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~~~MaYur OS /SS Gallary~~~MN OS...PG 144 (Page 77)

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
hey mari just read all skipped parts
and i must say story is very interesting...i like
mayank's character ...his passion and possessiveness
for his love and idea of age difference is also new...
nupur's marriage with neev....is a bit sad...but 
i think its not gonna happenWink

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 7:31am | IP Logged
what nupurs doing is really wrong. if not with mayank then with neev. he loves her. she should tell her that she doesnt love him back.

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
wow it was fab......Big smile

finally nupur confirmed her relation for him.....Smile
poor mayank who told him to hurt himself......Angry but due to ths act atleast he seen nupurs love towards him......Day Dreaming

lovely update dear........



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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged

Thank u sooo much everyone for liking this SS...thankssss for urc comments n appreciation...HugHugHugHug

 
means a lot to me...i ll start my next SS soon...i hope u all like that tooEmbarrassed
 
Love
 
Maria


Edited by maria-soniarti - 09 April 2011 at 11:59am

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged

Part 7'

 

You love me' Mayank asked her while looking in her eyes'

 

She looked at him 'I don't love you..she said in shaking voice

 

Nupur left his hand'.she realized what she was doing..Mayank I don't love you'she repeated..she wipped her tears with trembling  hands'

What I was doing?

Why I could not control myself?

 

She thought'

 

She turned around and looked at Neev'who was in shocked to hear their conversation.

 

She walked towards him'.Mayank felt as someone took his life from him'Nupur went close to him..and held his hand'

 

Neev please yahan se chalo'she said in low voice'she knew her decision has hurt Mayank but she has no other option..

Mayank was standing stood there lifeless...she has rejected his love.. 

They came out of restaurant'Nupur was not able to meet her eyes with him..and  she was not in her senses to give him any explanation of her behavior'so she silently sat in car..Neev did not ask any question to her as he wanted that Nupur herself told him about Mayank..

 

The whole journey both were quite'

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On the other hand'Mayank was hell hurt because of her decision'he was unable to understand why she was doing all this..

 

 He did not want to loose him'

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They reached at home..and came out of car'

 

She was feeling guilty to not to tell him about Mayank.,,but she was upset more for

Mayank... 

They entered in house...Nupur did not know how will she tell him about Mayank?and what?

Neev...woh.. 

Nupur!! 

Do you love him? He asked her looking in her eyes

 

Nupur was stunned at his question'she did not know what to say. It was true she loves him..but for his sake she had to deny her love..

 

I 'don't---love'him'her words were choking due to tears'

I don't love him Neev'Tum chahte the na..hamari shadi jald ho jaye..i m ready for marriage'she said while controlling her tears..

 

 

Neev went close to her and cupped her face'and wipped her tears

 

Nupur why you are telling lie'I can easily see love in your eyes for him..

 

Nupur looked at him in shocked

 

Nupur I want your happiness..if your happiness lies in Mayank..then I m too happy for you'you love him'accept the truth..

 

Neev'Nupur wanted to say her something'but he put finger on her lips

 

Shhhh'aj pehli bar toh miss Nupur Bhushan ke samne bolne ka mauqa mila hai'toh bolne do na'warna toh tum hamesha bolti ho..aur main suntan hoon..

 

Both smiled.

 

 why you denying your love when you love her so much?i saw pain in your eyes,in your face,I felt love in your eyes for him'he loves you a lot..

 

He told him looking in her eyes'

 

Nupur accept his love'you are a very lucky girl as you has Mayank in your life who loves you unconditionally'don't reject his love'

 

Go and held his hand'.

but..Nupur was trying to say
 
you are worry for me...he smiled
 
it is true Nupur..i love you a lot more than anyone else in the world...you are my heart beat...no one can take your place in my life but for me your happiness is more than important ....
 
i can do anything for your smile... 

We were friends and will always'he said while kissed her forehead..

 Go..and tell him you loves him too..

she smiled broadly
 
Thank you Neev'
 
she said with smile while gave him hug'

 

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Nupur went to Mayank house but he was not there and  his mother too did not not where he was...she got scared 

She went to samrat house....

 

Samrat where is Mayank'Nupur asked him impatiently..

 

Why you asking for him..hunn..you are the one person who gave him so much pain'who had  hurt him badly..what was his fault'?>

 

His fault was that'he loves you deeply madly'he did not care for anyone'but you did not care for him'you did not respect his love,his emotions..why now you so much bothering about him'what else you want'Samrat was hell angry at her because of Mayank

 

Please Samrat'

I know I had hurt him but I was helpless'

 

I love him 'I really love him..Samrat was shocked and happy to listen her confession

 

He really happy for Mayank...

