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mallikaBalu IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Dear gadhadada an edge of the seat story... from your first one you have made strides. Nice to see that. The way you put the weakness of the CID officers was interesting. But, one question gadhadada, if you are going to bring up the other's weakness at level 1 you have to keep on showing new things always and new things sometimes may not work. So go careful with new things.
Please don't make ACP cry so much...are level1 hai. Baaki keliye bhi royega? Idea was interesting.
Waiting for your story at second level.Please one week mat karo. Tension se baaki ka kaam adhure rehjayenge. rehem to karo.Smile

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
@gadhadada :Very nice story.... I read all your stories... but this plot was totally different....
I liked it a lot... had a real hectic day... Took a break from work in the afternoon and read your story ..  It brought back all the excitement in me to get back and finish my work 
gadhadada Coolbie
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
hey ALL....
specially NIMI, NEEME DII, NOTEPAD, MALLIKABALU, ASTONISH... and all.....
yaar mujhay YAQEEN he nahi aa raha kay AAP sub READERS ko meri STORY itni achi lagi.....
even i changed my OWN STYLE.... and its bit DIFFICULT...... but NEEME DII U was CORRECT.... the OUTPUT which i thought in my MIND ..... wil COME.... and its really calm my feel.....
its JUST a RELAX BUSTER!!!!!!!
my all EFFORTS n HARDWORKING...... really vanished after all URs APPRECIIATION.... PRAISE.... even STANDING AVAITION (from NOTEPAD)......
UFFFFFFFF...... i FELT myself at CLOUD NINE...... even MY 3 POST on FORUM and all GOT XTRA ORDINARY FEEDBACK n APPRECIATION....

BUNDLES, TONS, STACKS, LOADS, BUCKET, CARTONS of THANKS.... THANX.... THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
aadri- Goldie
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
@ Gadhadada - very well written Thumbs Up........ eagerly waiting for level 2.
gadhadada Coolbie
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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
THANK YOU very very much AADRIKA......
really.....
gadhadada Coolbie
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
hey PPL

yaar itna saara PASEENA....
my HEAD getting WET minute after minute
with ALL UR FEEDBACK.....


my SKIN TONE changing into
PALE.... with ALL URS EXPECTATION....


READERS EXPECTATION on XTRA HIGH ALTITUDE....

my nerves felt that PRESSURE which my CHARACTER had felt in those scary CHAMBERS....
lots of NERVOUSNESS.... TENSION....
QUERIES.... ANGER.... YAWN.... DISTRUBANCE.... HOPE!!!





there is a SMALL HUMBLE REQUEST.....
PLZ dunt EXPECT MORE......
really.... NOW ME SCARE n SHOCKED......Shocked
cz READERS FEEDBACK  (as in FORUM POST or PM) tensed me......
bhae... itni EXPECTATION HIGH na rakkhein.....
either i'll DIE.................Dead
plz yaar KUCH REHAM KARO.....
BACCHY KI JAAN PERWink
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


from:
WRITER!!!!

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LadyMeringue

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Hi GAdhada,

am new 2 dis forum & dis z my 1st post...
i've been a silent memba since quite a long tym bt read ol d stories of ol d members.

I must say dis story of urz is one of d best ones i've come accross!!!

really fascinating, thrilling, terrific, unbelievable, superb, gr8, awesome, stupendous, suspense-filled, seat-edged, remarkable, OMG story!! Clap
am damn impressed
n still speechless aftr sayin so mny things ;)

jus' waiting 4 u nxt part.......really dyeing 2 read further
keep it up! Tongue Tongue

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cid_duo

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
@gadhadada

hey yaar hats of uuuuuuClap

new member's ist post for uuuuuWinkWink

are yaar hamari nhi to chick16  ki request hi kbool kr lo...........
please post next level...
dear dere 's nothing to criticise....nd its extraordinary story....
or kitni feedback chahiye Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Edited by Shivani24 - 08 March 2011 at 6:56am

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