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THE LAST KISS - last part updated- page 9 (Page 9)

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Posted: 07 March 2011 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
OMG!!! It's so sad that the kiss was his first and last! There's so much suspense building up!! It's getting so good and I wonder what's next!!

You did a fantastic job!

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Hello All, I am ready with my last part, please read it at your own risks, because I know for sure that many people are going to come after me after reading this part, I just did my job as a writer to make it more intense and interesting, so please be nice to me. Wink

Sorry but I will take some more time to update my FF "Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam" as I was working on this short story. Please drop few lines of comments. Believe me guys, it was so hard to write this part for me as well, it is so hard to write this much of pain. So give me some credit for that. Believe me I wanted to stop while writing last part, as it was so so hard for me. 

I request one more thing , please read all parts in one go then you will understand the pain fully. 

Part 3 - LAST PART

The very next day Maan fainted and his brother Dev took him to the hospital, and there he came to know about the worst news of his life, like somebody had stabbed him in his heart, he just couldn't accept this harsh reality, a very strong man who had never cried in his life, who stood against all the struggle, couldn't stop his tears today when Doctor told him "you have acute Leukemia." Maan felt headaches and little fever lately but he ignored it considering that he was swamped with his work and it could result of his overwhelming work schedule. He jumped on his feet and asked desperately "When should we start treatment and when will it be cured?" Doctor looked down with sad face and told him "Sorry Maan, but this won't be cured; you have very few months left with you so make the best out of it." He couldn't move from the place, he got numb. Dev was waiting outside the room and he got anxious about what was going on inside the room. A quick flash of thought ran into his mind, what would happen to Geet now, he couldn't ruin her life, but he couldn't let go of his love, he wasn't able to grasp this fact, but he felt more pain for Geet, he knew that he would eventually accept this fact but Geet would never be able to deal with it. A painful shiver ran through his entire body, his Grandma wouldn't be able to handle either even though she had been a strong lady who singlehandedly handled Khurana Constructions business after her husband died in a car accident. Maan was losing his breath, with a lot of courage and doctor's help; he was able to settle down on his chair. He had to undergo certain tests in the coming week and his treatment had to start as soon as possible, he asked for some time to think about it and to absorb this reality. He saw the hourglass on doctor's table and he turned it upside-down like he was counting his life through the flow of sand in hourglass. His number of breaths could be same as number of sand grain left in that hourglass. He had to learn how to cop up with this fact.

He came out of room and Dev asked what happened but he couldn't gather courage to tell the truth. He didn't say anything and he left the hospital, he directly went to the same place where he was standing today, this ocean beach who had witnessed of his happiness and sadness, who had taught him how to smile when he saw Geet for the first time and then it reminded him his tears as he screamed at the ocean to let out his frustration about his life. In fact, he never liked beaches even though he grew up in California, but he could never forget the place where he saw Geet for the first time and because of Geet, this place held the special place in his heart. He brought Geet here so many times and whenever he felt gloomy, he had visited this place to feel light hence this place knew each story of his life. He knew that he couldn't spend his life with Geet anymore, the dreams they had seen together were smashed within a second. His scintillating life was covered under blanket of dark clouds.

After battle with himself, he eventually accepted the reality. After all he was a strong man but he knew that Geet wouldn't marry anyone if he'd die; but he wanted to see her in red sari with Mangal Sutra and Sindoor (Indian married woman signs) during his short life span, he knew it that it was the toughest task to convince Geet to marry someone else and he had to find that someone who could be the proper match for her, then suddenly an idea popped up in his mind as he knew that Dev had always loved her and Dev would be the only person who would understand her situation as it'd be difficult at the beginning of their relationship so Maan needed a person who'd stand for her and with her in any situations. Maan decided to ask for this favor to Dev. It'd be hard on Dev as he accepted Geet as his would be sister in law and when he finally overcame his love for Geet, Maan had to instigate that love again, so Maan knew it would be difficult but Maan had to do it, he wanted to see that Geet would be happy in her married life. It was his last desire before his breath would be snatched away. He wouldn't let angel take away his life before completing his last desire.

He walked up to Dev's room, generally he never did that, Dev was the one who walked up to his elder brother's room whenever needed, but for the first time he went up to Dev to talk to him, Dev got surprised to see Maan in his room as it never happened, Maan with a deep sigh asked to him, "Dev, I have never asked you anything, but I am asking my life biggest favor and you can't deny it." Dev was surprised by his brother's words, he continued to listen to him, "Dev, you have to love Geet again and you have to marry her because I have Leukemia and I don't have much time with me." Sky had fallen on Dev and he got numb, he wasn't able to utter a word, a shiver ran down through each nerve of his body, and tears rolled down to his cheeks and his skin became radiant. He quickly took steps towards Maan and hugged him tightly like he never wanted to let go of him from his arms, his only brother, who was his friend-philosopher and guide was going to die, no he couldn't accept it, he couldn't deal with it, with heavy heart, he spoke, 'No way bro, that's not going to happen, you can't have Leukemia, you are so young to have it and we will find the smartest doctor and we will get it treated."

