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*@AR short story-Let me Love you*@

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Hello everybody! This is Sanjana and i know that its been very  long and i am really sorry to you all about this since i was unable to complete my fanfics and i don't think i'd be able to, but wheneve i am free and i feel like comping back here, i know there are some friends of mine to welcome me.

So here's presenting you a very short story. Hope you like it.

                                            LET ME LOVE YOU

Coffee Shop

"Ok..so..umm..i want to tell you something.." he finally got the strength to say something after like 30 mins waiting there in the coffee shop. 

"I have to do this...." he murmured. Today was the day when he was going to propose to the girl of his life. They had been good friends since 4 years, shared everything with each other. But soon, Armaan realized that Riddhima was more than a friend to him, his soulmate.

"Bolo bhi..! kya sab kuch mujhe he bolna padega?" Riddhima replied.

"Tumhein pata hai na ki mein kya bolne wala hun.."

"Toh? yeh kaam ladkoon ka hota hai..itne saloon se jaante ho mujhe aur ab yeh bhi nai keh sakte?"

"ok..fine...here it goes.."

"Ms. Riddhima Gupta, i have a song for you..." he smiled.

"Song? tu song ke baarein mein baat kar raha tha?" she asked angrily.

"Haan, tujhe kya laga?" he answered cheekily.

"huh! mujhe laga ki..."

"laga ki..?" 

"kuch nai..kya song hai?"

"Ahem! Ahem!

   This song is dedicated to the love of my life, my Riddhima...
This left Riddhima surprised and happy at the same time, finally Armaan was able to say that to her.
   
   From the day that I met you, girl
   I knew that your love would be
   Everything that I ever wanted in my life
   From the moment you spoke my name
   I knew everything had changed
   Because of you I felt my life would be complete

   Oh baby, I need you
    For the rest of my life, girl
    I need you
    To make everything right, girl
    I love you
     And I'll never deny that
     I need you
 
     Nothing matters but you, my love
     And only God above would be the one
     To know exactly how I feel
     I could die in your arms right now
     Knowing that you somehow
     Would take my soul and keep it
     Deep inside your heart

    Oh baby, I need you
    For the rest of my life, girl
    I need you
    To make everything right, girl
    I love you
    And I'll never deny that
    I need you


"I love you too Armaan" she replied while hugging him.

"I love you...shaadi kab kar rahi ho mujhseh?" he asked

"Jab tum chaho..."

"Abhi!" he chuckled.

"Kyun nai?" she smiled and continued hugging him tightly.

ok...so this was an introduction to my new ff. 
Hope you like it. Its going to be a short story and i'll wind up with it in about 3-4 parts.

Awaiting your comments.

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
beautiful....
 
lobd it...
 
pm me wen u ud....
 
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
hey nice concept
do pm me and do continue it
love u
salina

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 5:36am | IP Logged
nice and pm me

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
very niceeeee.............luved it............update soon...............pm me plzzz



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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
nycc os :))

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
hey sounds great!
continue soon
n plz pm me :)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Very nice start.
Do pm me whn u update.

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