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Opposites Attract- maaneet ff thread # 1 (Page 96)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Aww thanks for updating even if u were ill.
Get well soon Sanju.
Great update. Tell me about it yaar econmics studies are hard lol. Geets life is way more interesting than mine lol.
Love the architecture debate u developed :D
Cant wait for the next update :)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Ohh dear ! take some rest. Get well soon... no need to pain urself.. we will pray for u and wait for updates.

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
cute argument

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Very nice update. Loved your FF right from the beginning..Hope you are feeling well & good..Take care.

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
sweety pie i hope
yu feel better
wow geet became
independent having
fun with her friend
learning new things
super brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
 

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continue soon

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wonderful update dear..And I hope u get well soon..

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PART   17
 
 
 
 
 PART  18    
 
 
The story pace is going quite slow and I want it to move faster.Im not going to detail everything but personally dnt like open loops so im giving a brief on geet's and maan's daily routine. And geet's chemistry with different persons of the family. With this I will take small time leaps just telling about maaneet encounters in details. I think that is of most interest to u all. I wont be able to resist giving college moments as they interest me but it depends on ur response and demands. Hope this pattern goes well for u all too. Maybe this and next update seem a little bore to u but further the story would move faster.
 
 
 
 
 Geet got up by her buzzing alarm. She lazily got up. Freshened and wore salwar kameez. She softly entered Maan's room thru the terrace. She knew it was his workout time. His room was quite bed still ruffled. She moved and crumpled the sheets on the side he hadn't slept. This had become her daily routine to avoid any kind of suspicion. Nakul used to come to tidy the room only after geet came out of the room. Geet wud have her morning tea with daadi. The maximum time at home was spent with daadi. Geet wud then have her breakfast either gossiping with daadi or she wud sit in the kitchen table and eat talking to the crowd there. Daadi never minded her sitting in the kitchen as by this geet had relieved her of the duty of monitoring maan's breakfast. Daadi thought this was a way geet took care of maan's need but for geet she cudnt eat alone in the hall. But the servants understood her authority and abided by her instructions.
 
Today she tried her hand on the cheese omellete to make a circular one'.she tried twice but it never was as perfect as maan always wanted. One of the cooks was expert in that practise makes perfect. She wondered y was he so obsessed with perfection even in food items. she kept on trying various dishes but never was cooking it for maan but for her own satisfaction.
 
 After finishing her breakfast she wud rush to her room, get ready for college'mostly jeans and t shirts (cartoon character t shirts were her favorites) , her hair tied in a pony, gloss was all she applied for the sake of makeup. She was just gorgeous. She peaked into maan's room' he must be in the dressing room getting ready for office; she gives a cunning smile to the tidy bed. Hum gajab ke draamebaaz hai poore ghar ko banate hai. She rushed downstairs and left for college. College was fun for her'she wud attend all the classes, make notes, chill in the breaks. She had merged quite well with the gang'they chilled together'she had fun in life she had missed for so long. On weekdays she had computer courses on alternate days where the whole gang went except riya.
 
On Tuesdays and Thursdays she had her dance classes with Riya. Actually riya was terribly interested in Salman's dance classes. Salman used to take up one batch of students in the college auditorium.
 
Salman was a young choreographer, heart throb of girls. Riya had a super crush on him and wanted to join the classes. Geet was the only possible person in the gang to join her there. Geet was supple and liked dancing. Meera was very stiff and was less interested. Nuts and dance were two poles. Initially geet was hesitant but slowly she opened up to dance. It gave her a way to express her emotions. She loved dancing and exceled in it too. She learnt contemporary and basic Bollywood styles along with semi classical and others.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
On weekends she joined courses related to management like OB etc with nuts and romeo. she had taken daadi's permission for it. She attended morning classes on Saturday and Sunday. She had already completed 2 courses in the last 3 months.
 
