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~Tantalizing Beauty Marks~ OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
yaar so hot and dreamy you wrote wonderfully 
as me seeing all in front of my eyes Embarrassed
 kaash we cud see some thing like this on screen omg if only ghsp had no been in india we sure gonna see  our dream coming trueCry

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dreamy_Mystique

wow..........i am blushing profuselyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
u deserve a phoolon ki barsaat.........
simply awesome
Thank you, thank you and thank you! Hug
Happy that I made you blush. LOL

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kunataanya

wow!!! i can't believe this is ur first OS... it's really really good... Clap and super hot!! Blushing
Yup, it really is my first OS and I can't believe the response I'm getting!
 
Thanks for reading and commenting! Hug

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rahmona_pakswe

Originally posted by Amiiish

Indeed you deserve phulon ki barsaat dear, this was awesome, so beautifully described, I had a clear picture in ma mindEmbarrassed
And Im not a writer so didnt see the faults, but there is always scope for betterments I believe, but cant point outLOL
The attempt was great, keep it up dear;)
Jag tackar sa mycket! Embarrassed 
Thanks for reading and commenting my OS! Hug
 
Yes there's always room for improvement I believe that too.

Haha de va sa liteHug

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prema_ks

Mona! What should I write? I am shocked. 
Why didn't you try before? I was like this
BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
Simply sensual and awesome. now more 
it's punishment time for you. we want daily
one OS from you. 

Seriously you are amazing ClapClapClap

Prema darling, thank you so much for liking my OS! Embarrassed
Thanks for reading and commenting too! Hug
 
Why didn't I write before? Maybe I wasn't ready back then....but I am now. Beside I needed a push in the right direction...you and all my fellows in Wine Club helped me a lot in that.
 
So you are going to punish me....hmm...what kind of punishment do you have on your mind? Wink LOL

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mehraan

MONA MONA.... WHERE WERE U yaar since so mny days???Big smile from nowonwards  im goin 2 quench my so called  thirst n hunger 4 MANEET by reading ur OS'S  n im goin 2 pester u a lot...so dnt mindLOLLOLLOL....
totally xratedEmbarrassed u kno wat i liked mre abt ur writing is it was simple 2 understand/ like an open book...... most of the time in mny  sensual OS n FFS tat i go through...smetimes its hard 2 understnd the situations n also complicated words ...mny times i keep on wondering whtr thy had it or notLOLLOLLOLor wats goin on now...stuck , confused n clueless!!!
bt i totally enjoyed reading urs n u hve an xcellent way of  writing  especially wid words... loved the whole idea on beauty marks...never read or heard anywhere..very original!
i  was literally clutching  the table when they bodies were rubbing n feeling...i cud feel smethng inside me doin somersaultLOLLOLLOLLOLthe rubbing part is so erotic...well dne keep it up...
definately phoolon ki barsaat....Clap
wen is the nxt OS cmng up??Blushing
Mehr darling, thanks for reading and commenting my OS! Hug
 
The idea of writing an OS on beauty marks have been haunting me for MONTHS. Ever since I noticed that DD had quiet a lot of them I've been thinking of how to use them in a story. No one else has written anything remotely close to it(not that I know of Confused) nor will the CV's ever get the idea to use them in a Maaneet scene(duffers) so I thought I should give it a shot.
 
Thanks for liking my writing style. I wanted people to be able to visualize what I wrote. If I have succeeded in that then I'm the happiest person on earth. Dancing
 
Please don't put any pressure on me.LOL It's not easy to write. My respect for all ther OS- and FF writers out there have increased immensly. The next OS will come when it comes. Beside ever heard of  'sabar ka phal meetha hota hain'?Wink LOL
 
 

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetha10

wow tht was hot n sensational.. luved it..
Thanks for reading and commenting! Embarrassed I appreciate it very much. Hug

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
phulon  ki barsaat :)

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