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Abhay-Piya FF- Let the destiny unfold uptd pg137 (Page 123)

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Thumbs Upawesome...update...G8 work...plz cont soonSmile

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Hey katie i'm newbie here (although i hav been readng yr fic 4m starting) i cnt help admiring u dear. Ur abhay always make me giggle. Plzzz update soon

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessKhizra

Hey katie i'm newbie here (although i hav been readng yr fic 4m starting) i cnt help admiring u dear. Ur abhay always make me giggle. Plzzz update soon


                    Thnks so much.. im glad u like it..!!!! Updating right away..!! Big smile
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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
                   hey guys thnks so much for all the support.. i really feel the need of telling this to u all the time.. sorry if im irritating you by this.. lol.!!!



                                                                  Chapter 35


                                 "Aha... caught you redhanded.!!!!" Sabrina screamed as she barged through Abhay's room.. both Abhay and Piya underwent sudden shock when they saw her.. they were embaressed at the position they were in.. "You guys.! Cant blame em'.. you're teenagers.. but seriously u find a bed and just get started.!?" Sabrina asked naughtily which made Piya go red al over again.. Abhay became uncomfortable now.. figeting with Piya T shirt... "Sabrina..!" Abhay complained.. Sabrina just smirked and said, "Lol.. sorry for tat.. hmm anyways you look cute together.. wel if you don mind can u pls cut it out.. i want to talk somethin important.!"

                                                      "Ah.. ya go ahead.!" said Abhay still holding on to Piya by her waist.. Sabrina narrowed her eyes.. understanding what she means they both slipped out and Abhay covered her with a huge towel.. Rolling her eyes Sabrina started out, "Ah ya.. wel the thing i wanted to tell is.. dont u find that getting this piece of silver was a lil too easy.?".. Abhay gulped hard.. "What are you trying to say..?".. "Just trying to say that after Tala challenged you that he will take the piece of silver, and now when he had perfectly good chance to take it.. he just drops it.. dont u find this a lil too weird..?".. "Um... yes that is weird i mean why would let go a chance like tat.?" said Piya budging in the topic.. "Unless he has a huge trap kept in place for us.!" said Abhay giving a distant look.. "Well if that is the case then why did Tala send the elves.. why did he even think of kidnapping me.. this really doesnt make any sense.." said Abhay confused. "Good point.. well whatever it is.. it just means that we gotto be on a high alert all the time.. and i gues i l be staying with guys until Abhay gets the ring.. finally.!!" Sabrina concluded the topic.. "Yeah.. i guess we should be careful.. thanks Sabby.. i always love you company.." Abhay said smiling.. 
                                                       "Good to see you all happy and smiling..!" Haseena exclaimed as she came into the room.. they all smiled in response.. "But Abhay.. its a little too late and Piya missed her classes a fewdays because of you *grins* so i think you should drop her home.. im sure she has work to catch upto..!" said Haseena gleaming a friendly smile.. "Yeah aunty.. i gotto go.. bye aunty.. bye Sabrina.!" said Piya before being escorted by Abhay to his car, as he drove to the hostel.. Piya was exhausted.. Abhay didnt want to disturb.. as they reached the hostel gates.. he gently nudged Piya to get up.. she pushed his hand away and nuzzled closer to the large towel which was still over her petite body.. and closing her eyes tighter. Abhay smiled at the sleeping beauty in front of him.. opening his car door he came over to hers.. and lifted her in his arms. The weather was extremely ice cold.. this made Piya hug Abhay tightly seeking for some warmth.. 
                                                          He felt turned on by her cute touches.. her mouth had twisted into a cute pout as she layed on his arms.. he laid her on the bed.. and sat next her.. he caressed her forehead and put a blanket over her.. she was still shivering, so he blinked.. and then put another one.. she was still shivering.. ah.. he looked at the windows they were tightly closed.. 'how the heck is she feeling cold.?' he wondered staring at her.. she looked like a egyptian mummy already.. and she still shivered.. 'that's it..!!' Abhay could not bear it any more.. he flipped the blankets aside and jumped on next to her on the bed and rolled her towards his side and hugged her tightly and put a blanket securely over them.. Piya's eyes opened lightly.. she could see a red T.. Abhay's T color.. "Abhay..!" she whispered.. "Im right here love.." he said rubbing her back as she snuggled closer to him if that was even possible.. they slept like that throughout the night.. God bless that her roommates had emptied the place recently.. giving the love birds some privacy.. 
                                                            Abhay was awake the wholenight.. he was disturbed by what Sabrina had told them.. Piya may not be safe.. she is with me.. what if they use her to get to me.? She will be hurt.. i cant let that happen.. but what can i do.? His thoughts were disturbed by Piya's mumbling... "Abhay.. Abhay..!" she whispered anxiously in her dreams.. Abhay getting a lil worries shook her by the arms.. "Piya are you ok.?" Piya stopped mumbling.. after 2 min she slowly got up blinking her sleepy eyes.. and stretching her arms wide.. rubbing her face.. she looked to her side to find Abhay staring at her actions... "Abhay..!" she said hugging him.. and Abhay was like -_- weird women.! 
                                                            "You were mumbling my name in your sleep.. like something happened to me.. and now you get up like nothing ever did..!!" he said narrowing his eyes.. "Oh i did..? wel you just saved me from all the bad guys.. that's why i didnt get up screaming..!!" she said pouting.. "You're watching a lot of movies these days i sware..!!" Abhay retorted... 'I just hope i can save you from al the harm and danger.. love you Piya' he thought mentally as he warmly smiled at her...   
                                                              Abhay returned back home and took a shower and was all ready to go to college.. Piya had already spoken about this topic that he was NOT going to pick her up form hostel.. it would just grab attention and she didnt want to stand in the limelight.!! 