"Dev, accept it, I wouldn't have believed it if Dr Spencer, the well known cancer specialist wouldn't have confirmed it." Maan said while letting go of a deep sigh, like his throat was hurting. It took some time for Dev to accept this reality of Maan's life but he didn't have any choice than accepting this harsh reality. He couldn't believe that his only brother who had helped him in each step of his life wouldn't be there in future to share his happy and sad moments. He still remember those days where he joined Martial Art course only because Maan insisted it and then he enjoyed it a lot and he won a Martial Art competition also. Maan was full of proud for Dev and he couldn't stop bragging about Dev. Dev took part in the competition only to make his brother proud.

"Bro, even though I accept this reality but I can't marry Geet, my would be sister in law and plus she would never agree with it."Dev said while letting go of tears from his eyes.

"Dev, you can't deny my last desire, I have never asked you to do anything, and this is the only thing I want from you."He said and left the room in anger.

Dev knew that it would be really hard on Geet and grandma so he left on Maan to inform them about it.

Meanwhile, Maan had started with his treatment but he denied staying at hospital as he wanted to spend hit last days with his family and business. He wanted to mark his name in business before death could welcome him. He knew that if he would ask to Geet to marry Dev because he couldn't be with him then she wouldn't agree with it. Hence he took promise from Dev that he wouldn't tell her ever. This was a secret mission. Dev eventually got ready to accommodate Maan's last desire with melancholy heart.

Maan started ignoring Geet, it was strange behavior for her especially after their engagement, Maan knew that he had less amount of time to deal with the entire situation so he was rude to Geet and he knew that it could be intolerable for her but still he had to hurt her, it was unbelievable that he had to hurt that person on the earth whom he loved the most.

Dev had always loved Geet and in college they had been good friends so Maan thought Geet would eventually like Dev.

Maan broke his engagement with Geet and he said those words which could hurt her the most.

He said, "Here is your engagement ring, take it because I don't love you anymore, you don't deserve me." Geet cried for a month, she became number, she stopped taking with anyone, her parents couldn't see her in this condition, Dev started coming down to her place to support her, eventually with a lot of efforts Geet settled down with the reality that Maan didn't love her. In her heart, Geet was sure that Maan loved her like anything and she knew that there must be some reason behind this crazy behavior of him. Her mind and heart told her two different things, her heart was still in favor of Maan but she had to move on with her mind direction as if there is no choice. Hence she decided to go ahead with the current path which was determined by Maan, she just floated in the river designed by Maan because she knew that she would never sink as long as Maan was there. In his hate also, she could sense his love and desire to see her happy. She tried to ask Maan about it many times but Maan never answered her anything.

After 3 months,

Maan continued his treatment regularly and so far only Dev knew what was going on. Maan's health was deteriorating by each passing day. Maan and Dev relationship became stronger and they developed different level of understanding for each other, Dev was on his side whenever he needed and he helped him as much as he could. He had built good friendship with Geet as he consoled her whenever she was hurt by Maan and Maan was happy by their friendship. It was very tough on him but he knew that he had to do it, for Geet.  Dev had been a very good companion for her lately. Maan wanted to see them get married as soon as possible, in his last few days of life.

One time who used to be handsome and muscular man, lost his charm, rather Leukemia abducted his charm and handsomeness. This disease took a toll on his body. He tried his level best to hide it from everyone, by showing his strong side to everyone. He was working hard towards his business, he had been working on getting the biggest deal in the history of Khurana Construction lately, but it was still in process.

Dev proposed to Geet finally, she was reluctant but with Grandma and her parents support, she said yes and she decided to go ahead with her new life even though she clearly told Dev that Maan was her first love and she might not be able to forget him ever and Dev had been always supportive with her any decision.

