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~~~MaYur OS /SS Gallary~~~MN OS...PG 144 (Page 106)

Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhij1

cute update maria...
Thanksss surbhiHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww... maria... dat ws really a cute update!!!
luvd MN nok jhoks....
MN frnds!
luvd it!
cant wait 4 d next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!Hug
Thankssssssss sisHug

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Thank u sooo much friends for liking n commentinmg on this ss.Ur comments n appreciation means a lot to me...HugHugHug
Love you all...Hug
@samira...sis i just noticed u had change ur Id...Embarrassednew id is awesom..Tongue

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Maria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged

Part 4


Can we be friends'he forward his hand towards her'He asked looking in her eyes'.


Nupur looked into his eyes'there was something in his eyes'which melt her heart,which captured her heart'


She thought sometimes and placed her hands on his hands'Friends


She said with broad smile..


Mayank too smiled'


I m Mayank Sharma'he introduce himself.


I m Nupur bhushan,,,,,Nupur too told him her name'


I know'Mayank said in low voice'


What???she said in shocking voice


I mean'very nice name'he trying to change the topic'Mayank control yourself'if she get to know about me'he thought'


Mayank what are you thinking'Nupur asked him as she saw him lost in his thoughts'.


Nothing'he replied with smile'.


Mayank'Samrat called him as he saw him standing with Nupur'


Samrat'where were you?'


you even did not attend lecture'Mayank asked him


You both know eachother already? Nupur asked as she was surprised to see them to talking with eachother frankly..


Yeah we know each other'Samrat said while putting his hand on Mayank's shoulder'


He is my childhood friend'my best friend..Samrat told her happily'


So dude where were you?Mayank asked him


Yaar I was in Principal office'he called me in his office..Samrat told him


But why he called you in his office?Nupur asked him impatiently


Nupur'I requested him to held valentine part in our college'.


Wow'valentine part'Nupur said excitedly'


What he replied'Nupur asked impatiently'Mayank could see excitement on her face'he smiled to see her happy

Firstly,he rejected my request,,,but after lots of arguments... he agreed '


Wow'Sam'Nupur hugged him in excitement'.


Sam smiled and hugged him back...Mayank was smiling at her childish behavior'she was looking more beautiful when she was smiling'he was admiring her beauty'he knew Samrat and Nupur are very good friend..

He respects their friendship'

Now its my resposibilities to complete the arrangements of the part...Samrat told them
we will help you ...both MayUr said in one voice..
they both surprised and looked at eachother...They smiled
yeah we will help with you to complete the arrangements of the party...dont worry...Mayank said samrat while putting his hand on his shoulder to give him assuranced..
Thanks yaar...Samrat replied..
kitna maza aye ga na party main...Nupur said excitedly while Mayank and Samrat looking at her with a smile was playing on their face,..
we will enjoy a lot...Samrat said
but sam there is one problem...Nupur said while making sad face..
what problem?Sam asked
Sam mera dance partner kaun ho ga...she said sadly...Sam tum mere dance partner bano ge..She asked him with pleading eyes...
Nupur...well i have lots of work to do..mujhe itna accha dance bhi nahi ata...tum aisa karo Mayank ko dance partener bana lo...he is very good dancer...he said while looking at him
Mayank...Nupur said in surprised...
She looked at Mayank...
as u wish Samrat...Party main main aur Nupur dace partener hoon ge...he said while smiling
Thanks Mayank...Nupur said while looking at him
no need to thanksss Nupur...its my pleasure to dance with the most beautiful girl of the world...Mayank said while looking into her eyes
Nupur blushed at her compliment...while Samrat noticed something change between them..
Nupur just wait and watch...i will give you a surprised in party...he thought and smiled

They talking for sometime then they went for next  lecture'.






After college'Nupur reached at home when she got a letter from her secret admirer'


She went straight to her room'and opened it'


Heyy sweetheart


I m angry with you'Nupur said while making sad face'


Thank you so much for accepting my gift and wearing it for me'


She smiled


You were looking beautiful in that dress'.


She closed her eyes as she felt'he whispered those words in her ears'she blushed and hit her head with her hands to think about her imagination,,,,


I know you are angry with me'


You right'I m angry at you'I searched you the whole college but you did not come to meet me'she complained


I promise we will meet very soon'just wait for my surprise'


Surprise'.she said excitedly..


Love you'.


Yours and only yours




Love you too'she closed her eyes'and whispered these words.




At night


Mayank was in his room, was lying on his bed'he was remembering his cute fight with Nupur,her beautiful face,her smile '.


He was smiling to think about her'.


Nupur I know you want to meet me soon'and I promise jaan we will meet very soon'

He thought and smiled'




Nupur came out of washroom after wearing her night dress'.she was standing in front of mirror, combing her hair when her thought went towards Mayank'


She smiled thinking about her fight with him'


She went towards her bad and lied down'she closed her eyes'and Mayank's face was flashing in front of her eyes'


His dimples,his smile,his cute face expression she smiled while thinking about him


Pagal hai'.she said while broad smile on her face'.


 here is next part...i hope u ll like it...plzzz do comments n press like tab if u like itEmbarrassed

Edited by maria-soniarti - 22 April 2011 at 2:52am

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.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 3:12am | IP Logged
wow!!!!! Maria awesome update, loved it very much.
but i have a complaint about all of MN ff writers,i.e. yaar tum log Mayank Nupur ke saath -saath hum bechare readers ko bhi bada tarsate hoLOLLOLLOLLOL
jaldi milao na un dono ko plz.Wink

thanks for the pm.

Edited by shubhie - 22 April 2011 at 3:16am

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hasiniangel Senior Member

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
nice update Smile

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priya_27_23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
omg awesome update jaldi mayur ko miladoTongue

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valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Awesome update...his compliments her blushBlushingEmbarrassed...breathtaking Mayur...the most adorable couple ever...with Nupur we all r waiting for the cont soon plsss...!!!

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