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FF Suhaag Ki Nishaani...PART 9 PG 31 - Page 15

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-Saruu- thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

I am going to be changing the way I write.Pls tell me what u think of this version.Sorry for the Delay.

Part 6

Why was everyone staring at me? What had I done? I was just going to my friends house! So why these evil glares?

Leave it I thought to myself. Whats the point?

 Geet:Channi!!! Molly!!! Where are you?

MOLLY AND CHANNI COME RUNNING OUT.

Molly:Geet,Youre here?

Channi:Everythings ok,Right?

Molly:I mean I know you probably think everythings ruined after what happened but….

CHANNI STEPS ON HER FOOT.

I just stared at them blankly.What were they on about? Then,it clicked.Something was being hidden from me.Something Molly And Channi thought I knew  but I didn't.And I would find out.

Geet:Yes,its true.

MOLLY AND CHANNI RUN UPTO HER AND HUG HER.

Molly:Don't worry,Geet.Everything will be fine.

Channi:Yes,Geet.Keep faith in God.The hard times will pass.

Ok,now I was really confused.What hard times?

Molly:But geet,this isn't right what youre doing.You have to forget about him,It's the only way.

Channi:Yes now stop this stubbornness and take off the things you cant wear anymore.And go and get changed into some salwar Kameez.Forget about saris now.

W…what did they mean? Maan…was something….no?I opened my mouth to speak but my throat was dry.The words just got stuck inside.

Geet:But why? I love wearing Saris and all married women wear them?

Channi:Exactly.Youre not married anymore.Face the reality Geet.Hes gone.And you cant do anything about it.

Geet:N…No.Why are you lying?

Molly:Geet,stop.he has.Its been a week now.That terrorist took his life and u know it.Accept it,Geet!!! You may find my words harsh but its only for you im saying it.

Geet:NOOOOO!!!!!

My world began crashing around me.Maan dead? No,I wouldn't believe it.Maan couldn't forget all the promises he made to me,Every vow he gave me.He just couldn't.They must be lying.Maan loved me and you don't leave someone you love.We had our future planned out,nice house,2 kids,Mishti and Dusht.How could he forget that? No!!Tears began to run from my eyes and they blinded me.

Geet:Why are you saying this? Do you have any proof?

Channi:Geet,Why…?

Molly:No channi.She wants proof,We have it.

SHE WALKS OVER TO A TABLE AND BRINGS A NEWSPAPER.

Channi:Here.Its got the news in it.

I slowly raised my hand and took it off her.As soon as it touched my hand,the weight of my hand increased.Everything depended on this.I lifted my gaze and began to read it.And what I read knocked the breath out of me.They were right,I was wrong.How? How could this happen? I began shaking uncontrollably.

Channi:Geet…

I lifted a hand to stop her.It shook.As the tears began to run quicker and uncontrollably I decided I wanted to hear no more.I turned and walked out,feeling everyones gaze on me.Each step weighed more than anything I'd done in my life,each step carried me away from my loved ones and towards my destination.I knew where I would go.There was nothing to be thought about really.it was obvious.I would go to the place we always went whenever there was a problem.The place we first met.And there I would decide my next path.How Ironic!!!

END

Precap:Geet:I don't want to live without you,Maan.And I wont!!!

Slowly,I moved towards the edge preparing myself for the jump.

 

How did you like this writing style? Is it better? Pls tell me!!

Pls comment😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
Felt sorry 4 geet as she was the last 1 2 find out about her husbands death
Yhh the writing style was gr8--keep it lyk dat
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

nice part
Felt sorry 4 geet as she was the last 1 2 find out about her husbands death
Yhh the writing style was gr8--keep it lyk dat
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

Thnx and i like it this way 2.More interesting😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it n ya the style is nice but precap is scary
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one.. poor geet.. felt really bad for her.. OMG geet can't kill herself.. continue soon
sur001 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
your style is really nice 😊😊😊
I really liked it but I cant help it saying that I cannot digest maans death coz whenever I read this FF I start thinking how geet will survive without maan as your track is going to that way only so please make her strong......
    I can never imagine geet without maan but storywise its going great👍🏼
t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice 2 c Geet sharing her views how she took the news... but would she b aable to end her life?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

nice part
Felt sorry 4 geet as she was the last 1 2 find out about her husbands death
Yhh the writing style was gr8--keep it lyk dat
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

same here 😊
mitzi11 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
POOR GEET SHE WAS THE
LAST ONE TO KNOW ABOUT
HER HUSBAND BUT THE
PRECAP SOUNDS INTERESTING
LOVE IT BRILLIANT UPDATE
PLS CONT SOONNNNNNNNN
THANKS  4 PM