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Awesome update

Loved it

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

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Not again ROFL
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Me no clue when I will update this! My Internet just GN! My sister doing something to it!
So no clue when I will be able to!
I am from my phone!!!

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this also happened last timeUnhappy
but  it's ok IF IT'S GOOD ONLY jk (just kidding)  Smile
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part 11
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Life could't be more simple for geet as maan wouldn't stop asking his detective question. It startted to become his habit & his suspicion just grew day by day. Geet have done everything as possible to make him believe she is married & belongs to someone els.

It was a typical day in the office. A late finish again. 

Maan- let me drop you home today. Its too late for a taxy.

Geet nodes. She was tiared. She rather have his help...

Geet nodes.
Maan looks at Geet now & then. Trying his best to start a conversation.
Maan- how long you have been in deli?
Geet- since I startted this job.
Maan- do you have any other relatives except yours?
Geet- no!
Maan- you looking very upset now days! May I ask why?
Geet- umm...
Maan- oh!!
Geet- nothing. Just house work. Then office. It's too much sometime.
Maan nodes & spines the car. He wasn't sure where geet lives. He was trying to remember geets adress in her application form.
Geet- if you turn left now!
Maan- oh! Alright. The house looked familiar. Very familiar.
Maan- umm!
Geet- Vicky let us stay here. It's your flat I think.
Maan- right. That's why it looks so familiar.
Geet smiles sadly & walks off. Maan could see a dark male figure looking down from the balcony. Robindro he thought. Then remembers what raji was saying a month back. He looks at Geet worriedly. He didn't want her to be in trouble because of him. How could he?
Maan- Geet!.... She turns round instantly..... Are you sure you will be alright?
Geet nodes.

Maan comes back to the house. Worried sick. That man could do anything. He wasn't right for Geet at all. He closes his eyes in frustration. What was he thinking? It's her life. She have every right to it.

Geet walks in. Shila & Vicky jumps.
Vicky- I am worried now. I think bro have seen me!
Geet- umm!
Vicky- I should go home now..... Before Vicky could say a word he rushes out.
Shila- I am in love with a scary cat.
Geet- don't blame him. He is weird.
Shila- you are correct. She tried to cheer up the atmosphere but Geet ended up crying again.

Next day... First thing in the morning. She had to see maans face.
Maan- in my cabine now!
Geet- yes sir! Maan noticed her eyes was all puffed up. He was about to start the meeting but couldn't concentrate at all.
Maan- Geet I want this.... Wait! Have you been crying?
Geet looks at him. His worrying sound- no sir.
Maan- your eyes.
Geet- it's perfectly fine.
Maan- but!
Geet- cam we just start the meeting. She snaps. He was so typical. Always have to ask unnesearry question.
Maan- we have to travel to London next week...... Geet caough.
Maan- I need your passport & everything els for your visa.... Geet coughs again.
Maan- just hand them to Adi. He will sault everything out.
Geet- I can't go. She screams.
Maan- why?
Geet- because I just can't! I have family.... She tried to think of some excuse. Was this man mad? Planning to kill me.
Maan- mrs Geet. If you haven't noticed. This is business. & I don't want any hassle.
Geet nodes. Really scared with his sudden outburst.

Soon as the meeting finished. Geet runs out. Walking up & down the office. "ulla ka patta! Moron! Idiot! Ugh! What does he think of him self. Oh god! Pappa ji!!!!! Please mujce bacalena!!!!" Geet calls Vicky. Who have no clue what to do now.
Vicky- say you don't have passport!!!
Geet- ok! But did he see my passport before?
Vicky- say you need to make a passport!
Geet- what if he suggest he will make one! & India embassy tells me I am not a citizen of India!!!! Geet was panicking.... Then he will bring my truth out! Then my idiot biological dad! Oh no! I can't risk that!
Vicky- chup! You thinking to much. Just calm down.
Geet hangs up- well he was no good.
She walks to maans offices. Maan looks at her worrying face.
Maan- yes mrs Geet?
Geet- sir! I have spoken to my husband. We can't go! I mean I!
Maan- what if I take you all!
Geet- NO!
Maan gives her a look for snapping again.
Geet- I mean! That's not a good idea! She smiles.
Maan- then what do you expect me to do!
Geet- I will get robindro to fix everything. I will see you soon! She hurries off. Maan left with a confusing face. Now he was certain something fissy about this girl & this trip. He will find everything out.

  part 12

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 12 April 2011 at 4:56pm

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