Her afternoons on weekends were always spend with daadi. Both loved each others company. They wud see TV together or just discuss movies. Geet may read novels to daadi and daadi wud just lie on the bed listening to geet. Shopping was now a joint venture for both. Daadi had found a companion in geet. Geet wud always be available for daadi. Even NT was good to daadi but she never found these things to be interesting. At times they wud even go for grocery shopping. Geet made even grocery shopping interesting for daadi, she wud mock at the names of the product and the two women wud giggle all the way in the aisle of shopping centre. Daadi wud tell stories of her kitty party friends and their stupidities and show off. Geet paid serious attention to daadi's medical needs. She made it a point to be there at all her visits. Daadi also took care of geet's small needs and likings. So they were more daadi poti than saas bahu. Infact two good friends in the silent mansion. When they were together one cud always hear their giggles.
 
Geet had also relieved daadi from the burden of kitchen slowly. Initially she was hesitant but when she saw daadi getting stressed managing things at her age she just took over. On Sundays geet wud monitor all the needs of the kitchen and the staff. Nakul will provide her with requirement list to which she checked and approved. When nakul wud purchase and come back she wud just stroll in the kitchen and help him in arranging so that without wording she wud ensure the quality of product and also she knew everything in the kitchen . even if she didn't cook a single whole meal she very well knew where each thing was. Daadi loved her efficiency. She wanted someone who cud monitor she never wanted a bahu who wud while of her whole time in kitchen but is aware of her house its management and its requirements. Geet fulfilled all these requirements.
 
This is where NT always lacked. She was a good natured girl but just lacked responsibility. She liked life to be king size but without working for it. She wanted all luxuries which she got. She hailed from a reputed rich business family. Dev and NT had a love marriage. According to daadi they were truly made for each other. They liked everything about each other. Dev loved her a lot and wanted to provide her all needs. Her needs were dresses, jewellery, and party. She never had time for any other thing. Dev and NT hardly met geet. They went for late night parties, returned at almost mornings, wud sleep late , miss breakfast and be there for lunch with daadi only if they were not out shopping. For this maan was the provider. It was not that maan and daadi had not tried sending him to office. Lately he showed up at office nw and then. But giving him assignments meant blunder.. he wud turn up late or wud even miss it so maan never gave him serious jobs. So when he turn up in office late, without work and flirt with the staff, it was infuriating for maan. People used to compare both of them and it hurt somewhere deep down to maan. Dev was his darling bro. he felt somewhere responsible for his behaviour. After their parents death, mnaan and daadi had to manage verything and they babied dev a little too much to fill in the gap. Daadi took over business again and maan rushed thru his college to help daadi with business. In the process he missed his enjoyments and pleasure. He never wanted his sibling to suffer the same but initial indulgence turned him to a total spoilt brat and the girl he chose was oil in the fire no no petrol'.
So maan mostly gave Dev tour jobs to visit various offices across the country where he wud monitor on his behalf collect all info and be back. If the work required 2 days dev and NT wud take 5 but it hardly mattered to maan. Till dev was not doing anything wrong and he did his work sincerely. Nt and dev wud make all such trips as holidays have loads of fun and come back. Dev's work was always fine and people feared him because of his loyalty to maan. He never lied to him and one word against his elder bro and he wud create havoc for the person.
 
Coming to maan.
Maan stuck to his daily routine of workout in the morning no matter how late he slept. Post that he wud freshen up, have his breakfast with daadi. By this time geet always left for her college. He was never late and wud get ready and leave for office. Office was occupying for him. He worked hard for attaining new heights. Never satisfied by his current achievements and always had greed for more. This greed of his for success had brought him this far. He was honest in his work and perfect too. He devoted much of his time and labour in bringing the company to the pinnacles it was now. He mostly came home by 9 or sometimes even late depending on his work. At home he wud again spend time in his study over files. Daadi mostly had dinner with geet. He ate alone mostly. Sometimes he wud join them.  dev and NT were mostly absent on dinner. They wud be there only for lunch that too if they didn't go out. By the time maan wud reach his room geet was always there in hers doing her night study completing assignments of the day. Sometimes geet wud come late after chatting with daadi on those days she wud silently walk to her room. Maan never looked at her or talked to her. It was not his arrogance but nature. He never had anything to talk. Geet also never stopped to talk.
 
The silence prevailed but not for long'
 
 
PRECAP
mann meets his bold college girl geet
 
 
bored of the long post but had to write this.pllzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz do comment if this time leap is fine for u all. thanks for ur wishes im feeling much better today.
plz comment.
 
 
 
PART 19
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by sanjeevani09 - 06 April 2011 at 1:52am

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