 
You love him..Samrat asked while a broad smile on his face
 
yeah i love him... 

Please tell me where is Mayanbnk'I want to meet him'please tell me'she was requesting him while tears were coming out of her eyes'

 

i called all my friends but no one has seen him..i m too upset..'

 
he was hell hurt after whatever happened in restaurant.Samrat told her
 
Mayank kahan ja sakta hai...she was scared..she shrugged off negative thoughts from her mind

sirf aik jagah bachi hai jahan woh ho sakta hai...Samrat told him

kahan...jaldi batao?
 
Beach... 

 

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Mayank was sitting on sand'he was crying'Nupur words pierced his heart

 

Why did you hurt me'?

 

Why did you give me so much pain?

 
i cant bear it anymore? 

Whats my fault Nupur?tell me?

He was talking to himself'

 

Mayank'.Nupur called him'

 

Mayank turned around 'she was standing near him..

 

Nupur'Mayank said in shocked'

 

She ran towards him and hugged him tightly'

 

Mayank could not understand anything  but then he hugger her back'

where you have gone?do you know how much i was upset ,i got scared...dont leave me again..she said while hugging him...
 
Mayank hugged her tightly....he smiled to thought that she loves him 

They both felt content in each other arms'

 

She pulled herself little back, raised her head and looked into his eyes..

I m sorry Mayank'I had hurt you a lot'I m a bad girl na.

 

 Nupur'don't say sorry'he cupped her face and wiped her tears'

 

I cant see tears in your eyes'I love you Nupur'I really love you a lot'I cant live without you'

 

Mayank said looking in her eyes'Nupur could feel immense love in his eyes,his voice..

 

I love you too Mayank'I really love you'Nupur said while tears coming out of her eyes'He could not believe on his ears'he was smiling

 

 

Nupur please again said those words'

 

I love you Mayank'i really love you'I cant live without you'She said with same love and affection'

 

Mayank hugged her tightly'

 

They felt blessed in each other arms'

 

I love you Nupur'he said while dipping his face into her neck..

 

After sometime they pulled themselves 'both were felt complete and content in each other arms'

 why  do you denying your love?Mayank asked her..

 Mayank I was scared? Nupur looked in his eyes and said

 

He looked at her disturbed face,,,he cupped her face

 

tell me'whats the thing that was bothering you

 

Mayank no one will accept our love, no one will accepts our relationship in society as I m elder'

 

Shhshh'Nupur even did not complete her sentence'Mayank put his finger on her lips'

 

 

Nupur aj ke bad ye baat dobara met kehna'I don't care about damn society,about people'I just know one thing I love you'you are my life,you are my jaan'I cant live without'I love you unconditionally'

 

Nupur love has no boundaries'love does not know any cast, age difference, status,

 

There is no value of these things in front love'

 
she was looking at him with respect,with love...
 
he loves her truly... 

But if your parents did not accept our relationship? she asked innocently'

 

 

Nupur'meri sirf maa hain..bohat chota tha jab baba ki death ho gaye thi..aur maa who toh tumhain pehli hi apni bahu maan chuki hain..

 

He said with a wide grin on his face

 

Sach..Nupur said while smiling

 

Much' he replied...both laughed..

 

She hugged him again'I love you Mayank

 

I love you too..Mayank said with same love..

 

They pulled themselves apart..Mayank noticed Nupur red face due to blushed'

 

Mayank pulled her towards him again'she bumped onto his chest'

 

They both smiled'

 

Nupur placed her hands around his neck'

 

Nupur was blushing hard'Mayank eyes moved down to her trembling lips..

 

He placed his lips on her'

 

He kissed her lovingly'Nupur responded his kiss'their kiss turned into passionate kiss'both were lost into each other'

 

Rain started'as nature was also happy to see them together'

 

Finally both lovers together'

 

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Love is the most wonderful thing in the world'

 

If you love someone..you should confesse your love..as Love will not wait for you always..dont care about society,people anthing, 

 

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here is the last part of SS...i hope u ll like it...plz do comments n press like tab..if u like it..


Edited by maria-soniarti - 10 April 2011 at 1:59am

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
part 5 was soo nicee

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Beautiful end Maria... true lovers met in the end... Embarrassed
 
Very nice end, do write more on MN...
 
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Heartso  much loving update nice dear very happyyyyyyyy endingClapthanx 4 pm me

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