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~~~MaYur OS /SS Gallary~~~MN OS...PG 144 (Page 111)

DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Wao Lovely part Dear 
I love mayur Cute scenes
waiting For mayur Surprise 
Thanks for pm 
cont soon

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daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
lovely update
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
hiii friends i m back with another Os...i add my one of favourite poem in this Os...i tried to write something different...i hope u ll like it...Embarrassed

Mayur os


Hum kitne pagal hote''


She walked towards her favourite place,her secret place..'study room' she was not a student but a wife,a mother,a friend'Nupur Bhushan Sharma'whenever she got some free time she came there and revived her sweet memories..

She walked towards the book shelf and picked up her diary'


She sat on chair..switched on the table lamp'she placed the  diary on table and opened it'

Her eyes fell on her favourite poem..she liked every word of this poem as its related to her life'


Hum kaise pagal hote the

Ik phool ko choone ki khatir

Kantoon se zakhmi hote the

Jo phool jholi main aa girta

Us se choone se dar jate the

Hum kaise pagal hote the


They were just twelve years old'both were friends,hmm not friends but best friends..Mayank and Nupur..


Mayank what are you hiding from me'as she noticed he was trying to hide something from her'


Hmmm'nothing Nupur'.he said while hiding his hands behind  his back


Mayank I know you are hiding something'please tells me na'she said looking at his hands'


Ok'bata deta hoon'he knew he could never hide anything from her'


He forward his hand towards her'Nupur its Red rose for you'as Today is valentine day'and I heard you should give rose to the person whom you liked'he said hesitantly..


She looked at him surprised'both did not know what is love?but they knew their was not just friendship between  them but something more'


Nupur accepted it'


They did not that it was the first step of their love'''.




She smiled remembered her first gift which Mayank gave her' red rose.


Jab pas bohat who hota tha

Hum us ko dekh na sakte the

Jab door chala jata tha who

Hum ahat us ki sunte the

Hum kaise pagal hote the



The whole college knew'they were not just friends'there was something between them'but they were trying to hide their feelings, their emotions..

It was the last day of their college 'Nupur was talking with her friends,Gunjan and Dia when Samrat told her that Mayank was waiting for in Parking area'


She went outside and saw him he was standing near his car..Nupur took steps towards him..she went up to him'


Nupur let's go'he said while opening car door for her'


She never asked any question because she trusts him more than herself'


They were sat in car'Mayank where we are going?Nupur asked him


Mayank looked at her and smiled at confused expression on her face'


Hmm surprise'just wait and watch'she was confused and surprised'


Their car stopped at beach'Mayank's favourite place'


They came out of car..he held her hand and they walked towards the near hut'Nupur was shocked and confused but she did not ask anything'


When they reached their'she was surprised as the room was decorated with red roses,red flowers'


Mayank'she looked at him and said


Shhh'he put his finger on her lips'


Nupur I want to tell you something,one thing that I never told you'I hide something from you'


Nupur looked at him with surprised'


Her heart beat starting fast'


Nupur'I love you'she looked in his eyes'she was shocked ,surpised,happy'she could see immense love in his eyes'


Nupur i love you 'I really love you'I don't know 'mujhe nahi pata'main kab se tumhain pyaar kerta hoon..itna janta main ne sirf tum se pyaar kiya hai'you are the heart beat of my heart'he said while some tears cam out of his eyes'


Nupur smiled'she cupped his face and wiped his tears'


Mayank main kab se is din ka intezar ker rahi thi...


I love you too Mayank'she said with same love'


Both were in tears but content a broad smile was on their faces'they hugged eachother tightly'.


They pulled themselves apart'Nupur was blushing'Mayank was looking her with so much love and passion..she blushed and turned her face but he caught her wrist and pulled her towards him..she bumped on to his chest'


She smiled and lowered her head.. 


He cupped her face'and leaned towards her'Nupur closed her eyes in antiception'her heart beat raised..she could feel his breath on her face'he placed his lips on her'


It was the first confession,first kiss of two lovers'



Jab sari duniya soti thi

Hum chand se khela kerte the

Jab sari duniya jag udhti

Phir hum thak ker sau jate the

Hum kaise pagal hote the..


They were going to get married'they were waiting for that day'

Their sleep was far away from their eyes'they were thinking about each other all the time..


Finally the day came'they became a couple'they became one..they submitted themselves to each other..


Mayank made her ,,,his one can separate them'




She closed her diary and smiled as she heard the voices of  the two most important person of her life'


Mayank and pernav


Mama..whele ale you'Pernav said while calling his mother'


I m here'


Nupur came towards him and picked up in her arms'



Mera beta aa gaya'She said while kissing his cheeks..


aur mujhe bhi kiss chahiye..main bhi toh pernav ke saath aya hoon.'Mayank leaned his face towards her and said naughtily..


Mayank'Nupur said 'she was blushing'Mayank looked at her and smiled'he enveloped them in his arms'


She felt content '..They were her life''.


Hum kitne pagal hote the

Hum kaise pagal hote the

Hum aj bhi waise pagal hain




here is os...plzz press like tab n do comments if u liked itEmbarrassed

Edited by maria-soniarti - 23 April 2011 at 7:06am

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Maria Very Sweet Nice and Romantic OS...
BeautiFul Maria..
and the Poem was Beautiful..
and Just Perfect sharma Family..

Edited by -moona- - 23 April 2011 at 7:12am

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drmaha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
cuteee maria...tht was shooo cuteee...HugHug
u really decribed the whole story beautifully in a nut shell...Big smile

loved it...Smile

Edited by drmaha - 23 April 2011 at 7:14am

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
hey maria...
firstly, I'm really sorry yaar, I know I have not been commenting since long, but trust me I have read all your OSs and SSs and I loved them all a lot...
Sorry again *holding ears*
secondly, I loved this OS as usual... it's so cute, you did a fab job sweetsClap


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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

hey maria...
firstly, I'm really sorry yaar, I know I have not been commenting since long, but trust me I have read all your OSs and SSs and I loved them all a lot...
Sorry again *holding ears*
secondly, I loved this OS as usual... it's so cute, you did a fab job sweetsClap


awww dont say sorry sisEmbarrassedHugHug
its ok...Hug
i m happy u like my work...its enough for me...Big smile

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shruti_luvs_msk IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
lovely os
such a nice poem 

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