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                                                            The days were goin wel.. they were in a good understanding now.. but it still erked them when they really could not express each otehr fully and had to supress al their feelings.. one of those calm nights, while Piya was giving a thought about herself and Abhay wondering why she was involved in so much of secracy... why me.? It was not like she hated it.. but wel.. she cold not be really open about things, her thoughts went running by as she flipped through the pages of the book unconciously.. she did not when but soon enough her head hit the desk and she was fast asleep.. 
                                                                It was almost 1am.. someone wearing a black cloak, was staring through the window, the stare itself was freaky... the eyes were a colour bluissh green huge orbs.. peeping through the window eyeing Piya's body with great intent.. the creature or whoever it was stared at her for about 5min.. and then slowly moved into the room without a single noise, his eyes  grew wide.. if that was ever possible.. his eyes already looked like the eye balls were going to pop out any second..!  His hand slipped through the cloak.. huge and brown with huge nails, which were quite sharp.. giving an evil grin.. he took Piya up.. closing her mouth with a black cloth, and also her eyes.. putting her over his arms. he jumped on to the window.. giving one nasty growl, he jumped and fled from the hostel.. while Abhay felt throughly about something.. taking a deep breath he continued reading the book.. he looked back when he heard a noise from the window, he eyes grew wide and serious.. when he read the words carved on the glass window.. ' I have thy Piya...! You are going to be DOOMED..!'... 



                         hey guys.. here is the part.. i ve been sorta lazy sorry..!!! wel i hope u like it.. hit the "like" button if u do... and comment... thnks.!!! 
                                

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Awesome..but i'm lil bit confused i mean are u writing about the past and present...?i mean u r writing in Bold and Italic..what does that mean?LOLLOL
Abhiya were awesome...Day Dreaming
thanxx for the PM..and update soon...

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
great update, so has Tala kidnaped Piya, but how cud abhay be so careless as to leaving her alone without any protectionConfused

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 27 August 2011 at 10:02am

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Selinapiya

Awesome..but i'm lil bit confused i mean are u writing about the past and present...?i mean u r writing in Bold and Italic..what does that mean?LOLLOL
Abhiya were awesome...Day Dreaming
thanxx for the PM..and update soon...


               yes.. bold is the present and the past is in italics... the past the incidents which had occured a few days before.. the scene in the first update..!!! thnks.. and ur  welcome for the pm.. 

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
great part...

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