Their wedding happened yesterday, it was a big affair, and every big shot of city was invited for their wedding. Wedding happened with all the Indian traditional rituals. During wedding, Maan was peering at Geet while talking to other guests, when she was walking towards Dev, wearing red sari with golden jewelry, she looked like a gorgeous queen but there was one thing which hit Maan the most, that her eyes were didn't have the glow which she used to have, her rosy cheeks were little pale and her eyes had some tears in it which she was trying to hide and Maan knew it that she was still in love with him, on the other side, Dev was looking really handsome in his black Gucci suit and maroon shirt. Any girl could go flat on his elegant look today. His breathtaking personality could win hundreds of hearts. Maan avoided meeting Geet's gaze during the wedding and he decided not to come in between any of the rituals. Maan was glad that God gave him an opportunity to witness this beautiful moment and his last desire came true. His one part of heart was happy for Geet and her future and his other part of heart was sad that her name was intertwined with Dev forever instead of his name. He knew that Geet would take some time to accept Dev with full heart but she would eventually.

Midnight had already lapsed and morning was knocking at the door, with sunny sky and soft sunlight rays, the usual California summer morning, sea waves looked completely different under the sunlight, his entire life flashed in front of his eyes including Dev and Geet grand wedding affair. Dev and Geet went for a honeymoon to Paris.

After one month,

Everybody knew by this time about Maan's acute Leukemia as he was spending his last few hours in hospital, Geet was in heavy pain as she realized whatever Maan did was for her and her future. She remembered all the past time she spent with Maan and the only kiss they had. All the good times brought happy tears in her eyes.

 

Maan died in peace, and he left a letter to Geet.

"Geet, I was really glad to see you happy with Dev, that was my last desire I wanted to see you happy, and you and Dev made it happen, I am glad that God had given me a chance to love you,  you have been my only love, without you I wouldn't have experienced love, the years I spent with you is enough for this life, but I am sure in next life, God will listen to me and you will be with me as my wife and we will spend our life together. My last request to you is that you will never cry remembering me, if you want to remember me then remember the happy moments we cherished together so it will automatically bring smile on your face, have a wonderful married life with Dev."

Love,

Maan

After two months,

Dev was handling Khurana Constructions successfully and Maan dream came true, Khurana Constructions achieved the biggest deal in its history, the deal which Maan worked on.

After two years,

Dev and Geet had a son, they name him as Maan, Maan was still part of their life. Dev and Geet were enjoying their married life. When Geet saw her son for the first time, she saw the same deep ocean like eyes as Maan'e eyes, hence she decided to name him MAAN. 

Hai dil ko teri aarzoo
Par main tujhe na paa sakun
Hai dil ko teri justaju
Par main tujhe na paa sakun
Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa
Madno, mashuko, dilbaro, madno re

Hai dil ko teri aarzoo
Par main tujhe na paa sakun
Hai dil ko teri justaju
Par main tujhe na paa sakun
Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa
Madno, mashuko, dilbaro, madno re
Madno madno ..

Kayi khwaab dil tujhko le kar sajaaye
Par khauf yeh bhi kahin par sataaye
Ghar yeh bhi tootey toh phir hoga kya re
Mujhe raas aati hain khushiyaan kahan re
Kyon dil ko dukhana bewajah madno re
Kyon dil ko dukhana bewajah
Phir aansu bahana ik dafa
Phir aansu bahana ik dafa
Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa
Madhno, mashuko, dilbaro, madno re

Tu hi to har pal bandha hai
Lamhon ki inn zanjeeron mein
Tu hi to har dum raha hai
Khwaabon ki har taaberon mein
Tu hi to har din dikha hai
Dhundli ujli tasveeron mein
Tere hi to hai khusboo mujh mein haan madno re
Tere hi to hai khusboo mujh mein haan
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah
Bhi chus shab sa subah
Meelyth doshvai judaa
Bhi chus labh sa dua
Meelyth doshvai judaa
Madno, mashuko, dilbaro, madno re

Haan tera saaya to main hoon
Par sang tere na reh sakun
Haan iss safar me to main hoon
Par sang tere na ruk sakun
Main hoon shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Main hoon labh tu dua
Dono jud ke judaa
Madno, mashuko, dilbaro, madno re

Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B9EKumdY4EQ&feature=related

 Thanks for reading.

SEJAL   

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Edited by Asha2010 - 08 March 2011 at 2:27pm

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
I am literally crying now CryCryCry
Dis update was so tuching
Wen Maan found out about his disease the first fing dat struck in2 him was geet
Awww glad dat he got his last wish 2 see geet as a bride but sad dat she wasn't his
Yayy dis tym Maans bak but in the form ov her son
Luvd it
Thx 4 the PM


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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
nice one.. oh no maan died n dev- geet married.. luved maan's letter for geet.. nice ss..

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sejal read this SS in a go......omg he is so heart touching........CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry
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loved it n i dried while i read the update how can god be so merciless n maan so selfless

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