MG FF: The Kidnap #2 Note PG76 - Page 17

I was thinking about some light scene and like liz said take the kidnapping to the next level.

Originally posted by: TinkJia

I was thinking about some light scene and like liz said take the kidnapping to the next level.

OFF topic isn't that jimmy shergills pic from Tera Mera ki rishta (I love that movie).

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

Jassi come on! Pwweeez . . . Well I want to see Maan causing serious damage . . . Than I want him to hurt Geet in such a way that she makes him pine (of course he must fall for her).

We are enlightened to Maan's past and what happened.

Hot scenes are always welcomed.

Umm . . . Maybe Maan takes kidnapping to a new level (light torture) EVIL Liz can think of all this!

Love

Liz

P. S I love anything you write so PLEASE atleast write some fight scenes and makeup scenes with Maaneet PWEEZ

Heyy
Yu have got a great FF going on here :P
I think the above comments are right take the kidnapping to next level but everytime he does something really hurtfull to Geet, maybe make him feel bad or give a little prik in his heart so we know we his falling for her. I also like that Geet is not giving up on escaping.
Rest is up to yu but whatever yu decide I'm sure we will all like it (:
Cont.soon

                        StarEdited by starasdf - 12 years ago

yes yes... pls include maybe some light scenes.. like geet caring for maan not like a kidnapper but someone close to her... n yea, hot scenes r welcome as always... hehehheee... n maybe the reason behind why maan kidnapped geet n then geet falling for maan... etc etc... 

oye Jassi ... ab to update kero ... kitnaaa time ho gaya   😭

jassi reread u'r story. it'll five u a good sense of direction.

Hey I just came across ur ff and I loved it 😊
And u write really good
Well I think u are at a good pace wid the story but a lil glimpse of maan past to geet and to us too
Ps add me in ur pm list 😃

Hey i m loven ur FF's would u plz add me to ur PM list.😊

Jassi, let maan do something very painfull to Geet and then regret it and try to hurt himself

Edited by Dansindiadans - 12 years ago