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~~~MaYur OS /SS Gallary~~~MN OS...PG 144 (Page 25)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
omg maria 
felt really sad for mayank
yes god did not seperate them
thanks for the pm
so write more

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by -moona-

Maria i am crying now ...
OmG what can i say more..


But Maria one thing i wanna say u r multi talented, u can write anything and express any emotion flawlessly...
Thx for the pm Sis
@moona...awww sisHugHugHug
sorry to make u cry...but it was just my thought about True love....
 
you know sis...ur compliments,engourages me to write more better....Hug
 
Thank u so muchHug
Arey dnt say sorry..Love gives u happiness and pain too...
Keep Rocking Maria..
and ur Welcome....Hug

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kirti123

omg maria 
felt really sad for mayank
yes god did not seperate them
thanks for the pm
so write more
@Kirti
 
Thank u soooo much dear for liking itHugHug
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Originally posted by -moona-

Maria i am crying now ...
OmG what can i say more..


But Maria one thing i wanna say u r multi talented, u can write anything and express any emotion flawlessly...
Thx for the pm Sis
@moona...awww sisHugHugHug
sorry to make u cry...but it was just my thought about True love....
 
you know sis...ur compliments,engourages me to write more better....Hug
 
Thank u so muchHug
Arey dnt say sorry..Love gives u happiness and pain too...
Keep Rocking Maria..
and ur Welcome....Hug
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
maria plz update payar ka ehsaas. Its beautiful story

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Thank u sooooo much for liking my SS..HugHug..next part would be the last part....
 
 

                                        Part 4

 

Nupur and Dia have completed their shopping'Dia has bought Red lehnga with golden work on it for her wedding day..

 

Dia when will jiju come?Nupur asked Dia as she was now hell tired..

 

Nupur your jiju are not coming'.his friend is coming to pick us'she told her while she was also get tired..

 

Mayank called Dia..i m waiting for you near the main door of market..'Mayank told her'

Ok we are coming'Dia replied while picking up their bags'

 

They were walked towards the door'when Nupur stopped suddenly'

 

Ohh'Dia I forget my mobile at the counter where we were standing'you go'I am coming in just a minute'Nupur told her ,turned her face and walked towards the counter while Dia  stepped towards the door'.

 

It was almost 15 min passed but Nupur did not come'Mayank and Dia were waiting for her'

 

Where has gone Nupur? 'Dia thought as she was worried for her'

 

Where your friend has forget her mobile'Mayank asked her as he saw Dia's upset face..

 

She forgets her mobile on the payment counter'she told him with worried face'

 

Ok don't worry'I check'he said and walked towards the entrance of the market'

 

He felt strange'

 

On the other hand Nupur was searching for her mobile past 15 minutes which was at the counter'finally she found it'she stood up from the floor and about to take step when she bumped with someone and about to fall on the floor when someone held her'she closed her eyes because of fear,,,she felt his touch'.her heart started beating fast..

She opened her eyes with hope to see that person whom she wanted to see..whom she waited for so long ,whom she loved so much'.she opened her eyes and saw the same two brown eyes starring at her with disbelieve,with so much love'how much pain she could easily see in his eyes'

It's my dream or its reality'Nupur are you in my arms?'he thought'  

They had a eye lock'

Nupur'finally he spoke first word'since they met..

Nupur you are not my dream na?he said in disbelieve while touching her cheeks..

 

Mayank I m Nupur'your Nupur'its not a dream'she replied him while cupping his face..they were crying 'they were separated from each other for long 5 yrs'

 

Mayank pulled her for hug'they hugged each other tightly while they were crying'they wanted to feel each other's touch, each other's presence'they felt their presence after 5 yrs,,,they saw each other after so long'

 

I love you Mayank..I cant leave without you'why did u leave me alone?why you did not look back for once?i waited for you for so long... She confessed her love for him cupping his face..

 

Mayank was shocked and happy to listen to her confession 'he found hard to believe that Nupur loves him

Nupur you really love me...he asked her in disbelief'he was so happy..

 

Yeah Mayank I love you'I really love you'why did u me? She asked him while tears were flowing out from both's eyes'

 

I m sorry Nupur'really sorry. I thought you got married to samrat..i thought you do not love me'I could not see you with someone else. I m sorry Nupur 4 leaving you'please forgive me. he said while tears were coming out of his eyes..

I love you Nupur'I really love you..i cant not live without you..

Nupur wiped his tears as she knows how much he also suffered so much in 5 yrs..

 

I will forgive you on one condition'she said while looking at in his eyes'

Which condition?he asked her confusedly..

 promise me'you will never leave me again'I cant bear the pain of our separation'she said while some fresh tears started coming out of her already puffy eyes..

I will never,ever leave you again'I promise'he said while kissing her on her forehead and her eyes'

She closed her eyes to feel his touch..

 

I love you Nupur'I will Never leave you again'he said while hugging her tightly..Nupur hugged him back'

I love you too Mayank'she said while hugging him back'.

 

Finally two lovers, two love birds were together after long separation..they were happy and content as they were together..

 

They were too much into each other that they were forgetting about the people around them'

 

They got back to their senses as they heard people voice who were watching them..They looked around..,some were making fun of them ,some were admiring their love,'they pulled themselves away'

 

 Mayank was continuously starring at her'he could not able to take his eyes off from her for a minute'while Nupur was blushing hard due to their confession and hug..Nupur looked up and saw him starring at her'she blushed'they did not care about others'they were too much into each other as they bear the pain of separation for long'and after many years they were together..Mayank held her hand in his hands and they walked towards the outdoor where Dia was waiting for them'

 
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here is next part...i hope u all liked it....plzzzz do comments n press like tab if u liked itEmbarrassed
 


Edited by maria-soniarti - 20 March 2011 at 1:42am

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
yayy!! They met...... and confessed tooDay Dreaming
i'm so happyBig smile
thnx for de pm Maria

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
awwwwwww its cho chweet........loved it alotttttt

awesomeeeeeeeee

mayur were sooo sweet

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