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Abhay-Piya FF- Let the destiny unfold uptd pg137 (Page 57)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Like you Abhy And Piya  ...!!!!    
Every Day May Not Be Good But
There's Something
G o o d
In Everyday

G o o d
M o R n I n G
Have A Blessed Day

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pyaarification

abhay scared of piya...!!!! lol that was hilarious...!update soon dear


                thnk u dear.. ! Embarrassed
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                                                CHAPTER 16

                    
                                                      Abhay who had a black vest in his hand walked over to Piya, every step of his was creating tension in Piya's body, she shuddered at his every move.. his smirk burned her body as she kept looking at him with big brown innocent orbs filled with a mixture of tension and passion washed over. 
                                                    "Abhay what are you doing..?" she said standing up like a scared pigeon, and slowly taking steps backward.. backward and fell on the bed flat...she kept moving making her her way to the middle of the bed, still laid flat, now she thought she was done for, her heart was beating louder than 8000Hz probably.. and she was dumbstruck, her mouth was opening and closing, breathing heavily as Abhay made it to the bed standing at the foot of the bed, giving his signature smirk, Piya felt like her heart jumped to her mouth and his eyes were sending some kind of infra red waves to her, "You scared.?", "... No im not.." she said shivering like a small baby in the cold, Abhay understood that he was making her nervous, it was not only him she too was not any better, the way she looked at him, it almost seemed that she wanted him to come closer, there was visible tension running in both their bodies.
                                                   It was driving him insane, his feelings got fused with his mind and was so driven to touch her, he looked up at her trying to read her, she was blank at the moment, her mind was shut down completely drowning in the essence of the moment. He fought against himself that it was wrong, and should not do that but could not control his growing feelings. 'Stop' he screamed in his mind and that's all,"Sorry.. i got a little carried away" he said moving away and putting on his vest. Piya just took a look at his body observing his well built muscles ebbing out.. his six packs was just looking so tempting, Piya was so totally taken aback by her own feelings, she just gulped down and put her head down as she sat backing aganist the bed's well carved black furniture.. the whole room was beautiful infact.. the walls were plain white and a few paintings were put on, the bed was huuge..!! Probably 4 people could sleep there comfortably.. phew..!! 
                                                "Abhay", she whispered after a long silence, he was now sitting on the bed too... and the fan was on full speed, so that can dry away the wet water molecules present on her nylon cloth.. that's deep..! She was sitting with her knees to her chest, putting her head on her knees, she couldnt go out like this and she didnt know what to do, Abhay loooked tensed, he was thinking of something, he didnt even mind that Piya was sitting there in his room, whose clothes were apparently wet..! No... he was only lost, he and his thoughts..! 
                                                "Ha.." he replied, "Ah.. where are your parents..?" she asked, being the curious one," You really want to know..?" making a surprised face and blinking his eyes, ok he was acting weirdly, he didnt want Piya to get any doubt, but Piya was more than doubts when he showed his "crazy yippee 'nothing's wrong'" avtar... "Ah ya i want to know.." she said silently, what she really wanted to do is to laugh out like a hyena, cause Abhay's whatever face expressions were darn funny, and yes he was looking very cute, but at the same time funny.. this is contradiction..!! Abhay could read that, and didnt what to do, except to stare at her like a hawk.. blinking his eyes AGAIN..! 
                                                Hahahahah... she laughed and laughed.. holding her stomach.. and hitting on the bed. He just looked at her, she was laughing so beautifully, 'not even all the roses of the world could look this pretty' he thought 'another line of poetry.. darn it.!! What's with this girl' , she slowly licked her lips, closed her mouth and looked up at him with a light expression, he was just confused, he didnt know what to do. His heart was feeling too heavy, he wanted to share his problems, his anxiety, just let it all out.. unburden his drowning non-existent beating heart..! He just took in deep breathes before he let it all out.. 
     
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Nice update
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nice update  dear...

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
lovely update
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owesum updateClap ... so romanticBlushing... abhiya moments drived me crazyEmbarrassed... loved the updateHug... thanks fr the pm and continue soonHeart

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