very cool intro.................very nice start.................cont soon and pm me............
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey firends!! thanks aloooot for liking my update!! love u!! πŸ€—
without wasting your time, here comes another update. hope u like it too. so read n enjoy:

                                      PART-2

At maan's house:
     
maan k ghar pe to geet k ghar se sab kuch different tha. wahan pe geet uthne ko tayar na thi aur dadaji ko uthana para.πŸ˜†lekin yahan to maan ko uthane ki zarurat hi nahin pari. maan subha subha jogging k liye park gaya hua tha aur dadi maa tea kay sath newspaper parh rahi thi. jab maan ghar mein enter hua:
maan: good morning dadi maa!!
dadi maa: aray beta! aap aa gaye.. good morning!!
maan: dadi maa breakfast ready hai?? mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai..
dadi maa: (smiling) han beta aap jaaiye, fresh ho jaaiye. main nakul se breakfast lagane ko kehti hoon..
maan: ok dadi maa!
dadi maa: maan bhi na! kabhi kabhi bilkul bachon wali harkat karte hain..
    maan fresh ho kay aya aur breakfast karne kay liye beth gaya. breakfast mein parathe baney thay n then:
maan: waise dadi maa breakfast mein kya hai??
dadi maa: beta aj aalu k parathe hain.
maan: dadi maa!! you are great.. i just love you!! aalu kay parathe yummy!
dadi maa: acha beta ab maska lagana band kariye aur breakfast kijiye es se pehle k breakfast thanda ho jaye..
maan: ok dadi maa!!πŸ˜†
   breakfast karne kay baad:
maan: dadi maa! main college k liye ready hone ja raha hoon.
dadi maa: ok beta!
   ready hone k baad:
maan: dadi maa!! main colege ja raha hoon, im getting late..
dadi maa: acha beta! dekh k jaaiye ga aur car dhayan se drive kijiye ga.
maan: dadi maa! main ab bacha nahin raha.. i'll take care of myself!
dadi maa: ab apko larte hue der nahin ho rahi.. ab jaaiye..
maan: ok im going.. bye dadi maa!!
       
       ok friends! abi tak bas itna hi.. i know its too short..πŸ˜” but i'll try to update the next part longer.. so friends if u like this update then plz press the like button!! n if u dont like it then feel free to criticize.. n do suggest me some ideas if u want to!πŸ˜ƒ
                                                 thanks,
                                                                 hafsah
Edited by dollie16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2
nice part...........but a short one.................cont soon and thanks for the pm............
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww
Yr nice part
Bt short..................
Amazing..........
Next part thora long update karna ok.........
Well veryyyyyy niceeeeee part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear.......want u to continue soon........! thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
it's nice 
do contimue
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..........but a very short one.............thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Update... Keep Up The Good Work... Hope To See The Next Part

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi,thanks 4 pm.i liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
Love it
Update soon
Thanks for the pm.